| Another great chapter! I am so glad that Kagome is moving on and Sesshoumaru is still descending in his downward spiral. Hee-Hee!
I also like how Miroku and Bankotsu are both in her life, especially with the hardships that she went through. The love interest with Bank and Kagome was also great!
I so cannot wait until Sesshoumaru finds out just how much she moved on. I am curious though, after reading ch 12, what Kagome did that led him down the path that ended where they are at now. Sounds like he misinterpreted a situation with Kagome and another guy or the similarities between Kagome and Izayoi (I believe that's who she was) was too much for him to handle.
I also want to thank you for the quick updates. I know that is not the norm but I do appreciate reading a new chapter from you. Looking forward to the next one! Your Fan, Sesshoumaru's Lady
| Oohhh, I'm so curious. Why did he start hating Kagome? I know you have a big plan, and I can't wait until the secret is revealed! Awesome, suspensful chapter!
Dani (Chapter 13) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
| I sooooo knew that Sess was going to walk in the club - glad I was wrong. Thank the gods for Kaede because that would have been a big problem, huh. Of course I enjoyed these last two chapters as well, so I look forward to the next ones!
Noacat (Chapter 13) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
YAY! More good times for Kagome, more suffering for Sessh. I'd like his ass to see her with some beautiful children, courtesy of Bankotsu! That'd learn him.
BennaBear (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
| woot for two chapters!
Kagome is finally getting back to what she used to be! Yay! And Sesshomaru suffering hehe he got what he deserved!
Though I am very curious to know what it is that made him mad to the point where he had to treat her so cruel.
I really like how you brough Miroku into the story, and I'm guessing Sango will be comming into the picture next? Perhaps she will be a new hired employee since Miroku expanded his club?
| wow this chapter was really good!!! dak but good ps sess is still a a-hole!!!
Noacat (Chapter 12) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
AHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA! SUFFER, SESSHOUMARU, SUFFER!!! Honestly, I hope you make it even worse for him.
REDWOLF (Chapter 11) - Wed 22 Apr 2009
| You know, I actually check this site everyday just to see if you have updated this story. I would recommend this fic to everyone!! Great Job!
OMG..i cannot wait to read chapter 12...this story is so amazing...
very please update soon cause i really want to know if yoshi risks to tell sesshoumaru about his suspicion regarding sakura/kagome
....very pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soooooooooooooooooooooooon XD
| Wow, that was some chapter! I love the way you have portrayed Miroku. And things are starting to come together and make sense... Please make this a long, long story.
| Wow, that office scene hurt. But he couldn't just let her go then and there, and minimze the damage to her heart. He had to lead her on over and over, didn't he. Jerk.
| Guest starring: Miroku! He'd make a great strip club owner. You really had me going, I thought she was going to be a stripper...
Aah!!! Is is he going to find her? Or is Miroku going to be able to keep her hidden? Is that Yoshi guy going to say something anyway? What is going to happen?....?....?....?
So many questions, and i can't wait to find out the answers!!
Thanx 4 updating!!!!!
| I bet she thought it was really over. I mean, she hadn't heard from him and it wasn't as if she were really hiding. She just had to learn to live again without him and it going pretty good for awhile. What I can't seem to get out of my head is that Sesshoumaru thinks Kagome may retaliate. Why would this bother him if he's that powerful? He should know her better than that.If she wanted revenge she would have done so way before this. I think that STD is affecting his brain. JEN
| Oh. Snap.
Dani (Chapter 11) - Wed 22 Apr 2009
| Uh oh, the cat is almost out of the bag. I hope that Yoshi (or whatever) doesn't say anything because he isn't sure. I really hope that Miroku can keep Kagome safe and I really really hope that Sess doesn't decide to pay Serenity a visit. Oh, the possibilities! Yay for more chapters and of course great job!
OMg wow XD; Lol that's nice I loved his reaction hes all
WHATWHATWHAT?! *SCREECH*
XD;
Please continue <3 I cant stop reading this fic it's one of those amazing fanfics that keep you on edge wondering what else will happen. I half expect Sesshomaru to just venture there just to see.
And wow you actually made it so a guy who knows sesshomaru found out about her O: How was her mark hidden? Did she use a spell? O:
First 2 Chapters: Thought "Ok, most real life couples go trough some tough stages..." so I could deal with the fact that Sesshoumaru cheated
Then came de Fourth Chap, I believe, when he threw her out, then I thought "What a Fucking Bastard, hope he have AIDs or some horrible STD and suffers!!!" (And let me tell you, I really Love Sesshoumaru, but your way of portraying him it's so real, I really HATE HIM on this fic)
Then I kept reading, Chapters 7 to 9 made me rethink my position on Sesshoumaru, "Maybe she (meaning you, I assume you are a She) has this really gooood explanation as to why Sesshoumaru is being such a jerk" like when you started his flashback to the human princess and their fallout (good twist by the way, being she Isayoi and all....), so I was ready to open my mind and not hate him so much but on came Chapter 10, I could bypass his view on hanyos before Kagome, but for him to despise so much a Hanyo after mating a Human, nah!!!! No way jose!!! Asshole!!! Soo I was closing up on him again, and it didn't end there noooo..... the office scene, really you made me gasp (not nice, cause I was on my office and my partner asked me "what's the matter" my fastest answer "no-nothing, haha...." not good being caught up reading fan fiction when I’m suppose to work) And I'm back again on my faze "Hating Sesshouamru - Hoping Naraku comes along and whisks Kagome Away", to this I explain, normally I love Sess and Despise Naraku, So Me saying I hope Naraku and Kagome end up together (in a Sess-Kags site) says how much I Hate Sesshoumaru on this Fics (but still love the fic per say, don't get that wrong), so trough all this "review - personal catharsis" I was trying to compliment you on your writing, I can really feel for the characters, hope you finish this story (aside....asking for "wrong number" love it!! Where is it????) No more to say for the time being...gotta get back to work, congrats!!!
| OMG I would have left him right then and there. Ur making it real easy to hate Sesshomaru!!!
| I really want to kick his ass right now! How could he do that to her?? But my question still remains....WHY DID HE KICK HER OUT???? I'm dying to know!
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