first i thank-you that u update at least once a day. Lord i just don't know how u do it. second this story is just one of the best AU i have ever read, but i have a feeling this is not going to be a happy ever after for Kagome/Sess,but i could live with a Kagome/Bank. third i have a sneak idea that Bank's is not really dead, yet. I thinik he maybe a guest of Sess. i know u can't tell me but beucase u update so often i will know soon . so in parting i will say again this is a great story and alway look forward to reading more each day and some times twice.
| Aww that's so sweet! And I really hope Sesshoumaru comes back to his senses... or get some MAJOR help.
| I love your characterizations in this story. They are so three-dimensional. Sango and Miroku are going to be together! And Miroku had been reflecting on changing his wicked ways long before she came on the scene. Perfect! And Bankotsu and Kagome would have a beautiful baby together... But Bank's body is missing. Hmmm...
| This story is written so well. It was almost painful to read some of the chapters because I have been there myself in a sense but that only goes to show what a wonderful writer you are. Please post again soon.
REDWOLF (Chapter 22) - Wed 29 Apr 2009
| My favorite story!
angela (Chapter 22) - Wed 29 Apr 2009
hi i have just read your story all the way through to the last chapter ou have up dated, and i must say that your story is one of the best ones i have read and i have read alot. so keep up the good work on that. i know this is a sesshomaru and kagome site, but it would be so much better if you found a way to get bankotsu back into the picture some how. I have to agree that they would make a really good couple expecially in a fanfic such as yours, but you are the writer and i will keep reading until the end with no complaints on my side if you choose to put sess and kag together. again thanks for the great fic and cant wait to read more.
Omg I swear...the last chapter made me cry so hard. I was barely seeing the screen because of that D:
But wow...this is surely a twist...I never reallly thought Banky would die ;-; I was wanting him to live ;-; but now I see...I wonder though how the hell Sesshomaru and Kagome are going to end up together....I wonder if Kagome is going to take her life again to be with bankotsu D:
Please continue <3
| Maybe in a world with demons in it, it is NOT ILLEGAL for a demon to kill someone who is having "sexual relations" with his mate... Maybe that's why the detective was being such a dick... Society, being used to demon's possessive natures, might consider it justifyable homicide or something...
Noacat (Chapter 22) - Wed 29 Apr 2009
I am so afraid for Kagome now. And I really hope she doesn't end up with Sess at the end of this. What he did... it went to far. There's no forgiving someone for doing something like that.
But I'm happy to see Sango's in the picture.
You know... Sesshoumaru seems a bit more like Naraku in this. *shivers*
Theores (Chapter 22) - Wed 29 Apr 2009
| .......Wow.. that was pretty much all I could say while reading this story. I am hoping that Sesshomaru turns out to be under a spell or going through some strange insecurity state at the moment. I really hope something good happens to Kagome also and that some how the 2 wind up together rather it be in living or dead world. Plz Plz Plz don't make Sesshomaru be some psycho lunatic. Also aside from that if Sessy is the lord of the West then isn't he kind-of within his rights to kill people he feels neccesary to get rid of in HIS lands? Srry just wondering about that...
Mistress (Chapter 22) - Wed 29 Apr 2009
| Is it wrong for me to wish for Sesshomaru and Kagome to end up together somehow in this story?
I know it's quite silly...after all he has done. It's just. I cant fathom them being apart but I've never wanted them to be more apart before in my whole like!
I love Sesshomaru...
and you've made me wish him dead.
for that I applaud you...
but for the sake of my fangirlness
PLEASEEEEEE PUT THEM BACK TOGETHER~~ MAKE MIRACLES! I KNOW YOU CAN!
Mistress.
I Have been reading your story since the 5th-ish chapter, I am sorry I didn't review sooner, but I wasn't sure what to think! I love this story though!! It is keeping me truly enthralled!!! I love the plot and the twists, and the emotion that goes with it!!! It's indescribable!!! I can't wait till you update!! Cause I know it's gonna be soon!! lol I've been staying up late just to see the next chapter!
I really do so hope that Sesshy becomes less of an asshole! Well I shall take my leave and wait paitently for the next chapter!!!
