Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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The_Killing_Perfection (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Sep 2010

*Take's a deep breath

Okay, So I am about to dive my head right into one of your stories. I hope it's as tasteful as your other story I have read. I hope this is a fast paste story:)


;lsfkg;lsfdkgq (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Aug 2010

don't know what it is, but seriously can't read this...too much detail? like jesus BORING nothing is even happening


Mirokuschildbarer (Chapter 82) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

Omg i've never read a fic that was soo looooooong lol but i enjoyed every last minute of it seriously!!! I could imagine everything with all of the strong emotions being depicted it was like a movie. Especially since u kept me interested with the random spikes in action and suspense. I could barely stray away from the computer! Im a little sad that it had to come to an end but we all know that everything does. Definately adding this story to my all time favs and recommending it to people. Look out for my name on ur reviews cause i am def gonna read your other works and i am sure to love them as well. Thanks for the great read!!!!!!!!!!!


Sarah (Chapter 34) - Mon 19 Jul 2010

Im almost hesitant to keep reading just because I feel so horrible for them. Its eating away at me and I just want to yell at my laptop. But besides that, lol, it is a fantastic story! Im grateful that you have written this for our enjoyment!


alloverthisfic (Chapter 27) - Sat 17 Jul 2010

Reading this part was more than a little creepy considering where I am right now as I read this chapter.

"There she was lying there in the dark and he could see her as plain and clear as day. The girl was facing the window, her slender arm curled up and her hand under her cheek."

Maybe I shouldn't read so late in bed like this, but since I'm facing my window with my hand curled under my head to read from my laptop, this line really did scare me a bit...


alloverthisfic (Chapter 16) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

This is far too good...


alloverthisfic (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

Wonderful first chapter! Why didn't I find this story before?


bgbhnlk (Chapter 82) - Thu 08 Jul 2010

I am so sorry, my old account (Moonlight's.kiss) is kinda strange and will  not let me log in. that's why i didn't reply to your message but your welcome (: this epilogue was amazing though. completely and totally, I've enjoyed this story to it's fullest and i thank you for writing it!


Indigo_miko (Chapter 82) - Tue 06 Jul 2010

This is such a beautiful story. Thank you for taking the time to write, post, and finish it. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.


reveiwer (Chapter 30) - Sun 27 Jun 2010

WOW! OoO

Really explosive Smut there, i loved it. and i love how you made kagome say i love you to him, it made it hot and sweet all in one go.


reveiwer (Chapter 6) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Poor kagome. sesshomaru is a menie and inuyasha is so nice...for once.

and im glad this actually has a plt instead of senseless sex like some MA stories. althought a little smut would be nice. im just sayng. im definetly interested in this story


reveiwer (Chapter 2) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Kagome is awesom.


Reveiwer (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

that was really good


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 82) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

I enjoyed this story very much. I am sad that this, like all good things came to an end. I was totally absorbed in everything that is this fic, all the different emotions, all of it. Well done.


dayna (Chapter 82) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

Oh gosh what a wonderful way to end such a wonderful story. I am soooo glad that everything ended up working out for everyone in the pack even though they did lose a son. The children are great too I loved the way you described them. Working up trouble for everyone lol. I truely enjoyed reading this story from beginning to end and could really read it again. Great job!


Ashley (Chapter 82) - Tue 22 Jun 2010

I think this is one of the best fics I have ever read!!!! I was so sad to have it end and I would get mad when i had to stop reading to do things.. but this story.. just wow. It was like watching a movie and having it end exactly how you wanted it to end. The ideas, the plot, just everything was simply amazingly written and thought of greatly. Congrats on your talent in writing and I wish I could pen a piece so well written. Thank you for the amazing read and I shall be looking for more of your things to read!


Gabrielle (Chapter 12) - Tue 15 Jun 2010

I love, love, love your story so far! I'm only up to chapter 12 but... wow. The story is

beautifully crafted, detailed, and neither too fast nor too slow. I adore and honor how

you take your time with the story and not rush the pairing. It nerves me to see that some writers

will put the pair together without giving them substantial time to work though their

characters personality. You do a wonderful job portraying Kagome, Sesshomaru, and Inuyasha.

Well done! Also, you write very well.

-Gabrielle


Tana_san (Chapter 82) - Mon 07 Jun 2010

I bow respectfully to the authoress, who has more than deserved each and every award for such a magnificant story. I have to say that this is one of my most favorite fics that you've written because it had taken Sesshoumaru from being portrayed as wealthy and influencial to totally the opposite by having his species being hated and bound tobe subsurvient to humans.

This last chapter was so sweet. I liked how the boys were free to be normal children even though they still had to be aware of the restrictions that youkai were still under. Such a difficult thing for ones so young to have to understand. Akiro's thought to come and tell his parents the reason they took revenge on the new boy for teasing them would give them their tv and vidoe games back. That was so funny and so like a kid.

The love and affection Sesshoumaru showed Kagome was so romantic and sweet. There's a definite change in him since they first met. I'm glad InuYasha took his skill at fixing and building things and turned it into a business. I also loved the character of Sato the Shishi. He was a great asset to this fic and a character I wouldn't mind seeing again. Anyway, This was fantastic and again, thank you for all your time and imagination in all the writing you do. You give us more happiness and entertainment than you'll ever realise.  Love and hugs,  JEN


loveyaa (Chapter 82) - Sun 06 Jun 2010

I can't believe that its over. I enjoyed it from beginning to end and will look forward to more of your stories. I will def continue to look back at this one, but I may  just skip to my fav parts :) Thanks for the ride and keep them coming.


Firehauke (Chapter 82) - Sun 06 Jun 2010

Wonderful wrap to a wonderful story!  Eagerly awaiting a new one!


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