Excellent use of sexual tension and exquisite pacing! You have a true gift for writing and I'm always happy to see an alert for you in my mailbox.
WOW! It's about time Kagome opens her eyes to the facts around her. Gary was a prick but Sesshoumaru...Well, Sesshoumaru would just be reclaiming his daughter and getting a wife as a bonus. Come on, Kagome! Don't let that freak mess up a good thing with the right man. You know what they say, (just paraphrasing) "If you love someone, let them go; if it was meant to be, they'll come back to you."
Keep up the amazing work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Sena (Chapter 15) - Tue 18 May 2010
YES! yesyesyesyesyes! Sessh is FINALLY getting through to our poor frazzled miko. I'm so excited, this was such a good update. <3
Lol, poor guy. Very cute ending for the last chapter, it gave me a laugh. Keep up the good work.
samu (Chapter 14) - Mon 17 May 2010
You know you´ve made Kagome really annoying in this fic? I can´t even count two positive traits about her only negative ones and I don´t understand why you made her so. I´m not talking about her not noticing what Gary was after but her bitchyness, her being spineless, her being oblivious, her getting uncomfortable and shy because she "slept" with Sesshoumaru (what is she, 12?) and her being generally a bitch to Sesshoumaru. She did not really love Gary but she always treated him well and with respect but she can´t do that with Sesshoumaru or Katsuro who she calls a friend? Sorry but this is not like Kagome.
XD awwww....look who's jelous XD
cannot wait for the little spitfire to explode on sesshoumaru XD
that's gonna be a hell of a *welcome home* for sesshoumaru, but maybe that will help to clear something between the...sesshou still needs to tell kagome that he has no interest to start a realtionship with anyone beside her, and that they already slept with one another, even though she cannot and does not want to remember it XD
XD eagerly awaiting the next chapter
I am guessing that Sesshoumaru is either setting up another office building, so he can work from both Japan and the US or he's having a home built and is seeing to it's work being done to specifications. OR he can be doing both so that they not only have a place to live but Kagome will have a place to work seeing as she was doing the same type of job when she was working with Gary.
Whatever it is, I'm sure that Kagome is going to jump to all kinds of conclusions since she not only has the stress of the trial and work but she's now hormonal on top of it all. This is probably a show of jealousy and will work in his favor if Sesshoumaru can handle his temper with Kagome throwing a tantrum.
I'm also wondering how Rin will react when they finally tell her but I can't seem to get her reaction out of my mind when he said her name like he always did when he wanted her to just do as she was told with no further discussion. She already told him he reminds her of her surrogate father and she's a smart girl... JEN
katlady (Chapter 14) - Sun 16 May 2010
aHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA
I KNOW WHY HE STAYED AWAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
OH YOUR ARE SOOO GOOD YOUR BAD
:HUGS:
i LOVE YOU i LOVE THIS UPDATE
now all that left is the trial rin find out and kagome and Sesshoumaru hooking up
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I CANT WAIT!!! what other little twist do you ave up your sleave i wonder?
Sena (Chapter 14) - Sun 16 May 2010
Aw, poor sessh. He's probably trying to do something nice for rin and Kags, or work. But Kagome is so...Kagome!
Thanks for the update! :D
Spennig (Chapter 14) - Sun 16 May 2010
::laughs:: Kags is so oblivious to her own feelings >_<
I'm really enjoying this, I can't wait to see what's next.
OHHHHH!! I soooo love this story. Please, please hurry with the next update. I have to know what happens. Goodness, do I love Sesshoumaru.
Spennig (Chapter 13) - Sun 16 May 2010
Poor Sessy. He's lived how long concealing himself but STILL doesn't get how humans work. ::facepalm:: Show the emotions so she knows you have a clue and let her see into you. Silly Youkai"
katlady (Chapter 13) - Sun 16 May 2010
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I LOVED that chapter
XD
:hugs:
if Kagome can gorgive inuyasha all thoses times in the past she'll forgiver sesshoumaru tooo
0.o i had to read this before going to bed so ingonore the typo's if there are any
Update soon
Wow, I wonder how Rin is going to react to finding out Katsuro is really Sesshomaru. I can picture it a number of ways- Rin is a very different girl, she might just accept it as one more event in a life full of strange and weird happenings, or she might have a typical "difficult adolescent" reaction, but I kind of doubt she will be too bad, unless she fears the same thing Kagome did, that Sesshomaru will take her away from Kagome or force her to be disloyal to the woman who has sacrificed so much to raise her. It will be interesting to find out...
Aaawwwww, he called her 'Koi'. *warm fuzzies* I wonder if she heard it. Can't wait to see what happens next because I'll bet you that, at the very least, Rin suspects that Katsuro is actually Sesshoumaru. Kagome really needs to give him the opportunity to explain himself. He was right that they would have a more difficult time coming to an understanding while she was exhausted. Can't wait to see what happens the next day.
Sena (Chapter 13) - Sun 16 May 2010
My gosh, Kagome is so stubborn! I hope she does not snub sessh now that she knows it is him. Great update! As always, I look forward to more. Your daily updates are really making me look forward to getting up in the morning!
The best lines, "I-I'm...hmmm...still angry with you", she muttered, "I know, he whispered, Sweet dreams, Koi." She allowed him to hold her. Somewhere inside her, she knows...
When tomorrow comes, will Rin tell him who he is? JEN
I don't know if anyone else has made this reference but you accidently put' Rin's mother was there too, sitting on the opposite side of Rin'... it should read, 'Kagome's mother.
Anyway, I know it's procedure to question Kagome to see if she knew Gary was doing any of this, but I kind of felt too that the detective was pouring it on too intensely, as if Kagome did in fact know. I was also worried about the evidence they might find and just the though that Gary had something revealing of Rin made me want to puke. Poor Baby, I just hope this doesn't have any real adverse effect on her.
I was expecting an all out yelling match when Kagome told him she knew it was him but this was a result of the evenings discovery about Gary. She wasn't in any mood to allow him to explain rationally and calmly. Kagome just kept reiterating the fact that she was Rin's rightful parent and he had no claim to her.
When she called him a liar, I just knew he'd lose his cool and put her in her place. This whole scene was quite that of a mother cat defending her kit. She was hissing loudly with claws ready to strike and Sesshoumaru wasn't much better in his defense. I thought the transformation back to him looking as she remembered him was sweet. An automatic peace and calm ocurred from just that one move. JEN
Spennig (Chapter 12) - Sat 15 May 2010
Poor Kags, so much to take in. I like the break point, I have this mental image of them right at the edge of softening, the angery and passion nd energy in the air, with the underlying feelings softening the edges.
:) I can't wait for more... well... ok I can. ::watches email for notification of more tasty writing::
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