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Nilee1 (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

Breathtaking chapter-- there was so much emotion and depth of understanding. There is such a haunting quality in an introspective Kagome. Your characterization of Sesshoumaru is unique in his strength, understanding and vulnerability. Wonderful writing!


Marie (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

This chapter was good. Finally making progress.  Cant wait for the next chapter


Moonlit Rose (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

You are right. A lot of us have been waiting for this moment and it was well worth it. Inukimi has subtly brought awareness to Kagome and now Kagome is subtly becoming aware that she might feel something for Sesshoumaru (showed by her running away at the end). I sensed that Sesshoumaru was sending Inuyasha away alot for a reason. Makes sense. I enjoyed this chapter very much. Awesome job! Can't wait the next.


elizabeth (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

thank you very much i really liked the chapter that will happen now that sesshomaru .knows that  kagome comes from the future


elizabeth (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

Ree-san (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

I can't tell that you had any trouble with the chapter.  I really like how she's starting to understand the things happening around her and her much stronger than she believed connection to Sesshoumaru.  I really like the character development that I've read so far (I started reading in the middle I think; when their friendship was already strong and he had developed a love for her).  I can't wait to see how the relationship shifts to romantic involvement!


Himura Asami (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

I was waiting for this. Here I've been, wondering of you've been enjoying keeping me in suspense! The anticipation was killing me. It still is, because after the last chapter, I am so intense right now! I cannot wait!

Even the chapter title has me taing in a bated breath.

Ooh! Momma needs to meet her now. I'm so freaking out,

Oh goodness. This is so amusing. She's so mean to him! You're making me a sadist. I love the way she's talking to him. And what exactly is he having him do?

He needs to confess more feelings? I don't know if I could take that. 

Oh. This is so sad. I feel like crying for both of them. It's terrible. But! Now she's calling Kagome! Ahhh! I cannot believe his. I assumed they would meet in pubkic, but I should have known better. A private meeting with Kimi-chan and Kagome. Ahh!!! This is going to be awesome. If it's not scary.

Ahhh. I'm freaking out. Curiosity.  I would be curious too I guess.  Sesshomaru's mom is calling you. A summons? Well, more scared than curious.  Thank goodness she's so brave.

Kagome is amazing. Kimi-chan should definitely be impressed. Or confused. I like the frustrated bafflement. And I can't wait to see her reaction to Kagome's answer. Oh snap! What if Kimi-chan senses the growing feelings that Kagome is developing for Sesshomaru? I wonder how that would go. Because she doesn't know that Kagome and inuyasha aren't in love. Maybe she'll think Kagome's going to be a two-timer and she'll hate her for being disloyal to her intended even in feeling! Oh my gosh!  I'm probably over thinking this. I just need to read the rest of this so that I can stop freaking out. To the chapter!

Oh, never mind. I like the approval. And the instinct. That was brilliant!  She does it because of everything.  Because of everything.  That was beautiful.

OH SNAP!!! She just went there! Was that a mistake to assume the whole thing? Ooh! I'm so freaking out! Look what you do to me!

Ohsnap! Fair and honorable! Mischief! Now I'm nervous and super excited!  I love mischief! Affection! See! Mother's don't miss this stuff! Oh goodness. 

Snap. All these tender looks and understanding words. It's so obvious!  What in the world is going to happen? 

Oh snap! She's asking the question! Goodness. I haven't oh snapped this many times in weeks. Look what you're doing to me!

AHHHHHHHH!!! I'm squealing like crazy! And blushing. And squealing!  AHHHHHHH!!! My poor delicate sensibilities!  Ahhhhh! I love you so much!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's amazing! You're amazing! This whole story is amazing!  I'm so glad I met you...

(Platonic soulmates...)

Snap. She's going into detail and just... wow. Wow. I can't wait to see Kimi-chan's reaction.  How do you even react to somehing like this when your son is in love with this woman but she's betrothed to another-your son's half brother!?!?! You make my life miserable in the best way possible. Is that even legal?

