Reviews for Broken Promises by Oroyukae

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GQ (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009

I am totally inlove with this fanfic! At first I wasn't sure but the more I read the more I can't wait to read it. Keep doing it girl!


Starlyte (Chapter 38) - Sat 09 May 2009

No fair, he already knew about her pregnancy! So we missed out on all the major fireworks i was expecting with that revelation! But then in saying that, i do like the way you brought it out into the open here, its still believable!

Thanks again for a wonderful chapter!!!


SakuraDreamHeart (Chapter 36) - Sat 09 May 2009

Oh wow after all these chapters...this is getting better and better. I love how you actually put loads of research into this. I also love how you wound it up together nicely. Please continue <3


Tana_san (Chapter 38) - Sat 09 May 2009
Wow, excellent chapter. I had figured he would at some point "know" of her pregnancy when his head started to clear. He is bonded to her like no other bond. Even Bankotsu will never be as "one" with her. You are doing such an excellent job of coordinating all the events from his past and present along with the illness he himself unknowingly caused. It's all just sooo believable. You've done marvelous job. This fic (as well as all your fics) are amongst my very favorites. JEN

WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009

I have to say that this was a very well done chappie. It was both tastefully done and the reasons for his condition was realistic enough for me. I wonder how he'll react to finding out that Kagome is pregnant? I look forward to what Sess has to say to Kagome. Keep up the awesome work and update soon :P


Noacat (Chapter 38) - Fri 08 May 2009

You continue to surprise me. This chapter was in a word: Beautiful. I am sitting here writing this with tears in my eyes. Brava. If this were a play, I'd give you a standing ovation.


REDWOLF (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009
I am just wondering what will Sesshoumaru do when he has to face the pregnant Kagome or her child by another man? Interesting indeed.

Koishii_Beloved (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009
Yay! Sesshoumaru seems to be doing a lot better right now. No randomly beating his mate, yelling, you know, the stuff normal people DON'T want to go through XD I still love the story and enjoy reading every sentence! ^^

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009
I just thought of something, when Sess recovers from his illness and since he is still technically mated to Kags, does the mating bond stay with them forever or will he break the connection between them? Will they go their separate ways? Although Bank is cute, respectful and totally in love with Kags; I just never can picture them together as a married couple. Just my thoughts *smiles*

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009
Like I said early on before, I thought I was not going to like this story because it did not have my favourite couple together but I must say you did an outstanding written piece of work on this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it very much. I'm glad that I stuck with the story and decided to read it after all. This should get an award for best angst and drama. You have my vote. *hugs and smiles*

knifethrower (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009
I am beyond impressed by how you hanled this chapter. It was perfect.

Tana_san (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009
Stands up and claps hands...BRAVO,BRAVO!!! I must admit that I was just floored at the final analysis. What a stroke of genius. I just knew that you couldn't give him something easy that his own defences would have fought off and wow, what a horrible illness to have to go through, especially when you don't know that you are actually ill. I honestly do hope that Sesshomaru will learn to accept InuYasha now that he knows how he stood by his side and handled everything he could for him....You know, I had a thought, has anyone else? What if InuYasha was his son and not his father's? Now that would be a real kick. Anyway, I am so very impressed with the outcome of Sesshoumaru's problem. You deserve an award for this fic. It's the first of it's kind. JEN

Starlyte (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009

Your authors note was well received, and i really appreciated the amount of work you and L C Rose must have put into this chapter!! I swear to me it all sounded believeable as anything, not that i have any medical expertise or anything but i thought it worked!!

Great work, i really enjoy this story and can't wait for the update!!


Elizabeth (Chapter 36) - Fri 08 May 2009

Aww.. now whenever I read about Sesshomaru.. it makes me want Kagome and Sess to end up being together.. but then I think of Bank.. aww so confusing! =P


Dani (Chapter 35) - Fri 08 May 2009
I am soooo sorry I haven't been leaving reviews! I read at work mostly and try not to linger. So since I am home I must let you know that I am still following this story. I can't wait to see what comes next, I never can. I am waiting to see if Sess is going to find out that she is pregnant. Will he think it is his or will he remember not being with her? Hopefully he won't be able to scent or sense it. More please, and as usual thanks for updating so quickly!

Texanlady (Chapter 35) - Fri 08 May 2009
Oroyukae, Hello. Very interesting story you've got here. Very unique. I love the way you opened it up at the clinic. I really like stories that begin in the middle but flash back to the past to catch the reader up to speed. One of the most interesting points of the story is the correlation between Kagome and Izayoi. I love the relationship you've built up there. Wonderful backgroud and foundation for drama. I wonder if you are using Kagome and her resemblance to Izayoi in Sesshoumaru's mind as a catalyst for him to face his relationship with Inuyasha. Based on the conversation Sessoumaru had with his doctor in this last chapter I would asssume so. To me it seems as if Kagome herself is what set off Sesshoumaru's change. You describe him as being cold and crueler in the beginning before he met Kagome. So to me it seems as if seeing her (as she reminds him so much of his princess whether subconsciously at the time or not) set about a change in him. He became warmer and kinder in response to her. Then once he had her his inborn frears of abandonment began to grow and he feared her hurting him emotionally as Izayoi did so he cheated on her. All he needed was a trigger to set off his mental problems completely and Inuyasha (who once could have been his son) provided that trigger. Very complex situation you've got here, and I can't wait to see how it plays out. Then you have the introduction of Ban. That surprised me greatly. The entire situation with him and his place in Kagome's life, especially coming in when she was so in need of love and support, really stumps me. I just don't see how Kagome will end back up with Sesshoumaru unless something drastic happens. Kagome really seems to have moved on completely despite lingering feelings that she should help Sesshoumaru. I'm anxious to see how you have them getting back together. Next, I appreciate your excellent grammar, dialogue and description. Well done. I enjoy when a person flushes a story out. I'm not very fond of cut and dry tales that leave me lacking on background information. So I appreciate that. Anyways, you probably think I'm long winded now so I'll wrap this up. I just want you to know that I am really appreciating your story and I eagerly await the next update. Sincerely, Texanlady

fluffy's mate (Chapter 35) - Thu 07 May 2009
I can say that I love love love this story. It is sooooooooo different form others that I have read. I would see this on the list and pass it up but i'm glad I didnt. I seriously stayed upp till 6 am reading this fic. and i think i started at like 130 am. This is amazing.

REDWOLF (Chapter 35) - Thu 07 May 2009
EWWW...I just knew that Sesshoumaru knew Inuyasha's mother first. Strange that his father was that low life! Good fic!

knifethrower (Chapter 35) - Thu 07 May 2009
It is not all about drama, it is also about understanding the reasons why individuals do the things they do. The gradual revealing of what drove Sess to mistreat and abandon Kagome is just so interesting...

Tana_san (Chapter 35) - Thu 07 May 2009
Now we're getting to the important information. I thought the love scene was so cute. I mean, how many times have any of us gotten so... invovled and forgotten to lock the door? JEN

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