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My gosh that was painful... Here's to hoping the rest of these will flow with the story I just started... cuz that whole one-shot thing... totally didn't work for me
Descent Into Darkness
He'd taken everything from her. Her very life was his to shape as he saw fit. She would retaliate by taking his heart. It began the way all things begin, with a girl- after all, wars could be started over less.
Rating: MA. No YIMs.
Now, if you'll excuse me, it's 6am and I need sleep. >_>
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02- Content Rated M.
Ugh X.X
PS: Do you use Photoshop for the banners? If not, what do you use?
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Re:50 First Lines: A Challenge 11 Years, 5 Months ago
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And Rin-Rin pulls ahead! Here's your next prompt, dear!
As for the banners, I used GIMP for the background and then a free online photo editor called PicMonkey for the text and effects. I would use Photoshop if I had the money to pay for it, but GIMP is free and does pretty much the same thing, and since I'm not a hardcore artist or anything, I'm fine with it. *shrug*
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So erm... my prompt banner disappeared... and I didn't start the challenge yet. xD
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Lady Kirara wrote:
So erm... my prompt banner disappeared... and I didn't start the challenge yet. xD
Did it? I think you're still on #2, yes? I can see it when I go back through the posts, but I also changed some things around in my photobucket album, so maybe the link broke...I'll go re-input the link again and see if that fixes it.
EDIT: There, I changed the link, can you see it now?
~Aubrey
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Number 3 says it was moved or deleted.
And thinks for telling me what you use, really helps.
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Rin-Rin wrote:
Number 3 says it was moved or deleted.
And thinks for telling me what you use, really helps.
Gah, sorry about that, I'll fix it right now!
And you're welcome, I'm happy to help!
~Aubrey
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03- Family
I don't feel like dying for once.
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Rin-Rin is on a roll!
My other contestants haven't disappeared, have they...? If any of you need help with how, exactly, you're going to get all aspects of your prompts into your stories, you can read Rin-Rin's entries - she's done a great job so far and I'm sure she'd love more reviews as well!
Rin-Rin:
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No, we haven't. At least I haven't. I'll be done with my story later today. I actually wanted to finish yesterday but got delayed when I accidentally killed my external hard drive, which had the only copy of this story . Luckily my data survived and I'll be finishing when I get home from work.
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\"A lie is more comfortable than doubt, more useful than love, more lasting than truth.\"
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Quick question m'dear. Because I want to incorporate as many of these as I can into my new story:
For the theme, does it need to be present throughout the entire chapter? Or can I focus one distinct section on the theme, and leave it to be vague throughout the rest. O.o
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Lady Kirara wrote:
Quick question m'dear. Because I want to incorporate as many of these as I can into my new story:
For the theme, does it need to be present throughout the entire chapter? Or can I focus one distinct section on the theme, and leave it to be vague throughout the rest. O.o
Apologies for the late response - I got caught up in Merlin, which apparently decided to commandeer my soul for a few hours
Anyway, you can use the theme in any way you like. If it only fits in a certain section and has to be vague elsewhere, that's perfectly fine, so long as you use it.
Hope that makes things easier on you!
~Aubrey
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Don't count me out just yet, I'm still editing my first post! Lol
On that note, the banner that goes with it disappeared...
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04- Oddities Rated M.
First person is the bane of my existence.
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Done, finally .
Cookie Flavored Romance
Rated M to be on the safe side. I hope you like it.
I'm looking forward to my next prompt.
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LM Bluejay wrote:
Don't count me out just yet, I'm still editing my first post! Lol
On that note, the banner that goes with it disappeared...
Darn it! Oh, wait, did it disappear from the forum or from your page? I'm fairly positive that I changed all of the links...Well at any rate, I'll be sure to go through and be sure that they're all changed, and you can re-collect your banner if you need to. <-- that goes for everyone, btw. I moved the banners into a folder on my photobucket album, so you may need to re-download your banners. Sorry about that!
EDIT: I'd forgotten to change your link somehow, Blue. Sorry! It's fixed now though!
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04- Oddities Rated M.
First person is the bane of my existence.
Ha! That entry was abso-freaking-lutely ridiculous, and I mean that in the best possible way, to be quite honest. Here's your next prompt, dear!
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Done, finally .
Cookie Flavored Romance
Rated M to be on the safe side. I hope you like it.
I'm looking forward to my next prompt.
Great job, Sakura! Here's your next prompt!
Alright guys, here are the placements so far:
First Place: Rin-Rin, with four entries completed
Second Place: Lady Kirara and Sakura Dragon, with one entry apiece
Third Place: LM Bluejay and Aleksandra, with nothing completed as of yet
You guys can still catch up with Rin-Rin if you write really fast! Like seriously fast lol, she's on a roll!
~Aubrey
p.s. - can you guys put entry numbers with your posts so I don't get too confused with what number you're getting next? it'll make things easier on me!
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At this point she's writing one a day. Not too sure that's possible. xD
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Is my theme referring to the scientist Pavlov? I totally can tell u's and v's apart in cursive. *facepalm*
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Rin-Rin wrote:
Is my theme referring to the scientist Pavlov?
Yep, that's correct!
~Aubrey
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You're evil but mine's actually coming along pretty well.
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05: In the Name of Science - Part 1
Aubrey, scientist really? Why a scientist? And yeah, the theme was done to the best of my ability but that was hard.
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Lady Kirara wrote:
At this point she's writing one a day. Not too sure that's possible. xD
Sorry, one-track mind. If I stop, I'm never starting again.
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Hooray! First Entry!
City of Flames
Rated: MA No YIMs
www.dokuga.com/fanfiction/story/8665/1
Here's to hoping I can fit the rest of the prompts in the story. Lol
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Hey guys!
I'm currently in the car on my way to Ohio, so once I get access to the internet again (my phone works, but I'd prefer my laptop) I'll review the recent entries and then post the next prompts.
~Aubrey
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Aubrey Simone wrote:
Hey guys!
I'm currently in the car on my way to Ohio, so once I get access to the internet again (my phone works, but I'd prefer my laptop) I'll review the recent entries and then post the next prompts.
~Aubrey
Ooh!! Is your destination Cedar Point??? I live in Michigan and have been plotting to get there all summer...I shall conquer the Gatekeeper if it's the last summer thing I do! lol
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