Goodness... I feel like whispering in awe. This is awesome. I'm... I'm just feeling really weird and floaty right now, like I don't know how to feel. This probably isn't healthy. If I tell my doctor or perhaps a therapist, they might tell me to stop reading your story..,

Oh snap. And here is the real big question. She doesn't even know the answer to that one! But we know!

Oh snap! And important person. That's so vague but such a powerful statement! I love this! I feel like crying in love. Can you cry because your in love?

Snap! I love the way Kimi-chan said that and then flew away.

Hmm... this is a surprising twist. She's working so hard not to deceive people, but she inadvertently is by being from the future... Now she feels like she's undeserving. How will this factor in? I can't imagine how anyone would react and yet I can't imagine her telling anyone. This is so dramatic. I just went through a whirlwind emotion change. Thanks again for making me bipolar.

This guilt is waying us both down. I feel afflicted with manic depression. Is she going to tell him? I'm so anxious! I feel like crying. Again. 

Aww! He's so sweet. But he doesn't know the real reason... bated breath!

Nonononononononon!!!!!! I had my hands covering my mouth and everything! My eyes are literally watering up. Literally. Oh my goodness. No! What's going to happen? I'm close to hyperventilating!  How could you do this to me? This is so sadistic of you!

I know this about you, yet I'm still here... What does that say about me?

But seriously.  I... I'm rocking back and forth in my seat. I'm so worried. So anxious.  So scared. Nononononononono!!!! No!

She just said the word future, and I'm literally trembling.  This can't be healthy. Look what you're doing to me. I'm going to send yu the bill when I have to get psychiatric help for my ptsd/manic depression and emotional instability!!!!

If any psychiatrist would be willing to see me.

But seriously.  I have this tightness in my chest.  I can't believe this. 

I love you.

Sorry. Way inappropriate. 

Nonononono!!! No! This can't happen! No! I fel like I'm on the verge of sobbing. Or a serious hissy fit with lots of screaming and rolling around in the floor in despair. I'm tryin not to feel anything,  but I'm so tense... goodness. What are you dling this for! Is he going to hate her now? Because she lied? Is he? Oh my goodness! And how will she cope? How will she manage? What if he kicks her out? What if- what about Inuyasha? What will he think when he finds out? And if Sesshomaru kicks her out, how will Yasha find her! Nose, obviously,  but still. Oh my goodness. My eyes are watering again. I probably sound really crazy, bt this is making me super emotional. I don't want to see them come to an end when they haven't begun just because she's telling him the truth when the only reason she lied was to potect herself from her enemies- and he used to be one of them! Whag am I supposed to do with this?

I feel so nervous. I don't know how to go back to the story. I just got to her talking about the well and I haven't read anything sinde I started the above rant. I'm nervous. I'm afraid! What did you put in there!?!??!

 Please let me be worng about everything!  Ahhhh! Please let him understand!  Or... what's going to happen? I feel like fainting. 

Right  now I'm hoping that he fell asleep when she was running her hands through his hair. That would be beautiful.  His lack of response is making me think it's a possibility. I just heard her tell him that she doesn't feel deserving,  yet he's way too silent.  He has to be asleep.

Darn it! He's not asleep. Darn it! But I'm sort of relieved because he told her that she was wrong!  Now I feel like cryin in happiness!  I'm not, but I've got on a pretty watery smile. Goodness. Goodness.

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! I can't do this! I feel lie passing out! What more will he say? What will happen? What will go on?

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Ahhhhhhh! I love you. 

Now I feel so supid for being nervous. Of course I knew she was unique no matter what (she's way too awesome. Go Kagome!!! Fearless yell at goons who kidnap you and then lie to them! Yeah!) but I wasn't sure how he would react. I'm so glad. You make me so happy.  

But sseriously,  these emotions aren't healthy. So you need to stop.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She hugged him...

(I knew you loved me...)

My eyes are watering again. I love you so much. *sniffles*

Wow. That thought. I don't have enough energy to scream, so I have to just say wow. I think Kimi-chan was wrong. Its definitely not to early. These feelings are here.

