Hawww it didn't end on a good note although d upside would be finally she has accepted her feelings ..
Oh no, progree progree progree. Im happy.at.all the reLizations but man do you have to put her in a coma! Darn it. Well I waiting, hurry up and write ;)
Marina (Chapter 23) - Sat 06 Sep 2014
Well he could always slaughter almost every other demon...could be why there aren't many if any in the future. All because he decided that he wanted her in his reach. lol. Just joking.
butterflywings (Chapter 23) - Thu 04 Sep 2014
Why.......why do you enjoy causing us so much pain? IS IT FOR REVIEWS!!!?? WELL HERE!!! HERE ARE YOUR DUMB BEAUTIFUL REEVIEWS YOU SICKLY TALENTED PERSON DAMN YOU AND YOUR PERFECT STORYTELLING HEARTLESS WITCH OF MY LIFE, MOST GLORIOUS PRINCESS OF SUNSHINE HOW DARE YOU!!!???
HaRa (Chapter 22) - Thu 04 Sep 2014
please go on.
Oh my goodness. I don't know what to think. I hope kagome realises in time that inuyasha knows and he doesn't mind that they love each other. Will someone tel kagome what that mark means to demons perhaps she'll reconsider her actions. Could there be a female in the ranks that feels for inuyasha but fears being ridiculed or making more enemies? What is going to happen when the ceremony for the hime begins?
Update soon onegai
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
Such a sweet fic! But a very sad chapter. I hope you update again soon. I really enjoy your characterizations, especially Kagome. You capture the traits I enjoy the most about her!
Emily (Chapter 23) - Wed 03 Sep 2014
I loved this last chapter! It was so full of emotion and I hated the last few sentences. The way Sesshomaru was written great. You coved his emotions, love, and stowic manner So well! I cant wait to see how Kagome gets out of this moment.
Anonymous (Chapter 23) - Wed 03 Sep 2014
OMG....OMG...
Heart wrenching.... Both are so stubborn! Both don't confess or explain WHY they act the way they do...(He has to appear stoic because he's a Lord. She loves InuYasha as a friend and is tryin to protect him)
But then that would make for a dull story.... Lovin' the drama....Even with my eyes filled with tears.....FANTASTIC STORYTELLING!!!
Looking so forward to more!
*sob*
I- that- wasn't it- it just....
*blubbers*
That's so sad!!!
Ankita (Chapter 23) - Wed 03 Sep 2014
Stupid stupid stupid kagome T_T why didn't you explain your only thinking about yourself you don't care how your words effect sessho T_T
So much angst! I agree with some of the other reviews, Kags' motives seemed to have shifted from acceptance to protection. Not saying that it's a bad thing but I don't think Inu has ever been the type to just accept protection from others. He's always kind of forged his own way in things. Not sure if I can keep reading right now, makes me so sad! :( Maybe when I'm in a happier mood I can pick it up again :)
CAN I JUST SMACK 'EM WITH SANGO'S BOOMERANG? Seriously, Inuyasha has said much that he didn't wish Kagome to be trapped within her own promise while it makes her unhappy. Inuyasha is for once smart...
( has done a re read of every thing hoping for earily chapters and sighs cause there are none)
(refreshes the page and email with hope to see Nothing) T.T
have I told you how much I love you
( I confess hoping to spark the creative juices)
(sighs after doing yet another refresh on email and dokuga and nada)
i shall Patiently await your next cliff hanger master piece
kagome must first clarify their feelings and misunderstandings that there
Kagome is a moron. IY gave Kagome permission to mate Sesshoumaru. Instead of doing so
Kagome decided to mate IY.
IY does not need anyone to protect him. He can kill any daiyoukai with the Backlash Wave and send anyone else to hell with the Meidou.
Ok. I went from totally loving Kagome in this story to being extremely annoyed with her now. Kagome has become arrogant in in her noble quest to protect Inuyasha and in doing so, is now treating him as a weak being that needs to be protected. Before it was about acceptance. Inuyasha is slowly gaining that. Now it's for protection. She has already admitted her love for Sesshomaru so she is now willing to allow Inuyasha second place in her heart? She's only fooling herself and is now hiding behind noble actions.
Ok. Maybe I'm more than extremely annoyed and mad at her being obtuse.
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