Interesting story. Its creative and amusing. I cant wait to see their relationship blossom.
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
NO FAIR!!!!!!
-.-;
I Seriously hope you know what you are doing to me
you had me hooked since chapter one...i am not one to normaly leave comments if its too good for words
and this by far has been too good for words...but when you so dareingly leave me at a clife hanger
I now half to demand that you update in the next hour
Seruously
you can not leave me or many of your other fans jaw droped wondering if Kagome is going to Live or die
she has Sesshoumarus Pups and you made him suffer
( brilinat i might make a story like this caus e then weer all waiting and anxious for the next chapter but still)
I just hope you know you made me nomminate you for the up coming awards because if this
-,-; :sighs:
i guess I just half to tell you from now on to up date sooner
oh well it gives me somethign to do and in so saying that
UP DATE NOW!! I DEMAND IT!!!
okay too much for a flaming up date ^^; But I hope it made you laugh and inspired
Please keep up the good work
looking foward to you next chapter
Excellent diagnosis doctor! O_o
...whoa... i just knew something bad was gonna happen when kikyou left, and even though it was obvious haha, i still pat myself on the back. but you, you deserve an applause! this story is awesome if i haven't already told you, update soon!
Oh my gosh!!!! Dang girl, YOU ARE GOOD!!!! These last chapters have been so thrilling, I didn't even want to leave a review after each one as I normally like to do. I am beyond impressed with your skills at creating such dramatic stories. I mean, REALLY, you've got the gift!!!
Congratulations on passing all your courses and I only wish I could tell your writing teacher where to go because you have a great talent. No teacher is a good teacher that makes a student feel they haven't the ability to learn or succeed. Writing for fanfiction is excellent practice, though many teachers believe otherwise. Don't ever give up and always know how gifted we feel you are and allow us to be your encouragement when the teacher and class gets rough.
I'd like to get more into detail about what I liked but honestly, IT WAS ALL SOOO GOOD!!! If you've had any writer's block, I sure couldn't tell. The thrill and suspense kept me glued to the screen even when Mother Nature called and screamed to be acknowledged! You just keep on, Lady O, I can't wait for more....JEN
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 74) - Thu 08 Apr 2010
Holy crap, talk about a cliff-hanger!!! Man, this chapter was intense. I can't wait to find out what happens, Kagome and the pups just HAVE to be OK. Whew.
Keep up the amazing work!
Firstly let me just say, congratulations on passing all your classes, with good marks even!!! Very well done Oroyukae!!!
Secondly, don't ever let anyone make you doubt yourself with your writting talent! You are an unbelieveably talented writter! When i read your stories, i get so lost in the storyline, the characters, hell even the scenery that i can truly visualise things in my minds eye, THATS how good your writting is!!! I think every story you have written has ended up being one of my favourites, the other amazing thing i like about your stories are their always different from each other, not just the same plot line written differently, and thats just awesome!!! I always eagerly await your updates, and personally i would probably pay to read your work, and for me thats saying alot! LoL!!
Ok now thirdly, I loved this chapter!! It had action, which i thought you did a wonderful job with, and a bit of drama and even a little tenderness, especially when Sesshomaru and Kagome were reunited, that was so sweetly done and not overly dramatic!! Even Inuyasha got a bit of a staring role! OMG i soooo can't wait for the rest, hopefully Sesshomaru finally gets his hands on the idiot responsable for this! Eagerly awaiting the next one.....!
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