Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Sokai (Chapter 73) - Thu 08 Apr 2010

oh i know this is going to be good please update soon!!!!!!!


Snowfall (Chapter 73) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Oh, they are doing so well.   I hope that everything turns out alright without anyone getting hurt.  It's so cool that Sess has come into so many of his powers.  I'm just waiting for him to transform!  ^_^  I feel really bad for Miroku, but damn is he good.  I'm so glad that he's organizing a 'rescue party' of sorts.  And, I love that they don't feel any guilt about killing the bad guys.  I wouldn't.  So, glad that Kagome is okay, too.  I was really worried about all of them.  Inuyasha's prowess is too cool.  ^_^  Can't wait to see what you do with Shippou.  ^_^  Your chapter gave me lots of smiley faces.  ^_^


Banana (Chapter 73) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

lol yasha logic ftw!


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 73) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Phew! I thought you were gonna kill of kikyou!! I thought you were gonna have inuyasha searching through the woods, think that she was an intruder, and have inuyasha kill her!! I was like nahh that it too cruel for anything!! Thank God you didn't. Anyway, great chapter, you should go at your own pace though, it's your story (: not that i'm not checking for an update daily but still. Update soon!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 73) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

Congratulations of passing your classes!!!!!  That's so awesome :DD 

And wonderful chapter too, it has a very anticipating feel to it, and rightly so!  I can't wait for the big battle royale, it's sure to be a good one.  Keep up the wonderful work and definitely pat yourself on the back ^_^

 


stars (Chapter 73) - Wed 07 Apr 2010

please updata soon


Sokai (Chapter 72) - Tue 06 Apr 2010

oooooooo so not cool. i hate cliff hangers, but there wouldn't be good stories without them. update soon.


Banana (Chapter 72) - Tue 06 Apr 2010

=0

 

I cant wait for you to update...


KAggie (Chapter 72) - Sat 03 Apr 2010

I've been reading this story for about 5 days straight and OMG! lol I love it! So many emotions evoked throughout your story. You've written it so well and keeping to the character's personas has been a challenge that you've overcame since the very beginning! Excellent, excellent work! I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters now. I hope Sesshoumaru kicks butt and I can't wait for InuYasha and  Kikyou to get together. :)


Neva (Chapter 72) - Fri 02 Apr 2010

omgomgomg

sooooo stressful! i love kagomes postive attitude, and that kiss with kikyo and yasha, woohoo! maybe this will convince her to really show how she feels :)


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 72) - Fri 02 Apr 2010

Oooo, I hope InuYasha's OK!  Man, there's so much going on, I can't wait to read what happens next XD 

Poor Sesshoumaru too, he knows something's wrong but no one will tell him!  See how caught up in this story I am?  LOL!  Keep up the fabulous work!


Eve (Chapter 72) - Fri 02 Apr 2010

OMG OMG!!!!! I am sitting on the edge of my seat!  PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE next chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Thank YOU!!!!!

 

Kiri Kyohaku  >^.^<


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 71) - Wed 31 Mar 2010

aaaaw, they're bonding! i love shippou in this, and god help Miroku and his face! great chapter and update soon!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 71) - Tue 30 Mar 2010

Oh man oh man oh man!  I hope the girls and Inuyasha kick some ass!  And go little Shippou!  I love the way you are writing him, he's so clever and smart and cute ^_^ 

Wondeful chapter m'dear!  Can't wait to read more :D


ceres (Chapter 71) - Tue 30 Mar 2010

Oh, the suspense is killing me. I want to know what you´ve planned and how everyone will react.


1CarinoInu (Chapter 71) - Tue 30 Mar 2010

Aha, I knew it was a diversion!  I knew there was more to Mikaru's trip than just picking up Sesshoumaru!


Banana (Chapter 22) - Tue 30 Mar 2010

awwww poor monk! Hes being such a sweetheart though!

 

 


Banana (Chapter 3) - Tue 30 Mar 2010

I am really enjoying this! It's very interesting. Thank you :)


Tana_san (Chapter 70) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

Ok, first things first, I must have missed where it was that someone else knew Kikyou's location. So, now that that is out of the way... I'm glad Sato and Sesshoumaru aren't trusting Mikaru.

It's a good thing Shippou is so advanced for his years. They've hit gold having him around. I rather like the fact that he isn't personally tranforming into his illusions, it keeps him safe that way.

As for you taking time, your education and family take first priority, we'll always be here. You must know by now that your fics are too good to forget. As for having some writer's block, I wondered if that may happen because you always seem to try to top your previous fics, or so it seems to me, because they're getting more intense and complicated to figure out.

This was a good chapter, so don't worry. I feel really sorry for Miroku's face. He does seem to appreciate his pretty boy looks getting the girls to look his way.  JEN


boo (Chapter 70) - Sun 28 Mar 2010

I have read several of your fics now and I love them. One thing has bothered me though, you have used the word malevolent several times. In the context it was used, it seemed like you meant it to mean strong, however it means evil. 


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