Holy Skittles Batman! This fic is incredible! And the darkness of it all makes it even MORE delicious.... I adore this Sesshoumaru and Kagome! I only hope he doesn't rape her in his rage when she returns. And even more... I hope his dark need for Kagome has grown exponentially.... and hers for him. To the point that when they at last meet again... their mutual desire and taint for one another will make them feel as if they were going to combust! Eager for an update... you go WonderBug!
OMG! The plot just took a head dive into the abyss and I'm loving it! Girl, you must update soon, like now! And I need to review before I become a begging mess or explode... T.T (seriously, update soon, yes?)
The twists and turns, direction this fic has taken are all amazing! It was a clever move, to have her back in her own time, let the desire fester, her burn for him seethe, grow and devour her whole. I can't imagine how much his possessiveness must have suffered in her absence. All I can think is him howling at the moon and promising there will be blood to spill and flesh to take when he finds her again. *shivers* And that is causing my blood to heat as well...
Of course, poor Hojo wouldn't be enough for her anymore... as if humans could cut it when you've had such a tameless wildness at your neck and between your thighs... really. Her reminiscence of him, how she imagined him taking her... hot, goddamn it was HOT! You say you bow to me for my lemon-writing skills? Well, then, now we must be bumping heads from bowing at each other at the same time. LOL
Kikyo died... I guess it was inevitable. I'm neither happy nor sad, but somehwere in-between. I do wonder what will happen to the Jewel and Kagome's paowers now as well. Inuyasha, I shouldn't pity him, but I do. He has nothing left now, nothing besides pity - and he is the sole responsible for it. I'm guessing Naraku took away Kikyo from him once more, but he severed all bonds he had himself.
Onwards! (tomorrow?? Please, say so!)
Wow... so many parts I want to comment, all at the same time! My mind is reeling!! *inhales, exhales* Okay, now I can begin!
This must be one of my favorite chapters so far! The dynamincs in their relationship are starting to change, the move has been made, the first step to endless possibilties!!
Kagome seems to have come to some important realizations, even if she can't accept what they truly mean at the moment... 'cause obliviousness thy name Kagome. Sesshomaru has accepted his own realizations, though that's not exactly right... he devoured them, swallowed them whole, not merely accepted. Once that man makes a decision, he sticks with it, and apparently he wants her, despite this desire being his bane as he thinks.
There were some brilliant lines here. I can't c/p them all, but I will mention that my favorites were Sesshomaru's admittance of being weak like his Father which I now translate as I want you in the context he used it. Bwahaha! Really that scene was pure perfection, full of madness and bloodheat and tameless passion on his part. It gave this girl here some very nice shivers, the good kind, oh yes. XDD Kaede's line cracked me up big time, mainly because I've used a similar one as well, yet I've never seen anyone else try this trick. Bwahaha! I do believe Kaede would so say that!
The regrowth of his arm was gruesomely desrciptive, yet beautifully so! I don't know how you manage to write such lovely sentences that keep the rawness, yet still sound pretty! Bravo!
There are more things I'd like to comment, but I don't want to leave you a wall here... anyway, this chapter was excellent, fantastic! Totally made my day!
Onwards! (tomorrow XD)
P.S. I'm catching up again. T.T
Lmao! Now he's disappointed she doesn't seem to regard him as an interested male when he's not making any move to show his interest, and Kagome mistakes bewildered desire for fear-induced shock. What a pair, really, someone should just smack them upside down soon. XD
I quite like what you did with Kikyou here. Someone in that relationship needs to be mature and Inuyasha is certainly not it. Not enemies, yet not friends either is the best approach you could take. Nice!
Hm, so she holds the key to this seal. Ingenious! I loved the idea you used here, something emotional, not tangible, which is going to be harder for dear Kagome - and beneficial for Sesshomaru (though he might not think so). XD
I loved your writing in the Sesshomaru/Kagome scene when she stumbled on him and thereafter. Such lovely phrases, full of beauty and flow. Your descripions are marvelous, lyrical at times, and straightforward when the occasion calls for it.
Onwards! (tomorrow XD)
Ya know, this story should be called "The lady doth protest too much, methinks." Not that the 'knight' is any better... *cackles*
Oh, what a wonderful chapter! I loved what you did with Kagome here, letting her have a mini breakdown in order to bring up the truth - she simply doesn't care any longer. She just wanted to cling to this, deceive herself that she did to give her a reason to stay in the Sengoku Jidai. Well, now she has to find another and I do believe that reason comes in gold and silver. *chuckles*
Oh, poor Sesshomaru, why you do this to yourself, stubborn dog? You know you want her, your mind knows you want her, your body knows you want her... just let give in. XPP Though, it amuses me greatly to see you ogling her cleavage like some starved dog, her bra covered cleavage no less. Ah, you've got it bad, champ. *pats then dodges the claws* If he has some kind of demented dream where his Father is gloating and teasing him for falling for a human woman I will surely die! More if he goes on to praise human women's charms in certain activities! Bwahaha1 DUn mind me, I just find the thought hilarious...
