That... was a very... MEAN... cliffy.... lol I really hope you get another chapter up quick!!! haha I love all of your stories... I think I have just about read all of them..
I love this story & it has become one of my most favorites. The only problem I find is that I really want Sessh to fall for Kagome & not treat her like a piece of ass & the fact that he treats every other female that way makes me wonder if he ever did decide he cared for her & wanted to have a serious relationship with her I don't think she'd believe him & would be to afraid that he was just going to use her as he's never been known to consider any female as more than a rut & then dump her. I must say you had me in a bit of a panic there with those 2 not talking & I'm relieved that they are friends again. I like their odd friendship & I do find that it makes me insane that he constantly refers to the importance of the grade he gets on the assignment that he is doing together with Kagome but he's never told her why it is important,he insists that he doesn't want her to know for some reason.
One thing that made me nuts is that as of now they are just friends & it appears that he'll never see her as more than a school buddy & at one point she was distracted for a week or so & when she finally got her nose back on the grindstone & started working her behind off Sessh was proud of her & as he had to go to a business social dinner & didn't want to have to deal with a drunk female/date that would be more interested in him so he chose to take Kagome as a friend since she'd been doing well with their class assignment & he felt for that, she deserved a reward and this was it. However, he was only willing to endure about one more hour, or less; she would not monopolize his entire night, for he too deserved some enjoyment as well. I found that his thinking of her in that way,that she was good for the business family dinner but she was not worthy enough for him for personal fun..to me it didn't seem like he was rewarding her but using her & then dumping her so he could go have fun once he dropped her off at home.
Then when he found out she'd been at the clinic & his first thought was that it was a lie & then when he saw her leave the clinic , he got upset thinking if she needed some sort of physical or sexual relief & went to some stranger & he was offended , the young demon wondered just why it was that Kagome had not chosen him to see to her needs; she should have known that, if approached correctly, he would have considered ridding her of any bothersome urges that might have her unable to complete their work. In fact, it offended the Daiyoukai immensely that the girl had sought outside resources rather than the one that had been right there within her grasp & if she'd gone to someone else then such rendered all of his plans for the future completely useless, for under these distasteful circumstances, they were no longer an option.
He mentioned some future plan he had concerning her more than once but it's killing me that you've never hinted what it was & it also bothers me that he allows his friends to refer to her as below standards which annoys me. I really like Kagome & It bugs me that in this story it makes it appear that she is considered as less appealing than a plain jane. Nobody,not Sessh,not other students,no one has ever commented that she is physically attractive in any way & when Sessh used her to prove his point that he could get any females attention or any female to find him attractive.............& he hurt her feelings & she went home & cried her eyes out...I felt like crying too. Thats why I hope their is more to her that nobody knows about & since it is just her & her mom is dead,I always try to make myself feel better thinking she has a secret identity that she may not even know about & maybe her mom had put her under a spell for her protection & maybe she's some rare, one of a kind,powerful being like a Miko/Inu Youkai & maybe only Sessh's dad or someone knows who she is but won't realize it until he sees it or hears her name or something.I just hope something happens or changes soon & she goes from being this sad, lonely,plain jane to someone special.
I look forward to the next chapter with hope for Kagome & happiness to come.
Doesn't it figure that some perverted idiot would think to go after Kagome when the news got around of their "breakup". Everyone naturally assumed they were sleeping together because, well, Sesshoumaru hasn't any female friends in his little group. I wonder just how many other females these guys have preyed upon and video taped after they were vunerable and hurting from being dumped by the guy they dated.
It a darn good thing Sesshoumaru had just happened to be there to overhear that David guy talking about his intentions to take advanage of Kagome and tape it for all his buddies to watch. Recording David standing there making the call was genius because she'd have no way to say he was lying about it to spoil her evening.
Even though their reunion was borderline argumentive, I'm glad they reached an agreement to accept each other's "regrets" over the whole arguement. Maybe Sessh did learn something from wha his father said and Kagome..., maybe she's learned alittle more about Sesshoumaru too...and the fact the he is an inu after all. Maybe Kagome needs to talk to InuPapa and learn alittle important facts on how to get along with her inu...youkai, that is. JEN
Oooo. I can't wait to see what happensssss! I hope there might be some romance soon??
LG (Chapter 11) - Sun 20 Mar 2011
Hey, an update!, actually 2, but what matters is that yougift us with 2 updates to this great story! I hate that David guy, he represents every opportunistic male aut there who is just looking for defenseless girls to add to this scratch post whitout caring for the repercussions to their hearts. I know this is just a story, but in the real world there are guys out there that are 10 times worse and can ruin a girl's life without a care in the world.
I wonder if it was someone else, it would have damaged the girl into believing that she could never trust another male inher life for fear of being used. Kagome doesn't seem to be affected that way and took this in stride, but i believe that after the joke that they originally played on her and then the disgusting way that David wanted to use her, any other girl would be weary of allowing any other guy near her.
I am just glad that Kagome and Seshomaru are back talking ro each other, and I wonder what will happen the next time they meet. I love this story, please update again soon! I am always looking to see if there is a new chapter and today I am double happy for the 2 chapters that you gave us! -LG
Yay!!!! A 2fer!!!
