Gee, Kagome really has a temper sometimes! At least Gary is locked up and she knows who sessh is now. I bet Rin will be happy, at least I hope!

I knew she was going to freak on him!  He should have been honest from the begining but I know why he did it.  Curious that she doesn't remember the gold he left for her...what happened to that?  Maybe it fell out of her hands when she reached the other side of the well and she never realized it?  Hmmmsss.  It's oing to be interesting for sure to see Rin's reaction though I think she's already figured it out too.  I hope today is a two chapter day!!!  Great work as always and Best Wishes!!!

Another excellent chapter!  I liked the way you portrayed the investigating officer questioning Kagome.  Too often, the police are portrayed as not a threat to the "good" characters- which is not always the case.  It made me angry, the way he was trying to railroad Kagome, just when she was feeling most vulnerable...

Oooh, I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru has planned for that disgusting piece of flesh.  The cops have all they need to put his ass away and to let the other prisoners have their way with him.  The argument between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was quite volatile and believable.  I'm just so glad that Kagome calmed down and that Sesshoumaru took down his concealment. Now, maybe they can come to an understanding.  Can't wait to see it.  ^_^  I wonder what happened to the purse of gold?  Maybe it's still in the well?  I hope so.

XD it went more smooth than i anticipated *lol*

i'm glad sesshoumaru was willing to tell her the truth about his first intention...of course kagome would be furious but gladly she already calmed down a little bit...now is sesshoumarus chance to tell her his view of the whole story and make her see that he really just wanted to do it right, so that they all could be secure in their feelings for one another, and their new lifes XD

cannot wait for the next chapter, hopefully tomorrow (i soso luuuuuuuuuv your update pattern XD )

keep up the great work

Ypu have got to finish this story. I can't wait for the next chapter

OMG this is the first time I'm actually able to review since I'm by a computer. I've been following this story with my phone.. ;-)

The whole issue with Gary like really sux...I just knew something was gonna happen....I'm glad Sess was there to stop it before anything worse could happen. I hope Kags finds it in herself to forgive because even though Sess did deceive them he had his reasons. 

I wonder how Rin will react to know Sess is back even though I have a feeling she already has a clue who Katsuro really is...

Sigh....can't wait for more.

And for this to just be something to kick start your writing......its really really awesome.

~Silver Silence 89

AGAIN  OMG OMG  OMG  OMG OMG OMG

YOU HAVE ME  IN TEARS OMG  that prick Gary  deserves  every thing that Sesshoumaru  throws at him find out

I wonder now  that  the  cvats out of the  backk what will happen next to  our favoret couple

ohhh  wait till Rin finds out

:HUGS:

oooooooo up date sooonn pleasee

Oh that makes sense since Kagome hit her head she can't remember the sachel of gold Sesshomaru gave her...... then who has it? Curiouser and curiouser... UPDATE SOON PLEASE ^-^

This chaper was crazy good. I had a feeling that Gary was a child molestar.

This one is another one for the favorites.

Looking forward to another chapter.

WooHoo!!! It's about time. I knew I was right! I swear, I read each chapter and then reviewed, I didn't read them together. It all just seemed to make sense.

Way to go, Sesshoumaru! He didn't even have to enter the room to know what went on and he knew to leave and not upset the scene of the crime any more than they did. NOBODY messes with HIS Rin!!! I loved the whole scene. Sooo Excellent! Poor, poor Kagome. I felt her fear and horror at trusting this man who proclaimed to love her and want to marry her and make them all a family... she was so unnerved and frightened that she vomited everything she had just ate. I'm surprised she was even able to do anything but cry.

Things like this are never easy to accept, but I do so hope she takes the time to understand that it WASN"T her fault in any way, shape, or form. These people are good at what they do, not to say that they don't leave a trail of evidence because most believe they'll never get caught and get overconfident, therefore making a mistake...which Sesshoumaru's inu nose was able to find.

I hope Kagome believes he his explaination for not telling her who he was from the start. I just know Rin will have no real problem. She has her Lord back in her life. He never forgot her andhe told her in the park that he didn't 'care for her, her LOVED her.

Great chapter, Lady O!!!   JEN

I think Gary was in her room and probably put cameras in there.  Sleeze ball

yes yes yes.....this is getting so good.  Take a hike gary!

Things are getting juicy....I can't wait to read more

Oh, how sad for Sesshoumaru. I can't help but feel sorry for him. I figured him to be the respectable type of guy who wouldn't want her to feel embarrassed for doing what they did and not remembering, especially since she's engaged.

I have a feeling that Gary was getting off from the smell of Rin's panties. Eww, how wrong is that? He's supposed to love Kagome and he's got this sick passion for her daughter? I also will bet that he's opening Rin's door and leaving it ajar so he can see her sleeping when he passes her room. I think even Rin is subconsciously feeling uncomfortable around Gary and it's not that she wants to give her mother and Gary time alone.

I think Sessh needs to step it up alittle. Maybe this next time he and Kagome get to talk he'll ask her over for some much needed stress relief from all the planning for the wedding...  JEN

Was Sess there in the park, or was he just getting close?

sweet! I can just picture Sess's face once he saw the photo.  I can't wait till he shows himself to Kags and Rin.

awww...i'm sooooooooo relieved that gary was arrested before he really got near rin >.<                               

i hope sesshoumaru gets the chance to explain himself to kagome...sure she will be agnry for sure (little spitfire XD )

but when sesshoumaru tells her that he did not want to confuse their lives by suddenly poofing out of nowhere, but integrating slowly into their life she might be a little calmer XD

i do know for sure that rin will bemore than just content, excited, unbeleavable happy XD

now sesshoumaru just has to tell kagome how he feels about her and that he isn't just back for rin :)

argh...i cannot wait...btw...sorry for not reviewing the last two chapters but i was away for fathers day X)

please update soon i cannot wait to read the next chapter

ah man dont go out with Gary...lol.  I want to know what the Avery kid said to Rin....guess i gotta keep reading. lol