Kaede is very wise and I love that she's taking a more active role as Kagome's mentor. I hope she can instruct her in other ways as well. Such as letting her know that red demon eyes don't only mean bloodlust but simple lust as well. Though, to have it spelled out for her and her reaction to it would kill me! I fear I will die of laughter if she learns it that way!
Excellent chapter! I loved the emotional displays here and their inner monologue/dialogues are always a blast!
Onwards! (tomorrow XD)
P.S. I only waste P.S.'s on InuYasha 'cause he dun deserve more - that self-centered Narcissus! I hope he enjoys his honeymoon in a graveyard!
Perhaps the only thing more absurd than her defiance was his tolerance of it. <--- This line here made the whole chapter for me, surprisingly. I swear I must have laughed for a full minute before I even resumed reading. It was just... priceless! BUT I have a lot to comment on here... such a wholesome chapter with so many intriguing events!!
Kagome showed such backbone here, standing up to him even though he could have killed her as far as she knew. I'm impressed, really! Resembling her to Midoriko made her justice in this scene! She should really get a clue by now, though. I mean, it's more amusing for me if she doesn't, but I think she needs to or she runs the risk of being all O.O when Sesshomaru finally deigns to voice why his sees red every single time. XP
Ah, Sesshomaru, how great your benevolence, allowing her to leave when you know she'll make your life a living hell by just breathing, staring at you with her big doe-like eyes, making you question your sanity and choice in females. Bwahahaha. You'll not become your father, you say? Love... you already are your father. What I said for Kagome applies here as well. Get a clue! XDD
Her inner Sesshomaru, she says!! Another moment that killed me with laughter! Seriously, are you trying to make me choke in my own saliva?? But, she's improving thanks to his uniwtting (?) aid! Woohoo! Go, Kagome! Though, tis kinda sad how she has no reaction when being referred to Kikyo... it shows that she has matured as a person, yet somehow I feel as if she lost something in the process. Though, she has much potential in this story, to grow more, and snatch herself a daiyoukai in the process - whether she wants him or not. Lol
Now why doesn't this recent development with Inu/Kik surprise me, hm? Kagome's reaction though will be interesting to see.
Your writing skills are to be envied, really. *rawrs* Such well portrayed emotions and flow!
Onwards! (tomorrow XD)
Were you to write any sort of non-fanfiction novel, I would support it. You have an awesome descriptive ability which lends itself to a well-crafted scene. I consider your work the best I have seen in a long time (fanfiction-wise).
Bravo, and keep it up!
Bwahahaha!! Oh Sesshomaru, do you want to taste the same apple your father tasted? Be careful though, once you take a bite, you can never stop craving it. *dies of laughter*
This is just so good! I mean, to see him like this, I can never get enough!
Kagome is as delightful as ever! I do love her freshness, her liveliness! She practically adds color to everything she touches!
My oh my, he does seem aggravated. The wait was too much for you to handle, Sesshomaru?? Mmm? *cackles*
Okok, I need to stop teasing him now or he'll rip out my throat, either intentionally or accidentally.
I cannot tell you what joy this story has been so far! The portrayals are flawless, very rich, and consistent - which makes this fic perfect!
Onwards! (tomorrow XD)
P.S. Like father like son, huh, Inuyasha? Shame on both of you for flaunting your mating habits where others could see! (No, not really XDD)
Loren (Chapter 1) - Sun 16 Feb 2014
Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Loooove it !!!
Please update soon!!! I can't wait!
I just started reading this, and I read all seven chapters at once. I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru! I can't believe Kikuyu is dead. I wonder if Sesshoumaru is behind it? What will happen if Kagome goes back to the past? PLEASE update again soon! I'm hooked! Great story!
I just realized I am incredibly daft... Why, oh why, did I not read this the moment it was first posted? T.T
Well, now I have to thank you again for getting interested in my work! If you hadn't, I doubt I would have found your excellent stories as I rarely read fics lately (if you dun exclude entries for my challenges).
After my whining and self-beating, I shall leave a review!
The premise of this, the concept it's based on is amazing! Of course it could happen! I mean, Kagome didn't know what the hell she was doing when she first came to the feudal era. It was brilliant of you!
The portrayals are wonderful, much to my liking! I love spunky, fiery Kagome and her inner monologues are hilarious! I haven't seen much of Sesshomaru yet, but I do have a good idea of where this is heading. *cackles* And I love it.
Throwing in Kikyo, huh? I agree, it adds some perspective, makes things more interesting!
Onwards! (tomorrow XD)
Wow.omgosh inuyasha no poor kikyo. i want to read the next one please
Sheila (Chapter 7) - Sun 16 Feb 2014
I am loving this! You had my interest from the first chapter and the more you write, the better it gets. Great story, great writing...can't wait for more.
OMGGGGGG!!! This is just TOO good!!!! I need you to update soon!!!!
oh gosh! this story is great! i love the plot, i love the way you portray kagome and sesshoumaru and i also love this kind of theme!!!! cant wait for them to get it on! im just a bloody pervert lol seriusly though please update soon!theres only a few good stories im reading write now and the good ones always take long to update!!
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