Just wow. 

...

...

...

...

The meaning of the chapter title is so much worse than I originally thought.  It would have been better if he had sent her away. If he had told her to go away, than this. This is... wow.

I know why. I understand why. But still. 

Wow. You just made every good feeling inside of me die. I already knew that she wouldn't give into her feelings because of the promise she made to Inuyasha. But the realization of what I knew would come to pass... it's a bad feeling when you knew something bad was coming.

I feel tuckered out from this chapter. And from this review. I feel like they're both getting longer. 

Just...

Wow.

 


Melissa (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

I dont know how you do it, but you do it well. I love this story so very much. Keep it coming.


Christina (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

Love it! Can't wait to read his thoughts on all of this! 


Nicole (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

such a great chapter....now sesshoumaru's mother knows how both of them feel about one another :) loved the end of the chapter with the little scene between the two. can't wait till the next chapter :)


sesshouscat (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG


I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW


OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

she loves him but dosent know it brilliant love it ot she dose know it

shes hiding it  such a good up date I can sleep happy aflyer reading this 

( releases tied up sesshoumaru ush for now)




NorthPeach (Chapter 18) - Sun 20 Jul 2014

Wow, wow, wow, wow, like wow.

*hands over mouth*

My, my, my, I really don't know what to say... 

I mean wow.

*claps slowly*


sesshouscat (Chapter 17) - Thu 17 Jul 2014

(Hits refresh button to sed if new chapter is up) nothing

( walks ways form computer for five min comes back and hits refresh again) nothing

( power reset computer an hits refresh button) nothing

(starts to cry now cause she checked all the cords, power rest computer, refreshed paged and 

checked email and spam box to see if she missed an up date ) nothing

( pokes the computer screen and picks up phone to call internet provider to have them check the line

to see if internet is working correctly... It is so power rests computer and refresh page again) nothing

T.T why is there no up date it my monday and I was hoping for a fluffy... do I have to tie up my chibi Sesshoumaru

plush and send you a ransom notice with a picture yo have him released...

my demand is this UPDATE!!!

love your obsessed fan

sesshouscat

ps I still love ya XD and wouldnt tie up the plush for long 


EmmaLynnx (Chapter 17) - Wed 16 Jul 2014

Oh whoa!! This is a very interesting development, oh Sesshomaru! Admitting your feelings outstanding. I am loving the way you potray kagome! It's astounding the way you capture her personality and make it your own. I can't wait for more!


Yasmine (Chapter 17) - Wed 16 Jul 2014

aaaaah ure killing me over here. such a cliffhanger! I thought he'd deny his feelings to his mother. I can't wait to find out what inukimi will do when she meets kagome. i can't wait for the next chapter. <3 <3


Shezsnap (Chapter 17) - Tue 15 Jul 2014

Please update soon, I fell in love with the story and I finished it all in one day! Looking forward to what is to come next!!


Miss C (Chapter 17) - Mon 14 Jul 2014

Oh ho ho ho hooooo! He Said IT!!! Woooo!!


InuYoukaiOfMoonlight (Chapter 17) - Mon 14 Jul 2014

//im dying here, ritsuki is tied between hate for inuyasha and loving the rest of the story, while im here foaming from the mouth//

Ritsuki: AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE<3

Ritsuki: I CAN UNDERSTAND THE WHOLE 'intended mate' tHING BUT FOR LADY KAGOME TO PUT HER LIPS ON THAT FILTHY SCOUNDREL IS TO MUCH! <//3


4kagome (Chapter 17) - Mon 14 Jul 2014

Perfect....

 


Dawn of Roses Kiss (Chapter 17) - Mon 14 Jul 2014

Noooooooooooooo! You can't just leave it right there, I want moar!!! Goddness gracious, their relationship is just developing spectacularly, and I can't get enough of it! I love the fact that they developed in character, and everything for their dynamics had a reason. I will hook you up with like 2039 5-hour energies for you to just keeping writing for the rest of enternity for this story.


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