Omg I am loving this story so much! Beautifully written and exptremelt entertainin! I hope you decide to pick wroting back up again! This fandom needs writers like you!

I stayed up till 3 am reading this FF. ...... I honestly haven't read a story this good since probably 2014. I look forward to many morechapters, hopefully soon.

great chapters! i can't hardly wait for the next installments!!!

I am trully sorry. I left the wrong review for this story and gave kudos to the wrong author for the wrong story. I am just starting to read this story and I was also finishing up the other story. Please forgive my blunder and I will make sure when I review your story I will do it right, again I feel like such an idiot. lol

Another good chapter. I liked how Kagome kicked that gang's butt, too bad she got hurt in the process. But at least her and Sessho got over their misunderstandings and are back being friends again. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it going cindygirl! Oh and thanks for the updates, they are great. :)

more!! must have more!! it's so not fair how you suck my into all your amazing stories....

Ah, I knew she'd come back. She is as curious and attracted to him as he is toward her. Oh you write some of the most sensual, steamy sex scenes ever. I'm awed by your descriptiveness through out the whole scene while each person is thinking within themselves. So true in real life interaction during sex. My husband used to always tell me to stop over thinking and to just let my body and mind free with just feeling him loving me and he hated with a passion whenever I talked during the lovin', but, I could whisper sweet nothings and pleasurable sounds to him that always seemed to spur him on. Oh, to be young and free and have him back in this life with me again...

You've done an awesome job, as always. Don't leave your true talent of writing just because we're getting older...remember... we age like a fine wine and having experiencing things in life that many of these young writer have not. Allow the new generation time to get to know your writing style and write a few oneshots like "Deserving" and you'll see, they will stay and get hooked as I.

I miss you, dear friend... I have learned that life is so short...so short indeed. For as long as you still write, I will review.

Gentle hugs, JEN

Oh how cruel of you to stop in the middle of a very hot and passionate night! Hahahaha! Love the new chapter!! =D

Looking forward to the steamy continuation! Hahaha! Thank you for updating! 

I'm always at the edge of my seat! I was extremely excited to see that you are continuing with it. I can hardly wait for the next chapter and the continuation of this story. keep up the great work!!

Would the fear of dogs be related to Naraku?

Oh my gosh that was awesome I can't wait until you update again you are definitely one of my favorite authors on here your stories are always awesome and the details are so great I can visualize the happenings and that is how you know it's a great read

Welcome back, my friend. It's been a long time...too long! You haven't lost your touch though. You still write one of the sexiest love encounters ever!!! So slow, sensual, and oh, so romantic! You totally rock!!!!

I've missed you a lot. I've written you but alas, no replies. Either you aren't recieving them or perhaps you don't wish to speak to me any longer? It's ok either way. You'll always be a friend to me and I'll always pray for you and your family. I understand Real Life gets in the way and we often time need to take care of the present RL than concern ourselves with our computer friends.

I've very recently had a heartbreaking thing happen in my life. One I'm finding great difficulty coming back from, so I understand not having time to message old friends we made on the computer, but I just want you to know as always, I love you, my sweet Lady O. I'll always be here on Dokuga. I'm eternally hooked you see and though I may have to take a few days to several away, I always check in for messages...just in case.

Take good care of yourself, you hear? You are always in my thoughts and my prayers.

Love, gentle hugs and kisses,

Tana_san, alias JEN LAZAR

I'm still dying to know what happens next!! Does the creepy henchman find her? Gets too close? Will sesh figure out what she is hiding and why she is so apprehensive?? Please update soon!! ^_^ 

I am chomping at the bit to know what happens next!!! I hope you post soon. You have an amazing writing style and imagination. this has to be my favorite story so far next to "Wrong Number" 

this story is going great. cant wait until its done. i am looking forward to the rest of the story. i hope there will be juicy lemons in there. i also like the fact that inuyasha has a family besides sesshoumaru. please finish it so i can give a good review on it. c'ya'

So we now get to hear from Naraku/Onigumo. Looks like he's starting to piece together what Kagome had planned when she went on the run. Most would try to get lost in a big city but she grew tired and settled down in a small town for now. Good thing she used a different name. It'll make it a little more difficult to find her. It'll be kind of sad for her if she's found again after coming to like the town and people she's met. She even has had a chance to love but I think once she finds out about Sesshoumaru's job, she'll want to leave quick.

I also like how what happened with Kira going missing and having the whole town looking for her has made an impact on her. She's now understanding just how irresponsible she's been and the friends she has don't always care about her the way she thought. She has a better insight into her father and brother's love for her. Yasha's doing a great job with raising his kids as any single parent knows just how difficult it is. It's hard enough raising kids with two parents and being single, well, I applaud them all.

Take care, Lady O. It's always so wonderful to have an update or new fic from you. I miss you!

JEN

Really really happyyy to see a changed kiraaa never expected her to be so understanding goood too see that she cares about her father n brother :) nice chapter

Oh how I just love when you write. Can I tell you how much I've missed you and wondered why you never wrote back? No need for long conversations, just a hello and I'm ok would due. I don't know why my messages don't get to you but know this, you are and always will be my friend, Lady O. I know just how bad life has gotten, for both of us, but we are still alive and I miss my friend.

I wish I had time to write a review for every chapter but I just come back from a long health related time and I just couldn't stop reading your story as another dear friend and I just caught each other online at the same time. It reminded me that I needed to tell you again that I am still alive and though sometimes down from my disibilities, I always come back to Dokuga to read and take me to places I will never go.

I seriously identified with InuYasha in this. I was so happy to find out that Kira was indeed alright and had her Uncle with her when she was found. I can imagine her breakdown in tears would have left her on the ground had not Uncle Sessh been there to stand by her side. Feeling his tight squeeze she knew how bad it was and hearing about a child that was never found to this day would have me so scared too. I saw InuYasha's face as he and Sesshoumaru were reliving those moments. I can honestly say that when a loved one dies we sometimes go through seeing and talking to them as if they were there. I still see my mother walking to the fridge to get ice and water or I'll hear her call me from her room where we keep the door shut to help keep the memories of her dying at bay. But you know, I think the worst death is that of your child. Children should never die before their parents and most definitely not from a horrifying incident. I just heard the other day a 2 yr old's body was found when he and his father were swept away from flooding waters. I found myself crying and thinking about him for hours. I prayed that God took his sweet little soul before he had to experience the death.

Anyway, I want you to know that I could never forget your fics..EVER. When you write your fics make such an impact that to this day I still re read them. I adore you my dear friend. Take care of you and I know God will too.

Love and kisses,   JEN

Cute story good setting easy pace nice sweet and fun read thx

Missed this ficc glad got 2 updatesss please please please update sooonn