This chapter was so intresiting. A sad truth that not all will be the same when kagome went back to her time. Kind of sad that inuyasha died in this chapter as well as kikyo. But with their deaths i expect a-lot of growth from kagome.
Great chapters, Maya Angelou passed away, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
amanda (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Wonderful chapter
Marie (Chapter 8) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Alright, feelin greedy next chapter please!
I feel really bad for Kagome, I mean she wasn't born in that era so she was afraid and was trying to protect her friends. Of course, she could have trusted her friends a bit more. But still, I'm surprised Shippo or at least Sango do not hear her out and forgive her a little more.
Kagome did grow up though. To take charge of her mistakes and try to rectify them as she is doing. She has to be terrified of meeting Sesshomaru again and bargain either her life or the last thing she has of Inuyasha. Although, I am realllly curious if Sesshomaru is demanding what I think he is demanding for payment for his help in defeating Naraku. I want to read it in black and white!
Cannot wait for the next update though! Ciao!
Please oh my god. . I'm curious right now
Ana (Chapter 8) - Tue 03 Jun 2014
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh what a painful cliffhanger :3
I had to reared this story again and I don't retreat it :D
Thanks for the update! <3
I like how you tied everything together. It makes me a little sad that the group, especially Shippo, feels resentful but it makes sense.
I'm really looking forward to Sesshomaru's POV!
You story is great, you are a wonderful writer cannot wait for the next update!!! <(^_^)>
Lace (Chapter 8) - Mon 02 Jun 2014
Great chapter, it was everything I hoped it would be! I am SO excited now, I can't wait to see how interactions between Sesshoumaru and Kagome's group will go; especially with whatever deal her and the demon lord strike up with each other. The most striking line in this was when Kagome realized the price of great power was sacrifice. Wonderful tie into the story, to compare all three great mikos to one another.
I'm so happy right now <33 I think I might have screamed a little when I saw the update LOL. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter :)
You need to conntiue this story. What a cliffhanger. :)
Your a great writer...this story right from the start had me hook. To the point i have reread it so many times that it's basically engraved in my mind. I keep looking for this paticular story update...but so far i have seen none. I hope you update very soon. I've been looking forward for more chapters to what has felt like forever. So looking forward to an update to a wonderful story.
Saw fanart for this and started to read it. I love it! Great work, I really really hope you update it soon!!
ToniB (Chapter 7) - Mon 26 May 2014
Sooooooo I'm trying to figure out why your other stories are being updated, but not this one. I'm not upset or anything! It's not like I've been checking EVERY SINGLE DAY for an update. However, it would be much appreciated if this story was updated ASAP!!!!
You're writing is fantastic. I'm loving the pacing of the story and I'm looking forward to the second half. I can't even wrap my head around how Sesshoumaru will respond to Kagome's presence now. It's going to be crazy, I'm sure. Can't wait!
well I've braced myself... To be true... Sunce you have posted the stark guy... How much longer?
Lace (Chapter 7) - Sat 03 May 2014
It's been a long time since I have been this excited about reading fanfiction...
Darkfics have always been my kryptonite- and you do it so wonderfully, it makes me want to draw a million things that come to mind while I read. Each character is so grounded in their personalities, giving so much weight to their interactions, and it is icing on the cake that is your writing. The reunion of Kagome and Sesshoumaru will happen eventually, but I find myself wondering how Sango will react when Kagome returns...
I'm not sure what music you prefer, but if you need a bit of inspiration, I have a playlist I made while I was drawing a piece for Stasis. Dark and moody stuff is just my bread and butter, and music always spurs me on.
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL23jgSslhUkVhHQQrs1pneL8dNdWl4Hk3
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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