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Marie (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Aaaaah! Just drag nails across the chalk bored.  Walk on hot coals.  Get dragged by a horse.  Idk but for all that is good.please release 2 chapters. These one chapters every once a month are killing slowly.   Pllleeeeeaaaasssseee and I dont want to her about rin and kohaku either.   Aaaaahhh!   Okay I feel better please take your time releasing your next chapter.....


Moonlit Rose (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

I have to say you had me worried for a minute when you hadn't updated. Happy as always to see another chapter.

Once again you amaze me. The feeling from this chapter makes me so sad. Both of these characters recognized their feelings but are bound by their own morals. I can only hope that things work out for them both. It would be wrong for Kagome to go through with mating Inuyasha only to improve his status, which is what it sounds like to me she is doing. Especially at this point when she is realizing her feelings for Sesshoumaru. But of course she is fighting against them for Inu's sake.

I look forward to your next update. Great job!


Himura Asami (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Ahh... Now he's avoiding her. She doesn't even get a chance to pull away because he's hiding! Though, I suppose,  to be fair, he did just go through something mildly depressing and heart breaking...

Oh snap. She's waiting in his office? Poor him.

Ooh! What exactly does Kimi-chan have planned? Something to cheer up her son, I hope. Honestly, I doubt it, but hey! I can hope. 

Okay. Here we go with the awesome format that only serves to inflict intense misery upon one such as myself. Really? She wants to lighten his work load and take on his stress and that's as far as it will go? That's the only way to show she cares? I mean, I already know, but still. It dodoesn't make it any less sad. (You're  terrible/awesome person).

Awwww! This is just  beautiful!  The lines  and the affection! This is so beautiful! I love the affection, you know I do.

AHHHHHHH!!! I feel like crying. He's so honorable.  I love him for that, but it's so sad. He's not the only one in turmoil here. Look at what you're doing to me. You're making me question my principles. How

could you?

 

 

 

Random mood change: perplexity. Well well. What could Kura mean? Who is it? That Inari woman? That's what I'm thinking, just got to be honest,  she seems like a jerky waspish entitled brat. Manipulative as well. As much as I hate her, I do look forward to seeing what she'll bring to the table. If the person Kagome needs to be wary of is actually Inari. Who knows...?

 

 

 

And here Miss Inari is. Mediating between the ranks? It seems more a Kagome thing. Unless she's being selfish with ulterior motives or planning to stir up trouble. Which is basically me saying I don't trust her. But you probably got that already.

Oh! I want her dead! Boom. Die. 

Okay, overreaction, but still. Looking at Kagome with a smirk after saying that? It's like asking me to rip her head off in my imagination! 

I was so prepared for Kagome's statement, but Kura jumped in. Darn. Let's go read what she said. Maybe it's a good thing she spoke first. Or not. She sort of sounds... not to smart. Blah! 

I knew Inari was causing trouble! Can't stand her, but I really don't mind her. It's totally contradictory,  but I really do want to see how she furthers the plot. It already seems like she's being set up as, at least,  a mild antagonist.  And I do love my antagonists, even when I hate them.

Ha!  A reasonable,  diplomatic and well informed answer. Goodness, I love that woman. Go Kagome! Because she's not trying to side with anyone. She's voicing her honest opinion and it makes sense, and the fact that both sides' arguments are validated in her answer is just a bonus. Excellently handled. 

Oh! That was so aweaome! I love the way she handled that. She went all fierce and firm when she called him out on his ignorance and idiocy! Love it. 

Hey, random thought: where is Yasha, exactly?

Oh. Kimi-chan excused her. Let's see where she takes this. I worry about whether or not Kagome will be inadvertently hurt the way Sesshomaru was because Kimi-chan is trying to help.

OH SNAP!!! This is what I have been waiting for. I hope she can say her peace in Yasha's defense. It's one of the thigs I love seeing her do.

Darn. I hate that she knows better. Oh well. Go comfort him! Or maybe he needs some time alone. It's always hard to tell with that one.

But it's nice to see Sesshomaru indirectly defending his brother. Really indirectly,  but still.

Oh... you just made me re depressed.  See! I was all passionate and righteously indignant!  And now, I'm all sad and mopey. You're a meanie. Why do I love you?

What? You mean it's over? I need more than that? Darn.

