Yay she finally had her baby!!
However, i am a big fan of Sesshomaru and Kagome as a couple, but through out this whole story Sesshomaru's just pissed me off and i wanted Kagome to end up living happily ever after with Bankotsu. But you know what, now that its happened im kinda sad that her and Sesshomaru are not together, but i'm still happy she's with Bankotsu!Aaaaahhhh!!
Its sooooooo damn fustrating, your story is just that good i can not make up my mind now!!Aaaaahhhh!!
But at least i know you havn't finished the story yet! So i can't wait for the next one!!!
tina (Chapter 40) - Tue 12 May 2009
wow that is all I can say I was beyond thrown for a loop through out the whole story , that is the mark of a fenominal story teller ,as for the last chap the way you explained her complications it almost sounds as if you where talking about preclampsia ( been there it sux major ) is that what you where going for ?
Lauren (Chapter 40) - Tue 12 May 2009
Im happy Kagome's ok but sad her and Sesshoumaru arent together
Possessed (Chapter 3) - Tue 12 May 2009
| LOLOLOL... LOVE Koga! He was just slimy enough... and his encounter with Sess was so fun to read!
I like how you switched gears with the phone call. The mood was suddenly confrontational, then you feel her fear of being homeless and alone...
Nicely done...
Possessed (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 May 2009
I found myself smiling at her embarrassment and shy demeanor. This little scene captured the nervousness of a first date well, and you included Jaken! I love him! He irritates Sesshoumaru so perfectly...
On to chapter 3!
Possessed (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 May 2009
I found myself smiling at her embarrassment and shy demeanor. This little scene captured the nervousness of a first date well, and you included Jaken! I love him! He irritates Sesshoumaru so perfectly...
On to chapter 3!
Lauren (Chapter 39) - Mon 11 May 2009
Oh my gosh, whats gonna happen next, Im kinda hoping that whatever happens makes Bankotsu leave so Kagome and Sesshoumaru can be together. (im a horrible person) Update asap!
| I am sitting here, fighting back tears. I feel so sorry for them!! Kagome and Bank cuz I just know that whatever happens won't be good. And for Sesshoumaru cuz after being such a jerk, he's doing something good for her. I won't lie, I am kinda bummed at the thought of them not being able to get together, but at the same time, I know that after what he did it just can't be. Update soon!
I have the strange feeling Kagome is going to have a miscarriage O.O
| When I was very young, my first husband informed me of a very serious disorder called TSB. TSB stands for Toxic S**** Buildup. A condition to be avoided diligently. I never knew he was actually telling the truth! Oh, the things one learns reading fanfiction!!!
Naila (Chapter 39) - Mon 11 May 2009
| Will Kagome and Sesshomaru end up together anyway? I mean, with the extended life span and all, bankotsu will get old and die?
Eliza (Chapter 39) - Mon 11 May 2009
Aw, goodness. Now, I really, as bad as this sounds, hopes something horrible happens that pushes Bank out of the picture so Kagome and Sesshomaru can be back together.. Lol.. =/
Oh please please please let Kagome and her baby be alright!! And i can't believe how well Sesshomaru's taking everything!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Finally! I'm glad everything is all out in the open. I'm soo happy that Sess has progressed enough to at least give Kagome the answers that she deserved to have. I wonder if Kagome and Bankotsu will all Sess to be a part of their child's life? I wonder if Kagome will get through her first pregnancy without much trouble? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Miss.Undo (Chapter 38) - Sat 09 May 2009
| i dont understand! arent they suppose to end up together? or in another life or after bank dieds?is something going to work out?
pauly (Chapter 38) - Sat 09 May 2009
Awesome job!!!!!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
| LOLOLOL... He is a clever sneaky dog... a bit underhanded as well! I enjoyed this chapter and will move onto the next.
You do a very nice job creating the imagery and your descriptions are detailed without being heavy. Good dialogue too!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 May 2009
| LOLOLOL... He is a clever sneaky dog... a bit underhanded as well! I enjoyed this chapter and will move onto the next.
You do a very nice job creating the imagery and your descriptions are detailed without being heavy. Good dialogue too!
| Wow, Flash, another chapter so soon? And such an excellent, pivotal one too! You are not only the Flash, but the Plot Master, as well!
| I'm thinking something bad is going to happen during this visit, but you always surprise me! How in the world do you manage to write so much good material, so quickly? You should change your name to FLASH!
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