I.S!
Dang Sesshy....he needs anger management classes O.O
Chelsea H. (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Apr 2009
| I'm soooooooooooo pissed at sesshomaru!!!!!!!! This is a sess/kag fic though and I understand that they are supposed to be together but I beg you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont let Bankotsu die. He is just too good of a guy!!!! I cried. I freakin cried. Other than that gab sroty
moshyl (Chapter 21) - Tue 28 Apr 2009
| Please, please tell me Bankutso is still alive in some sort of dungeon. I am a fan of Sess/Kag and all but in this particular story I want Kags to be with Bankutso so please save him. Maybe Sesshoumaru decided to take the almost dead body of Bankutso so that he can torture him, you know, the "I will make your death painful and slow" kind of thing. Or maybe Sess used tensaiga to revive Bankutso just so that he can inflict more pain on him.... please don't kill Bankutso. I nearly cried on these last two chapters so don't make Kags suffer anymore. Even if you dont intend to have a Kag/Bankutso sort of ending that is fine, just don't kill the poor man.
Thanks for the story, I wasn't sure if wanted to read it at the beginning because I hate flashbacks-present sort of cycles. They are complicated and it is just irritating when they switch views, flashbacks and whatnots more times than you swith lines on the highway. But you kept it simple and maintained the switches at a minimun which made the story run smoother. I have become a fan and I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
~Mo
OMG! Nooooooo Bankotsu! *Sob* Thats just too sad, i mean even though i expected it, its still sad to read!
But i did especially like the way you write this chapter, and i do believe that detective is gonna piss me off! How could he make her watch that, thats just cruel, however i do see how that flows with this story!
I can't believe how much Sesshomaru is being such an ass, why does he want her back? Just so he can punish her for something he's to blame for, after all he is the one that let her go! But i can't wait to see whats next!!!
I can not tell you enough how much i love your writting, you have the best imagination, and your eye for details is amazing! Keep up the good work!!!!
Noacat (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Apr 2009
God, this chapter was so heartbreaking. Poor Kagome. I'm so shocked that I don't even know what to write...
| OMG I don't think I've ever disliked Sesshoumaru more than I do at this moment. Can't the damn dog catch a clue and realize he messed up big time and let it go. I know she's hurt but I hope that instead of falling into a empty void that it has the opposit effect on her and causes her to fight back. That she goes into a major miko-bitch-fit to the point that even the mighty A-hole is affected. I believe it's mentioned that her powers don't affect him, but maybe with their distance for so long and the ultimate rage that she's goes into she can at least burn his ass, hey maybe even to the point that she can purify her mating mark. That it would make him feel as if she has died and her agony and rage be felt thru it and cause him some major f-en pain. AHHHHH I'm so mad at him. I can't see how this could possibly end with them together, but i guess not all stories of our favorite couple (well generally because i really liked Kags with Bank in this) can have a happy ending. For myself and all other Team Bank members, I hope that he's still alive. That Sess dragged him out and revives him with his sword with the idea of getting him to reveal where Kags is and allowing for someone to find him. Can't wait for the next update, no clue how i'm going to sleep now, i'm all a ball of energy and anxiousness now.
BTW, in case I have failed to mention, I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!! FANTASTIC AS ALWAYS.
| Oh my gosh, nooo, I can't believe Sesshoumaru was so crazed that he killed Bankotsu! It must be a mistake. He can't be dead! Sesshoumaru cannot be so stupid as to kill a man KNOWING that all establishments such as that would have security monitors on! Is there some law that makes his attack legal? That would be the only reason why he wouldn't care if he wwas being recorded OR that his Inu doesn't have that rational knowledge and he took over. This is far better than what you said it would be. Worth the wait? Heck, Yeah! And have you even seen how many have reviewed in the short time this has been out? Over 100! and over 22,000 reads! Girl, YOU ARE A SENSATIONAL WRITER!!!! I haven't seen that many reviews here on this site so quickly after being created. Good job! NO...GREAT JOB!!! JEN
| Wow, great job making Bank go out as a hero, even though I'm sad, it was a great chapter....
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