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While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 56
(Never done this before, but what the heck...)

I am getting ready to post the last few chapters of my story While You Still Think You Know Everything (rated T) The last chapters will be up either this evening, or if I feel like torturing... tomorrow morning.
I wanted to write a story where Ol' Fluffy and Kagome get together as if the Inuyasha story went on. That was my goal.

My father made me memorize the following statement and I wanted Sesshoumaru to have to deal with a kid like this:

Teenagers
Tired of being harassed by stupid parents
ACT NOW!
Move out
Get a job
And pay your own bills
While you still think you know everything


Well, that was how the idea started, then it took on a mind of it's own.
I responded to the Tou-sama challenge from insomniac_amy.

I would love to know what you all think. I don't get a chance to write too often and this is the longest story, posted or not, that I've written to date.

Thanks again to all my current readers and reviewers... again, you all are the awesomesauce.
 
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Re:While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 5
I have enjoyed it thus far! I beg that you do not torture me by having me wait for tomorrow (Don't need to be caught reading it while at work lol)
 
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Re:While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 1
I've really enjoyed this story, too. I join the plea not to have to wait until tomorrow evening because I can't read it while at work!
 
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Re:While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 56
Just teasin'. I'll most likely post sometime tonight, provided there's no issues and I can get the kids to crash a decent time.
 
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Re:While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 72
This story is wonderful! I have a teen daughter myself and boy can I relate! I'm looking forward to reading the rest and will be on the lookout for more of your stories!
 
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Re:While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 56
It's done and posted. (RIP that plunnie)
Thanks for reading everyone!
 
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Re:While You Still Think You Know Everything 12 Years, 5 Months ago Karma: 56
I've had a couple of people say that I need to make the summary a bit more catching. I tried to come up with something that wouldn't reveal certain characters until they were revealed in the story. (the boy and the badguy) I sat staring at this screen trying to figure out what to write, but was still at a lose when my patience ran out.
Anyone have a suggestion?

Thanks again to EVERYONE for their awesome reviews. They made my day.
 
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