I started a new story called 'Fate is fickle' well, first it was called fate then I changed it because I wasn't comfortable with the title.

Here is a link to the story: dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/4973/1

I'm only on the second chapter, and I'm already stuck(my fault for winging it on a story and not planning it out)

For this second chapter- I can go two ways. Which is what this thread is for, to ask those who read it(on here) on what they would prefer.

I can write about Kagome bonding with the dog, her experience on bringing him out of his shell and trusting humans again.

OR

I can skip that and just give a summary about it and write her going back to the feudal era, and beginning the adventure there with her new companion.

It's hard to decide(laughs)- thank you to those who read the story so far. I appreciate the support(I'm trying to refine my writing style, while fighting writers block so my writing isn't great)

I think you should definitely write about her bonding with the dog. I like your story so far. You should write about how she helps him recover (as I imagine in that bad of a state a few days at the vet would not bring him back to full health), and how she bonds with him during that time. Good luck!

Thank you for replying C:

Having her bond with the dog was my original idea, but then as I was writing it, I started to think 'this might be boring to the readers-maybe they want to get straight into the action'

So I started writing the second option out, but then my original idea(of her bonding with the dog) kept coming back up, so I was like 'maybe I'm rushing it now?!' (laughs)

So thank you for replying!