So I'm a huge Sessh/Kay fan, so had to skip ahead to see if this story ended with them or not. I'm sad to say it doesn't. I liked the overall plot, but lost interest as soon as Bank was going to be permanent. Also, i felt like I was reading a noir with the "angel" and "B" nicknames. (Not that is bad)
I do not understand how Kagome can be okay with another male to cheat on her again, so that was disappointing.
This story is really good, just not for me.
Kathy (Chapter 5) - Fri 24 Mar 2023
Apart from a few grammar issues, i really like this story. What I don't like is Kagome's stupidity. For one, once questions about her love life came up with he landlady, she should have shut down immediately. She should also had been concerned with the fact that the lady said she had other people who wanted to rent the place, yet she was willing to give Kagome a $100 discount? Come on.
Maybe i need to read more, but so far Kagome just seems stupid. Sesshomaru seems like an ass who is also a stalker. His motivations don't make sense. The things he does to and for Kagome don't add up with w.e plan he has. Maybe he's stupid too.
But I'll keep reading and hope it all comes together. I do like the story overall
Dedge (Chapter 1) - Fri 16 Jun 2017
I have to ask will there be a sequel to this? Possibly bring them back together, she is still mated to him so she is going to live as long as he correct? I love to see them reunite in so many years (50-100) you know bank is gone......all that jazz.
Love your writing!!!
Gee (Chapter 48) - Tue 17 May 2016
Dear author,
I just would like to say. I love this. I really do. While I do love fluff and occasional smut (lol oops), what I love reading the most is drama/angst. I love them but I can't say all were excellent. But this fic is. Heart-wrenching and full of emotions. I love it when the literature I read manages to pull enough reaction from my emotions and literally pain my heart. Don't worry, I'm still alive. Although I almost cried a few times in the office while reading. Hahahaha
Thank you for this wonderful piece!
Omg ! You have such a talent to convey so many emotion .. thank u so much for sharing
this story had me a little blue at the end. i was hoping for a reprieve for sesshy, but it didn't happen. i so loved this story. the plot was believable and i enjoyed every page of it. you are truly a talented writer. do i tell you i put you on my favorites list. i did. keep up the good writing.
Omgsh re read this story for the first time in a couple years, was so good I could not put it down! I was so torn because I love sesshomaru but I was so I love with your portrayal of bankostu as well. I like ending that there is still a possibility for sess in the end. So well written great work.
what do you mean "maybe they were not run out after all"? what do you mean "only time will tell"? did i read this wrong or something because...omg...this part just made my brain start working overtime. everything was being closed and resolved, but then THIS comes out?! im not mad. but im just having a bit of a spaz attack. i would LOVE for this pairing to happen in this story, but for all of these events to happen only to see that a future for kag/sess MIGHT be possible. augh.
the spaz is strong with this one.
*sigh* im all worked up now *pout* but i still loved it. this was the first fic ive read in which sesshoumaru is physically and mentally ill. its original (at least ive never read one like this) and i loved all of it. especially adding the kagome/bankotsu pairing to it. i would re-read this story again in the future if my computer doesn't explode from the hours i spend on it reading fanfiction everyday. love this and many of your other works. so please never stop writing (whether theyre fanfics or your own original work)
Love the story, shed some tears :)) was hoping for a love reconciliation between kagome and sesshoumaru :'( but still it's a great story.
Pricila (Chapter 48) - Mon 14 Jan 2013
This was great, seriously. I was up till 4am reading it ango till got up at 7am and rushed to clean the house so that I cld hopefully finish it today! You did a great job!
Angiux (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 Nov 2012
Like all your other stories, I applaud your vision and style. I must admit I was weary of this story at first, but as I kept reading (bc I cannot stop my curiosity) I must say I loved every minute of it. i know everyone wants a sequel, but I must say the story is perfect the way you left it. Sesshoumaru is better and Kagome is happy with B, I think its percet the way you left it.
*sequel sequel sequel sequel. .
hahahha. .
the story was interestinq but i would have loved it more if they still ended up toqether. .
I qet the story and the morals behind it, but . .
aww .cmon, its sessho. . :'(
but conqrat!another fic, job well done:)*
terryanna (Chapter 48) - Fri 07 Oct 2011
I seem to be typing this alot but I like your story. A bit harsh but well thought out especially since Kaede's vision did not come true. I love the developement of the characters and I seriously think that you have a future in writing but you made one grammatical error that was constant. Sesshomarus'-Sesshomaru's. Anyone's name that those not end in s and you need too show possessiveness is spelt with 's. That's the amin thing I found wrong but other than that very good story, especially since they ended on good terms and Sesshomaru was no longer too proud to admit he had a problem and realized the result of his mistreatment of Kagome.
aya (Chapter 48) - Thu 23 Jun 2011
I just wanted to say thank you for writing a story that pull at my heart strings. I loved it.
fanoffiction247 (Chapter 48) - Tue 29 Mar 2011
I've re read this story several times. And I still end up hating Sess as much every time, but I always come to forgive him at the end. I know not all stories end with them together, but I can't deny I would really love to see a continuation to this, as it hints at the end. Keepin my fingers crossed.
You never cease to amaze me! This story is bloody fantastic, not to mention it has the most ORIGINAL plot I have ever read. You are and will always be a breath of fresh air in a polluted area full of cliches. Where do you get your ideas is beyond me...Usually I can predict to a certain degree what is going to happen, but in this story...I didn't stand a chance :p
I love the fact that you always pay so much attention to every little detail especially regarding Sesshoumaru's condition. You make it so real.
You are such a wonderfull writer. You make me feel every single emotion Kagome or Sesshoumaru experienced. I cried several times in this story but the scene that touched me so, so much that is by far the last one...
"There was one promise the ' villain ' of the story did manage to not break to the heroine."
She gazed into his eyes , " Which one would that be ?"
" The one where he promised to love her forever."
YOU ARE AWESOME!(not that you don't know that already!)
I like this story so far, but I just wanted to say that the 'implied' rape in this chapter is much more than implied, it is vivid and Kagome even calls it rape. If you really want to warn your readers then you should take out the implied from your author's note.
Since I love the pairing of sess/kag I can't say that I really liked this story. On the other hand I can say that I did not dislike it either.
WOW! I finally read it all. (It took me three days)
That had more twists than a pack of twizzlers! I loved how everything connected. It was definately a emotional roller coaster. I near cried when I thought Bank was dead. I like how you ended the story. Awesome job!
hey i COMPLETLY...enjoyed it...it was wonderful..except for what sesshy did to her....
and as for his symptom it sounds alot like he was a skitz also...he sounded that whay to me...
anyways i completly enjoyed it and i hope there will be at least a lil sequel to see if they'll hook up in the future....hit me up on what u think.....LUV YAH :P
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