Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Tana_san (Chapter 75) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

Was Sesshoumaru nakked when he transformed back???

This was beyond excellent and it definately made sense that something of this magnetude would push him to transform to his youkai form. It was good to know that he was able to discern the men Miroku was with were the good guys. I liked hearing how he felt and what he thought while in that form. I also thought it amazing that after all the youkai that have been freed,  that Sesshoumaru is the first to achieve his true form.

You should pat yourself on the back, this chapter is phenominal. Now, on to the next one.  JEN


katlady (Chapter 76) - Mon 12 Apr 2010

;.;  OMG  POOR KAGOME  AND SESSHOUMARU!!!!

such a sad chapter  but  such a good  update  I wonder  how  Kagome will react to all this once  shes awake

 

okay you  know the  drill I demand   up date  poke you  and  you do so  right

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

right

 

 

ok  so UPDATE   again already :poke:

its  not  fair  to leave me on a cliffy

 


Sokai (Chapter 76) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

i love your story and you have me crying. please update soon


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 76) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

awwww, so sad hopefully they both will be ok...it will be interesting to see what Miroku has planned...

good job and update soon...


theunknownchild (Chapter 76) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

...NOT LIL BABY INU!

So sad...can't wait for the next update!


Snowfall (Chapter 76) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

*whimpers*  One of the babies died.  That's so sad.  Poor Sesshoumaru.  Kagome is going to have a really hard time when she wakes up.  I hope Sesshoumaru pulls himself together before then.  And, I feel so sorry for Miroku's and Sango's situation as well.   *sniffles*  I wanna kick that bastard supervisor's ass!  ^_^  Can't wait to see what Miroku has planned for the 'take down'.  ^_^


katlady (Chapter 75) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

0.o  OMG    again  with the  cliffy  no fair...

;.;

but  over all great  chapter 

:pokes:

Update

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Update Updater

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Update UpdaterUpdate UpdaterUpdate Updater

 

I demand it so  it shall be writen so it shall be  done :nods: Yep  that  shoudl do the  trick

 XD

 


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 75) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

wow...awesome chapter...i figured that he probably would get to use his true form...he was overcoming the band he wore so that is a kind of a given.  this chapter was done well...I hope Kagome is ok and Miroku and the others find them soon...

good job and update soon...


LM Bluejay (Chapter 75) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

COOOOOL!!!!! ^_^


Sokai (Chapter 75) - Sun 11 Apr 2010

its sad and i so feel so bad for sesshomaru. Pleasedo update soon!!!!!


Snowfall (Chapter 75) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

WooHoo!  Sesshoumaru took his canine form.  ^_^  *dances around.*  That was awesome!  He routed the enemy!  I bet he cleared the area out pretty quick.  I really feel sorry for him though.  He's helpless to save Kagome.  Hopefully, Miroku brought medics that might be able to help Kagome.  When I think about her being pregnant and hurt...I really want to kill the bastard that's responsible. 

Thanks so much for a transformed Sesshoumaru!  ^_^  Can't wait to see what you do next.  ^_^


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 75) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

That was AMAZING!!!!!

I was scared shitless outta my pants!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 74) - Sat 10 Apr 2010

AWESOME!!!!!!

 

I felt so sorry for poor shippo and kikyo. I hope sess doesn't hate them for it. :-( 

And for some reason i knew Sango would appear. But i see her actions more as her truly wanting to help he friend and love rather than trying to redeem herself for her past actions. Sigh....

 

Can't wait to see what happens.

 

~ Silver Silence 89


Kagome-Miko-207 (Chapter 2) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

Interesting story. Its creative and amusing. I cant wait to see their relationship blossom.


katlady (Chapter 74) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO FAIR!!!!!!

-.-;

I Seriously  hope you know  what you are doing to me

you had me  hooked since  chapter one...i am not one to  normaly leave comments  if its too good  for  words

and this by far has been too good  for  words...but  when you so dareingly leave me  at a  clife  hanger

I now  half to demand that you update in the  next hour

  Seruously

you  can not leave  me   or  many of your other  fans   jaw  droped  wondering  if Kagome is going to  Live or  die

she  has  Sesshoumarus  Pups  and you made him suffer

( brilinat  i might make a story like this  caus e then  weer  all waiting   and  anxious  for the next  chapter but  still)

I just hope you know  you made me  nomminate  you  for the up coming awards because if  this

-,-; :sighs:  

i  guess I just half to tell you from now on to up date sooner

oh well  it  gives me somethign to do  and  in so saying that

 

UP DATE NOW!! I DEMAND IT!!!

 

okay too much for a flaming up date ^^; But  I hope it made you laugh and inspired

 Please keep up the  good  work

looking  foward to you next chapter


LM Bluejay (Chapter 74) - Fri 09 Apr 2010

Excellent diagnosis doctor! O_o


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 74) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

...whoa... i just knew something bad was gonna happen when kikyou left, and even though it was obvious haha, i still pat myself on the back. but you, you deserve an applause! this story is awesome if i haven't already told you, update soon!


Tana_san (Chapter 74) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Oh my gosh!!!! Dang girl, YOU ARE GOOD!!!! These last chapters have been so thrilling, I didn't even want to leave a review after each one as I normally like to do. I am beyond impressed with your skills at creating such dramatic stories. I mean, REALLY, you've got the gift!!!

Congratulations on passing all your courses and I only wish I could tell your writing teacher where to go because you have a great talent. No teacher is a good teacher that makes a student feel they haven't the ability to learn or succeed. Writing for fanfiction is excellent practice, though many teachers believe otherwise. Don't ever give up and always know how gifted we feel you are and allow us to be your encouragement when the teacher and class gets rough.

I'd like to get more into detail about what I liked but honestly, IT WAS ALL SOOO GOOD!!! If you've had any writer's block, I sure couldn't tell. The thrill and suspense kept me glued to the screen even when Mother Nature called and screamed to be acknowledged! You just keep on, Lady O, I can't wait for more....JEN


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 74) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Holy crap, talk about a cliff-hanger!!!  Man, this chapter was intense.  I can't wait to find out what happens, Kagome and the pups just HAVE to be OK.  Whew.

 

Keep up the amazing work!


Starlyte (Chapter 73) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

Firstly let me just say, congratulations on passing all your classes, with good marks even!!! Very well done Oroyukae!!!

Secondly, don't ever let anyone make you doubt yourself with your writting talent! You are an unbelieveably talented writter! When i read your stories, i get so lost in the storyline, the characters, hell even the scenery that i can truly visualise things in my minds eye, THATS how good your writting is!!! I think every story you have written has ended up being one of my favourites, the other amazing thing i like about your stories are their always different from each other, not just the same plot line written differently, and thats just awesome!!! I always eagerly await your updates, and personally i would probably pay to read your work, and for me thats saying alot! LoL!!

Ok now thirdly, I loved this chapter!! It had action, which i thought you did a wonderful job with, and a bit of drama and even a little tenderness, especially when Sesshomaru and Kagome were reunited, that was so sweetly done and not overly dramatic!! Even Inuyasha got a bit of a staring role! OMG i soooo can't wait for the rest, hopefully Sesshomaru finally gets his hands on the idiot responsable for this! Eagerly awaiting the next one.....!


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