this story is amazaing! It made me laugh, cry, angry, happy, outraged and so many more emotions at the same time. You have a way with words, and i had so many other awesome things to say...but i just can't describe the emotions and how astounded i feel for this story, and you, its author.  So i'll simply embrace the silence of this story's beauty.

There are so many things to say, and silence won't work for a review. This fan fiction stepped outside all bounds for me. I clicked it expecting the same tirade of cold demon, and loving miko charade. I am a San Diego firefighter and I would like to thank you for weaving in medical procedures and protocals within this. Next to Rosie B and her history facts, you are beside her with the usage. This story is original, but could be real somewhere in the world as we read. Ive worked in SNFs and ERs and watched things like this. The way you tell your story is beautiful and crafted in thoughtful hands. Thank you so much forputting your effort into it andcompleting it. 

Honest to god, I had read this fic AGES ago, and I keep coming back simply because it was AMAZING. It tore my heart to shreds and healed it all at once, the perfection of the tragedy and the hope for better tomorrows killed me entirely. YOU ARE AMAZING.

Just... That was so beautiful!!! *cries tears of rapture* (No literally, you made me cry...)

I have absolutely loved this story so far!  As a pre-medical student, I really appreciate the detail with which you've described treatments and procedures--and you've woven it into the the story so elegantly!  I also enjoy how in-character both Sesshomaru and Kagome are--with only realistic changes having occurred.  The only thing I find slightly lacking is some history with Kagome and her family.  I find myself wondering whatever happend to her mother and brother, what they think of Kagome and her job, etc.  Anyway, thanks so much for writing!  I am excited to continue :-)

HAH! YO ALMOST GOT ME THERE! I KNEW HE'S NOT DEAD! NOT MY SESSHY! 

OH MY POOR SESSHY! COME HERE BABY!

Wow, imagining him in that shirt made me drool. It reminded me of Keiki in 12 Kingdoms. He had the same ensemble but Keiki couldnt hold a candle on Sesshoumaru. Love your story.

This is only the 3rd story i have read t make me cry and imean CRY. The 21st chapter got me,

Wonderful story.

WOW! This is an amazing story! So very well written. Very descriptive, deeply emotional, and truly powerful. I don't know if this has been said, but this NEEDS to be made into a movie. Now when I say that, I mean a "box-office" movie--not a rinky-dink Liftime flick. I mean, I was completely swept up in this story; it took me about ten minutes to come back to myself after I finsihed reading it. And the song, "I Know What Love Is", was the icing on the cake. The ending combined with that song made me cry. You are superbly talented and I greatly look forward to reading more stories from you. Kudos!!!!!

Reading this story was so deep that I felt I was pulled in far into it's depth living every minute, seeing every detail for my self and when it ended, it felt like i was deposited back to earth reminding me I have a life of my own to live. You have set a whole knew standard to Fanfiction writing. I love this. I commend you and thank you for such a wonderful way to escape the dreary world of reality.

D.o.D

OMFG! I totally loved your FF! You have done such great job. It was breathtaking and beautiful, a real masterpiece.

Thank you so much for writing this amazing story :'D

...I've read this before, I think... 

I absolutely love it. Your style of writing, the plot, the IC-ness of the characters, and the, I dunno, real-ness of your OCs. You've got some real talent in writing! 

Tears are still in my eyes, that was THE BEST fanfic I've ever read. Probably the best fiction I've ever read. Thank You.

OMG You had me crying the entire 21 chapter. I just couldn't stop the tears once he said his heart had stopped. God this was just such a heart renching story I don't think I would every be able to write such a story. It was so great thank you for writing for us to read!!

Beautiful story, it really did make me laugh out loud a few times, and the sad parts didn't seem cheesy or overdramatic like I unfortunantly run in to often. Wonderful and thank you for sharing it :)