ahahahahahah Poor Sesshoumaru being Embaressed by his beast but what can I say His beast wants his Bitch
Yay!! finally rin knows! i was waiting for that. Its good that she wasnt immediately okay with it
other wise would have been less believable
love the last bit of the chapter! so cute!
keep going!
OMFG!! NOW THAT WAS SOOO HOTTTTT!!! I so want Sesshoumaru like that. That was absolutely the hottest chapter I have read in awhile. More, please more!! Cannot wait for the next update. HURRY!!
I'm not very good at reviewing lemons. In fact, I rarely read them anymore. However, that was an excellent lemon. Loved it and especially the ending. It's really difficult to pull off an ending that doesn't flop. *two thumbs up* ^_^
This says it all, "God, he was so damned good at this he should be required to carry a license to fuck."
There's no doubt about it!!! JEN
janjan (Chapter 19) - Sat 22 May 2010
Woah man that Was intense!!!! yourr really quite good at lemons! haha
keep going can't wait till next chapter!
Sena (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
WHOA, that was a really steamy chapter! FINALLY! Hehe. Great update, everything was out of thier way for once!
O___O That has to be somewhere on the top ten list of best lemons. Very hot! Great job. I think I'm going to go read it again! I hope there will be more lemons in this story. And I really hope Rin discovers Sesshoumaru's identity in the next chapter~!!
joyouki (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
THAT WAS THE JUICIEST LEMON I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME! SWEET JESUS
katlady (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
:DROOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL:: OMG THATS HAWT
H-O-T HOT
yeah I'd remeber that too XD :blushes:
GREAT LEMON GREAT UPDATE
:blushes: need I say more
WOW
:hugs and Kisses:
WOW
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
Wooooo! Way to go Kagome, render that demon speechless XD What a great chapter to come home from work to.
Spennig (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
::giggle:: Kags 1 - Sess - 0
Silly Daiyokai. Yer woman wants you you don't say "NO"
I look forward to the morning after :)
Yohko (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
I LOVE this chapter. Real good... SO HOT... I want MORE... Update soon!
XD one thing's as sure as death and taxes...this room will need to be made soundproof...otherwise our little rin will need many many counceling sessions with a psychiatrist *lol* she may love both but it cannot be healthy to hear your parents getting wild every knight in this manner *lol*
next chapter: i vote for rin sneaking in, finding two utterly exhausted, cuddling people...exhausting as in not able to hold a spell anymore = yay my sesshoumaru-sama is still alive XD
keep up the great work
REDWOLF (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 May 2010
Woe...well done...great chapter!
And quoting from Sesshoumaru.....Holy F*&%!!!! One of your best lemons I think to date!!!! I like how Kagome seems to love and encourage all the dirty talk from him! That paragraph actually made me smile :)
Cant wait for your next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D
Best Chapter EVEERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, I need to go take a hot shower now! ... DAMN KAGOME for having Sesshomaru! Can I borrow him for just one night?
~Sandreline
Wow! Great Chapter.
uhoh :o i hope kagome really knows what she is doing to sesshoumaru...i'm sure she won't get much sleep this night when her resolve *to keep it slow* isn't as strong as steel XD
come on sesshou it's your chance!!! she can't escape *lol*
but as happy as i am about the progress the couple is making, i'm most excited about the moment rin will get's to know the whole truth...that her beloved sesshoumaru-sama did not came back as a reincarnation, but as the prototype *lol*
I honestly cannot believe that Gary's friends are still denying that Gary is a convicted child predator. There's proof of his deviancy on his computer and though it wasn't stated, I'm sure Rin was not the first.
I think Kagome is going to find out that all that filth Gary spewed to her at the trial was nothing when she and Sesshoumaru get home. If she was what Gary said, she wouldn't get Sesshoumaru so hot and bothered. He's not easily enticed by any female and she should know that.
She's going to have one heck of a revelation when Sesshoumaru is done with her! JEN
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