You ended it on such a depressing note...

LOVING IT.

I think I'm getting addicted.

If I weren't already...


Nessa Rios (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

My heart just wants them to be with each other already ????


Nessa Rios (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

I'm Loving this story, but I'm just so impatient for things to start with sesshomaru and kagome.  Despite me being impatient... This is siuch a great story. ????


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Another excellent chapter. I like how you manipulate yours words so that the reader can actually feel the emotions of the three main characters meaning the anguish and heartache that is the conumdrum of Sess/Kag and Inu. Well, anyway, this is how I feel about this story. Great writing! I can't wait to read another chapter.


Nicole (Chapter 20) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Love the chapter cant wait to read the next one. I love how u can tell who inukimi has chosen for her choice of the new hime :)


Marie (Chapter 19) - Sat 02 Aug 2014

I think my heart just broke for sesshomaru.    Dear me stupid kagome gotta be all noble and mess.   Pl3ase dont to long to correct the issue


NorthPeach (Chapter 19) - Sat 02 Aug 2014

Oh, look. I've been impaled. 


candy cane (Chapter 19) - Sat 02 Aug 2014

Please finish this story I enjoyed it greatly would love to find out what happens.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

 Episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs tomorrow. Poor Sesshomaru, keep it coming


Himura Asami (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

Super big smiles! I love this, you know.

The chuckling made me smile. I can't get over how relieved I am that he's okay with it. Seriously. 

Aww! I love the tender look! I love it! I'm just really in love now with everything.  And, thus, I am waiting to see how you manage to ruin it for me. I know you will. Or maybe you won't,  but the paranoia will manage it for you, so, technically,  you still will, wether you do or not, 

...

Nevermind.

I'm blushing and giggling.  That trembling line was brilliant.  Poor Sesshomaru, she has no idea what she does to him, and I'm not sure if that makes it better or worse.

Oh! Darn! I suppose that does constitute as grooming. In her defense, the moment was way too hard for her to remember that. And I was freaking out, so I forgot too. Again, your fault. 

Ooh! He's going to her room? What is he going to do there? Is that a good idea right now? That's the real question. I mean, come on. After what had happened with Kagome at tye end of the last chapter, iI'm just wondering if she's in a proper state to see him... I'm suee she'll make an effort, but...

Oh my goodness! He's captivated by her beauty!  That's awesome. His heart rate sped up! Awesome! I love this!  You've got me on the edge of raptures...!

Oh, thank goodness. She's okay. The smile at her thoughts on him is good. She's not panicking or depressed or anything. This is good. Keep it up. Yeah. You can do this, Kagome!

AWWW!!!! She just managed to unconsciously fulfill one of his deepest desires! It was on accident! And he'd been waiting to hear that, and she said it. You're beautiful.

Oh! Oh! This is so heartwarming!  I love this! I feel so free right now. And so light.  I really get into this. Again, it's probably not healthy... but who cares? I love how... how do you describe a scene like this. A moment like this.... it's so still and so... perfect. I don't know, I don't have the right adjective, but this is just... everything I've ever wanted to read over and over again. Love! 

I had to drop my tablet with a squeak when this next part came up. Once more (in a surprising fit of coherence), I have to compliment your formatting. It's beautiful,  and the moments that you use it are so... well, you just know when it'll have the most impact. Like, right now, brilliant timing. It just makes everything so much more meaningful.  

But! We also have to address how anxious this is making me. His eyes are soft and she's flushing and he can't take his eyes off of her and that's as far as I got before I dropped my tablet. This is so startlingly intimate that I can't breathe. Because I know it can't amount to anything (hello, Inuyasha, I didn't see you there. No, nothing is going on with your bestie/fiancee and your half brother. Nothing at all!) but I still want it to, you know?

That's the adjective!  Intimate is the word I was looking for. The scene is so intimate.  I was way too worked up before to grasp it, hut there it is. 

Look what you're doing to me. You're taking away my basic knowledge of adjectives!  And adjectives are my favorite parts of speech! See what you do to me?

Oh! She looked away. I ddon't know whether to be relieved or angry that the spell was broken. Because it was totally a spell.

Ahhhhhhhh! It's not broken! Oh my goodness! I am so in love! It's not broken. Oh my goodness. Adoration!  I love that one! I love it! I can't not love this!

