How could things go so wrong? I know he's manipulative, but he seems to care about her at the beginning....
knifethrower (Chapter 4) - Sun 19 Apr 2009
Maybe he caught a special "demon" strain of disease, screwing around with some nasty demoness...
knifethrower (Chapter 4) - Sun 19 Apr 2009
Eek! Sess has a STD! He's being such a s***, I love it! I know from the flashbacks that he starts out as a manipulative control freak, but I wonder what it was that made him throw Kagome out with no place to go? I can't wait to find out, you're the best at pushing the characters to total emotional overload!!!
| How can Sesshomaru get an STD if he's a demon? Demons are immune to most ailments that humans suffer...and he's such an ass >.<
But great story nonetheless...I'd like to see Kagome becoming strong and showing Sesshy what he lost
marquisha (Chapter 5) - Sun 19 Apr 2009
| Man!! this story is so great!!!!! I can't wait for more!!
Lauren (Chapter 3) - Sun 19 Apr 2009
| I love love love LOVE this story. They way you portray sesshoumaru is amazing! Update soon
Lol Sesshy has stds :x
Well isn't he demon...like doesn't that kinda have him immune to that...?
It's such an amazing story i cant wait to see the next one! Sesshomaru is such a manipulator D:
poor kaggy.
Pleasecontinue <333 I love how your updating so fast :D
Surreal (Chapter 3) - Sun 19 Apr 2009
| Oh my GAWD!!!! Awesome, as always...
I can't wait for Chapter 4...
please update soon
:)
| Ok, for once I am speechless! You can make us love him AND hate him...You are GOOD!! JEN
What an ass...but please continue. Dude that is scary but she should work it out and show him she's an independent woman and like date other guys to piss him off... XD; NOW THAT would be interesting.
PLEASE CONTINUE :D
| your story is good, but bad. i like it, but i don't. i don't like how you're making sesshoumaru out to be such an ass. why did you make him this way?
marquisha (Chapter 3) - Sat 18 Apr 2009
| I can't wait to see what will happen next in the story!!!!!!!! Please update!!
| PS- the phrase "hurts so good" comes to mind....
| OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!! Another great chapter! Things are coming down on Kagome's head so quickly, good thing the poor girl had some suspicions ahead of time. Still, kicking her out with no money and no where to go is really cold! The storage locker detail was excellent thinking (on your part as an author, not that evil Sess'!) I love this story so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
katlady (Chapter 2) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
really good please update soon
L-desu (Chapter 2) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
| very promising fic so far. can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.
Oh wow this story is extremely interesting! I really want to read more into . I just hope that it'll work out in the distant future XD between them.
Please continue I really love this :D
| You know, even though he is "trying" to be in control and inconspicuous, his whole demeanor screams "Be afraid, very afraid". He needs to loosen up more if he really wants to lull her into a sense of safety. JEN
| Ahh, the suspense is killing me. That chapter was a tease! Excellent, excellent writing. Tight, logical, it flowed well, yet very evocative and full of forboding...
| I am blown away by this first chapter! It is amazing! I love the use of flashbacks. Sometimes they can be confusing and distracting, but you have handled them so skillfully, the story still flows smoothly. The way you have used them to juxtapose her optimism when she first met Sesshomaru with the foreboding thoughts she was having in the doctors office, which leaves us wondering exactly WHY she is there, and her paranoia about the women in the waiting room, is very intense yet still rings very true and not at all melodramatic. I still have chills as I type this review. It is an added bonus that you are so awesome about updating- I know that I will get my next fix soon!!! This is going to be my favorite fic ever, as well as your best story ever. I love the way this is going, please keep up the amazing work!
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