Loved them both :D
Can't Wait for more!
cyin (Chapter 11) - Sun 20 Mar 2011
loveeee ur story! i spent my entire sunday reading it (although i should be doing my essays)... please update soon!
Aw Damn!!! It appears that it is about to go down for real. Will Sess finally lose his cool this time with her?
Oh my god!! When I read this my jaw literally dropped. I don't think I've EVER read a story where Kagome drives Sesshoumaru away! Super awesome fantastic work! Looking forward to the next chapter.
geebus.. talk about an over reaction.
granted sesshoumaru needed to hear that the way he approached things was effed up.. but.. seriously? i think kagome needs some midol.
You never cease to amaze me! You are truly talented!
I can't wait for the next chapters! *wink*
lara (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Mar 2011
I love this story & after reading this chapter......I'm in a panic......did you really leave it with the 2 of them ending their friendship?.......For me who loves this story soo much,I've been hoping & praying that each next chap would bring these 2 closer together & then, with this fight they got in I was worried but,my mind attempting to stay positive & spinning with possibilities...anything that would cause Sessh to see her as more than human.
I so hoped that Kagome was the last of some sort of special being from a long line of rare special beings that his father or his family in general (being the most powerful of youkai-dai youkai) & by Sessh's dad figuring out who she was.
I was dying to know when Sessh said you obviously know the male form but your experience is lacking..I was hoping Kagome was still a virgin & that she's under a spell hiding her real appearance & that she'd change after mating .
When Sessh spoke to his dad I was hoping he'd have given his father more info on Kagome herself & that his father might start asking questions about her & her powers & what Sessh knew of her.I'd hoped that Kagomes mother was thought to be the last of her kind & the only way to save & protect who/what she is was by Sessh's grandpa & Kagome's grandparents attempting to arrange a permanent alliance or arranged marriage with the idea that nay pup/pups would be the most powerful beings ever conceived,saving Kagomes family line & strengthening Sessh's family was but Sessh's dad at the time was so upset that his dad had thought to agree to an arranged mating after Sesshs mom passed on, before hearing the whole story or giving the female a chance or even meeting,her he took off,knocked up & mated the first female he met.It was a very bad situation & Inu was born 6 months later & his mother ran away to her family & passed away.About a year later he found himself pulled towards a being or an aura & following a scent that had his beast crazed screaming 'Soul Mate' he then found a female,beaten & crying trying to escape a terrible situation,she told him she was to meet an Inu dai youkai,she was contacted & told he'd run away & when he was found they'd contact her.She was in hiding & had been cooped up,she opened her window for a few minutes & awoke to find herself drugged & chained down,face down,being raped repeatedly,as he was calming his beast,she'd said she find away to live & have a pup & give the pup every drop of her power & train her to hide herself,before he got his beast calm & came up with a plan she'd passed out & the next thing he knew he'd been knocked out.He woke,went home & his dad (Sessh's gramps) explained everything to him & told him that if she did have that child & any in their family found her he still had the promise letter between her families that would bind that child to them to care for & to protect,until a suitable mate could be found.He also explained to Sessh that if Kagomes mom got away & had the pup she'd give every drop of her power too.Kagome's mom would only 10-15 yrs in human form with only the ability to cast spells to protect Kagome as a human miko.
I'd been praying for ideas like secretive/hidden/important info regarding Kagome being a rare & powerful being that if mated to a powerful youkai would turn her into a rare miko youkai,or a miko youkai with shape changing abilities or etc(that only come about 1 in 1000 yrs & only in Kagome's family line as she's a miko youkai & only after mating willingly(Any other miko & youkai coupling produce only hanyou & the mom would lose her miko power) if the female was raped she could kill the youkai who raped her & /or choose to take a chance & produce a human child with the hope the youkai father would set her free giving her the opportunity to find a suitable mate to father a child & pass on her genes or not. I had even come up with some & only the mother could ...............
Oh I know someone going to be mad at me but I can't help it...I will really try to only leave short reviews from now on. I hope the writer understands that I love this story & the writing & I'm so overly eager to find out what'll happen next..that I can't keep my mind from coming up with ideas...Please if I've upset you in any way please contact me & I'll never leave any thought or ideas in reviews ever again...I in no way mean to offend anyone...I'm just a desperate reader looking for ways to get Sessh & Kagome together
hitnrungirl (Chapter 9) - Thu 17 Mar 2011
Yay! Finally Kags chewed that Mr. Know-it-all a knew one. Hopefully, this incident will help give Sess a new perspective on how friendship really works. I'm just a little worried that the institution's population will take advantage of this 'fall-out' between the two and make their own conclusions which most likely be that 'he got tired of the girl and finally dumped her and that it was about damn time too'. Her bullies will more than likely feel empowered to make her life a living nightmare -even more - now that they feel she no longer has Sess's protection. I'm sure he's partially right about Kags feeling regretfull later, but he really had it coming! A lot of the things she said were true. And he never did apologized -not that Kags really gave him a chance though, hee, hee.
I can't wait hear he's side of things! Well, if he can get past his stupid pride, that is.
Great work as usual!
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