AHHHHHHHHH!!!

As much as I'm fangirling over here, I'm feeling a certain significance in this scene. Please let it be my imagination.  I have a vivid imagination, and you know I imagine random things that aren't actually happening. I would be so okay if I were wrong right now. The way she's trying to distance herself, but he's pulling her back ( He grabbed her hand! Oh my goodness! Ahhhhhhhh! I love it!)... it's totally just a fluke, right?  It's not their relationship is going to be like that, right? 

Who am I kidding?  Of course I'm not imagining it! This is going to be a thing, isn't it? Her pulling away from him while he's trying to pull her back? The very idea makes me wilt. Seriously.  I'm wilting.... 

Ah! That's brilliant.  Books! You go, girl! Read it up! 

Honestly? I almsot feel bad for him...

And now I don't because I'm squealing and blushing!  He's so amused and poor Kagome! She can't help it! Stop teasing her with your eyes, Sesshomaru!

Gosh... he's such a jerk. I love it! I don't know if I want him to quit stalling or keep on. See how ambivalent I am right now? Your fault. All you.

YASHA!!!!!!!! We missed him so much! He's so adorable. 

Now. Going to Sesshomaru's study? The both of them? Together? If they're discussing the fact that she's from the future, I'll freak. Mostly because I have no idea how Yasha will react.

KIMI-CHAN!!!!!

I love her. Oh snap! This is so much worse than what I had imagined. 

 

 

Or better, given the fact that Kimi-chan is so excited to see Kagome.  I cannot wait!

 

Ahhh! His temples and her giggles and his mommy knows! I love this! Raptures! Raptures!

 

 

Her plan would benefit her son, but Kagome would never. She already made her promise. My heart is at a standstill.

 

I knew she wouldn't.  But how painful it must be.... for the both of them.

 

 

Sesshomaru doesn't understand her intentions,  and she's too loyal and honorable to turn her back on her best friend.

 

 

I both love and hate this. I knew you would ruin it for me. I just can't have a good time, can I? You just have to torture me...

 

 

I just feel so depressed. As depressed as Sesshomaru. And Kagome. So depressed. Oh...I'm in pain...

Still love the formatting though. Even though it makes the pain worse. It's like the situation is a stake and I'm a vampire. But with the format, it's like a garlic coated stake. And I'm still a vampire. See how hard this is? I'm sort of blank right now.

Why do I love your formatting again?

Do your best, Kagome! Do it! Inari is no match! Well... she is... darn. She's going to start showing up more, isn't she? This is great.

(Did you feel the sarcasm?)

 

 

The patting and the aching and the "go away..." This ended on a fairly depressing note.

 

 

 


elizabeth (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

kagome in this story  would be unfaithful to inuyasha with sesshomaru


Ankita (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

I just wish inuyasha would realise kags likes sessho I know he won't force her to marry him just for his sake T_T


Melissa (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

Poor Kagome. I know that very ache oh so well. I found that it is never good to deny the heart what it sees best. 


KT (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014
No, Sesshoumaru :( I really this can work out. Great story, I am eagerly looking forwards to the next update!

sesshouscat (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

T.T. OMG  I love it

i shall keep it as my let and. Brush and feed it as my very own and call it

George

 

 

 

great up date i do have some bad news Mirkou is visiting me so be wear of the 

pervert lol


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

I am so glad that I decided to read this story. I kept passing it up looking for a decent story to read and when I started reading this wonderful tale I fell in love. I stayed up all night reading it and by the time I came to this last chapter my heart was aching for Sesshoumaru. I am so looking forward to future chapters. Your writing skills are excellent in my opinion. You really know how to pull the emotional strings. I am so going to read any other stories you have written if I haven't already. :)


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

We possibly the best story I've read on Dokuga in a while! I'm enamored;captivated and utterly impressed with th progression of this story!   Can't wait for the next update(:


Eroviaa (Chapter 19) - Fri 01 Aug 2014

Though Kagome is being True to her character she is sticking her head into the sand. She would be foolish to think that her feelings for Sesshomeru will just away. On top of that if she wins and goes through with her stubborn mating with Inuyasha she will still have to interact with Sesshomeru on the regular because he will be her lord as Lord of the West. She needs to be honest with herself. I believe there is nothing worse than being tired to someone when you love someone else. 


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