Dear god... Mr. Caroll is delusional. This is SO a huge mistake. Then again, being Queen of the Dramatic Twist, you might do a U-turn and surprise me again.
There is no doubt about it, Sesshomaru was a complete ASS to Kagome!!!
However i gotta admit that seeing him go down hill like he is, and knowing that there is something actually wrong with him is sad, and weird. Because he's such a strong and powerful demon, seeing him like that's just strange! But i still say, i don't know wither his condition is enough reason for Kagome to forgive him!
But i soooooooo can't wait to see what happens when Kagome finally goes to see him! I can see the fireworks now! And hopefully she'll be able to find out what he did with Bankotsu's body!
I also can't wait to see what happens when he finally realises she's pregnant, and i know it says her mum was big when she was carrying her, but what if she has twins, that would be awesome!LOL
Love this story, absolutely love it! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| Things are coming together now. Sessh doesn't remember HE sent HER away. And he's having difficulty between his memories of her and his princess. I'm not surprised that they were able to get Kagome to see him though. She needs answers and this may be the only time she will be able to actually get him to sit still and talk without violence, seeing as he is restrained AND sedated. Plus , I think she wants to see if she can get him to say where Bankotsu is. I am so into trying to figure this out. I adore mysteries and this one is so fantastic. JEN
Ooooh i like that Sango and Miroku are getting together, they always make a good couple, no matter what story it is!!
Rocky (Chapter 27) - Sat 02 May 2009
| This is a great story. I do wonder if Kagome will get back with Sesshoumaru once she does find out it was an illness. Its kind of sad to find out that Sesshoumaru really does have an illness and needs help. Makes you feel kind of sorry for him because he can't remember what he said to Kagome or why he gotten rid of her. I really can't wait to see what happens next. This is getting very good. Sesshoumaru must not have been in his right mind if he thinks Kagome left him instead of him getting rid of her. I wonder how the meeting will go between them. I will be waiting for the next update. Great job on this story.
WoW Miroku and Sango got their groove on ;O XD; FINALLY :D They're a cute couple. Oh my gosh...SESSHY HAS GONE INSANE!? Is he really? D; I know you hinted at it but @~@!
Anyways please continue this is getting tense!
| I'm glad Sango and Miroku will be able to be happy in this story. As for Sess, I like the way you delved into his thought process at the end of the chapter. His reasoning, which fits right in with his alpha-male personality, is a perfect explanation for the off-kilter thought process of an abusive spouse. Great writing, once again!
Noacat (Chapter 26) - Sat 02 May 2009
WOW! I dub you Queen of the Dramatic Twist. This story has so many twists and turns. I don't know how it's all gonna work out. I figure it's going one way, but then it takes a quick turn and, and.... wow.
Anyway, let's hope they get Sessh on some meds. The fallout from all of this is going to be DRAMATIC -- in captial letters ten miles high.
mo (Chapter 26) - Sat 02 May 2009
| Uhm... so Bankotsu is really death....well, could you consider doing a spin off where Bank and Kags end up together?
I think the one in control right now is not Sesshou but his inner beast. Whatelse could explain his sick twisted mind. If so then I hope he rots in hell because nothing, no amount of explanation (whether he was nuts, possessed or what nots) nothing justifies all the crap he did. And no amount of goodness in this world should forgive that.
Selah (Chapter 25) - Fri 01 May 2009
| Wow. That was a heated one. Sess has a mental illness so thats why he did those things to her, yeah thats sad, but mental illness or not he needs to be punished for all that he did to her. Him being a demon only makes it worse because he can do more damage. Naraku got a bit mental in the series once he consumed all those demons. Sess in this fic makes Naraku in the series look like a nickle thief.
Anyways, good story. Can't wait for the next chapter
| InuYasha didn't tell Sesshoumaru he slept with Kagome? I'll bet that in his twisted state of mind Sessh figured that she did since they went so far as to have oral sex. I still wonder how this can turn into a happily ever after fic though because he hurt her deeply and to forgive is one thing but to forget is an entirely different matter. That alone would stop anyone from living with that person and as Inu said what will Sesshoumaru do when he finds out Kags is pregnant with another males child, even IF he didn't want to have children with her. But then again, you never said this was a happily ever after fic, did you? Either way, it's totally phenominal!!! I'm waiting on baited breath for the outcome. JEN
Jeeeez sesshy tortured her like that? Wow...Anyways please continue it's very interesting. Inuyasha is such an ass DX
Things just keep getting better!!!
Finally Inuyasha's been told what Sesshomaru did to her, even though he doesn't quite believe her yet, the thoughts there. And OMG Inu knows about her pregnancy so its only a matter of time before he tells his brother! Yip, and Sesshomaru is sooooooo gonna lose it!! But im intrigued now with the possiblity that Sesshomaru may have had a reason for being such an ass, but i gotta say, after everything he's done, its gotta be a DAMN good reason!!!
Thank you soooo much for updating this incredible story everyday! Its become my secret obession i swear, as soon as i finish work, i can't do anything once i get home until after i've checked for the lastest chapter! Its sooooo embarrassing!!LOL
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