You just killed me. This is so embarrassing. Oh my goodness. Can I even get past this chapter? Oh my goodness! You are a genius. But seriously, I can't even THINK about what in the world is going to occur because of this. Ah.
It was the stab. I see. That was slightly depressing.
Darn it. Sesshomaru! She's trying to overcome the situation! Why don't you? Okay. I take that back. The guy is freaking in love with her and in denial. I understand his desire to keep her at arms length after that.
Now I'm smiling at how she's sure she'll reach him. The 'pat's were a nice touch, by the way.
Oh goodness. You know how much I love the poetic touch, and the meaning conveyed behind it...
Thisnwas so good and so pivotal. But...
I'm worried now.
When is Yasha going to notice? That's what I'm dreading. And... Kagome would never abandon him, no matter her feelings, but Inuyasha loves her like a sister and he would want her to be happy, but it's Sesshomaru, and....
Gah!
My emotions and thoughts are in a total whirlwind! I can't handle this!
LOVE!!!!
Beautiful.
I think this may be my favorite chapter. There wasn't a lot of dialogue that would drown the underlining tone of the chapter. Once again, I love that Sesshoumaru is in character. You can still see the subtle development in their relationship. Kagome confusion to her reaction to Sesshoumaru and Sesshoumaru actually feeling regret and his actions are very telling. He is not a very vocal character. So I feel that you will see him expressing himself through actions more than words and I liked who you incorporated nature as sort of a silent witness. It gave the scene a sort of a whimsical feeling.
You never disappoint.
So heartwarming. I like that is Sesshomaru who is 'in love' with her. Usually Kagome is trying to get him to notice her at court and stuff... here well, she's oblivious while he is trying to calm his growing feelings for her. [Long review 'cause I am not in the phone ;P] Love your writing!
Anonymous (Chapter 15) - Sat 05 Jul 2014
I absolutely love your story and hope that you will continue to update it regularly. It helps significantly that there are few to no noticable grammar or spelling errors. Thank you for that and being willing enough to listen to both criticism and compliments
Eve (Chapter 14) - Thu 03 Jul 2014
Love your story!
update soon!
Marie (Chapter 14) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
Very nice do a sequel
kagome is slowly melting the ice heart of sesshomaru
This was beautiful. I just...
This was breathtakingly beautiful.
However... II'm wondering about that Shin and the talk about Sesshomaru. Seriously, I'm almost hoping something comes of it, just to see!
Beautiful! I can't wait for more!
*blushes*
That's cuter than puppies and kittens and fluffy little thingss and OMG!!!
Kyaa!!
Liking it, keep it coming.
Wow this is a beautiful story, an amazing chapter, and I'm glad to be a part of it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Haven (Chapter 14) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
First off, happy happy late birthday! Second 'off', loving the updates. It's so much fun to read How S & K are slowly understanding each other. I wonder how long before the show down with the snooty lady. That's going to be great. Keep up the great work.
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(hugs chapter tightly) I a truly cried a it I'm so happy
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love thus chapter I shall cuddle it, and keep it and name it fluffy for my very own
(sighs in bliss) now to get ready for the 4th if July weekend thank you so much for the up date
as always your loyal reader seashoscat
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Melissa (Chapter 14) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
Absolutely beautiful.!!!!
Happy Birthday! Thank you for the update. :) it was fairly sweet that gave them a moment and deeper comprehension between Sesshomaru and kagome. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter. Although i am left wondering what the two demons didn't say ...wondering.
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