Great chapter, keep it coming.
My dear, dear authoress!!!!!!!! I'm so delighted to see you back and updating this intriguing story yet again... I've no doubt you will throw your usual twists, turns and cliffhangers in there as always, and it makes me so very happy! Love the intrigue thus far, as well as the nice, healthy three chapter update!
I'm very sorry to hear that things are not going better for you since your last update. I will, as always, send as much positive energy and hopes for better days your way! BIG HUGS!!!!!!!!!!
<3
~~me~~
Good chapters, keep it coming Happy New Year
Ankita (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Jan 2015
threee chaptersss back to backkk i m in heavennnn <3 i hope you get the much needed rest :) and thank you for not forgetting about us and updating chappies ^_^ and lovelyyy chapterrr
You know, sometimes I honestly hate when people put things out in stores that aren't for sale. I mean, I get the oldman's feeling that a gun like that shouldn't always be locked away in a vault, but he should have had other guns that might have been of interest to someone and then be sure to have a sign stating that the colt revolver wasn't not for sale but for admirer's interest only.
I think if Sessh isn't careful he might just scare Kagome away with the way he kept looking at her. It always creeps me out when a guy stares and seems to want something without saying anything. If he's smart, he'll try telling her he'd like to take her out for coffee, tea, or maybe a drink if she wants to. That he finds her attractive and being rather new in town would like to maybe be friends. Otherwise his little interest may be shut down quick.
I'm glad I come on to check for updates. It's always such fun when I get to read your fics. Are you able to stay around longer this time? I've really missed you, Lady. Take care.
Love ya, JEN
Ok, so Sesshoumaru is in law enforcement. Detective? Overworked, overstressed and put on vacation? ...or is he knowledgable of Naraku and his underhanded goings on?
Well, once a cop, always a cop. It's hard not to question things that don't seem to add up in one's mind...and Kagome is acting out of the ordinary to Sessh so...questions....
I like that InuYasha and Sessh pretty much get along. I always love when you don't bash InuYasha in your fics. Even if you make their relationship strained and haborring on killing each other, you always manage to make it work out for them to remain brothers.
On to the next chapter...Write me.... Hugs, JEN
Thank you, my dear, dear friend for dedicating this to me. *bows respectfully* I am honored. Yes, I've never once forgotten you either. I pray for you and your family often. I have to admit that both PJ and I have worried over your financial statis as we, too, have gone through the same thing. We are barely getting by now but at least we still have our home and car. Another dear friend I met here on Dokuga was generous enough to help us finish paying our land taxes when our furnice caught fire and took most of our money for the taxes. She was a blessing in dire time.
Now on to the story, I'm wondering what Kagome has gotten herself involved in that she'd have to go on the run. I've figured that she was probably set up and framed for whatever it is, but I'm glad it brought her to InuYasha. And Inu has kids...alone! It's kind of hard to see him as a single parent, but he seems to have a good handle on his kids. He probably remembers himself at their age.
Now what's up up with Sesshoumaru needing to discuss his being there with the local sheriff? You just know how curious I am. Well, on to the next chapter. It was nice of Sesshoumaru to help Kagome out after her nearly getting herself run over. He's usually not one to talk and this was a nice change as he tried to help her cope with her near accident.
Now on to the next chapter...write me, Oroyukae. Even a few lines is better than not knowing if you're ok, you hear?!?
Love ya lots, Lady O! JEN
Nice, keep it coming.
Ankita (Chapter 6) - Sat 30 Aug 2014
Yayyyy new chapter ?
Oh my gosh! I have been a vey bad friend , huh? I guess everytime this was updated I wasn't up to being online and it seems as if my email puts many of the update messages into my spam folder which I don't even bother to look at. They delete automatically for me. I was wondering why I hadn't seen a few updates on my favorite authors when I decided to peek and there was your name several days ago but I've had a bad tooth crack and open a raw nerve so I've not been on for over a week. One girl actually emailed PJ about me as PJ is doing Beta work for her fic.
So How have you been? You wrote me and I wrote back but you didn't respond. I guessed you must be busy and I always understand what you're going through. Like me RL can be a real kicker, but things are getting better now. Write me and we'll talk. I really miss you and your fics. I often find my self re reading your stuff when I'm in the mood for your style of writing. I love your character developement and the flow of your fics and your characters are always so true to their original. I also adore how you rarely if ever make InuYasha the villian.
So you've got Naraku using Kagome as a scapegoat in this one. She trusts too easily at times, but it's true to her nature to always look for the good in people and in this case, she now a murder suspect. He is always a devious one. I wonder what Sessh does in this one? He sounds like a lawyer or maybe criminologist. (sp?) The kind that can detect lies from people's body language and speech patterns.He's be good at that. Whatever it is, it seems he's taking a very quick vacation that isn't in his normal routine to do so considering he has'nt visited his brother and family for 9 years. That's a long time for a man that has great affection for his brother's children and by the suit Kagome said he wore and his mannerisms speaks of money is of little consequence to him, so visits to these chilren he loves would have been more often if his job wasn't so overly demanding. I've got to wonder what it is his hiding from or maybe, looking for?
So I'm intrigued as always. I'm sorry our lives have kept us from talking. I hope since you are writing again that we can message more often. Write through Dokuga as my email got hacked again I've had to change my password multiple times to be sure it's been stopped. I'm sorry if any of it may have looked like it was from me but I will never send links for you to go to if I use email. PJ's email also got hacked recently and her one friend called very upset by it but there isn't much we can do since the hackers can tell we use fanfiction often and try to lure our contacts into a line from some made up story then add a link hoping to infect their computers. Such a bother...anyway, I'm glad you are back. Those were many of my happiest days when you were writing fics. Much Love, Girlfriend!!! Gentle Hugs and Kisses! JEN
Well that was smooth... Hope their next meeting goes better...
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming
So excited to see a new story! Can't wait to see what happens next. I adore stories where the brothers actually get along. :)
Haven (Chapter 4) - Thu 17 Oct 2013
Okay, this is rare but I actually like Yasha in this. I usually have a strong dislike for him but you've portrayed him very realistically and NOT immature. I really liked the way you set this at the gas station, too. I can totally imagine it because we've all held up lines at the bank or grocery stores or post office whilst shooting the shit with someone we run into. Thanks!
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