Love the stoned Sesshomaru and the emotional one as well.
Hehe, you're channeling Fugue again (love it):
"One day, this will be you under the sheet."
A lump formed in her throat. "But not today."
"No," he whispered, "not today."
On another note, not a bad idea having the sexy Dr be a descendant of Naraku - but is he descended from Naraku or Onigumo? One would think he'd have to be descended from Naraku in order to even have a chance at having similar features, but I can't really imagine Naraku hiring a prostitute and getting her pregant, that seems much more like Onigumo's MO
Nysrina (Chapter 11) - Thu 22 Apr 2010
Naraku's descendent (should've spotted the anagram!), Rin's lookalike and the moon talking to a certain Dog Lord who smoked opium (I choked on my french fry here). I am quite entertained. Heh.
The last two chapters were amazing :]
Please keep up the great work ^^
Oh man I hope he survive the surgery but I have a feeling he won't...*sniff* Such a good chappie and I should have know that doctor Kanrau was related to Naraku.
I had a feeling that doctor had something to do with Naraku. I just hope he's as innocent as he seems. Eventually, I bet he figures out just who she really is.
If Sesshoumaru's health changes for the better and he still has his long life ahead of him, please don't take Kagome away from him by leaving her with a human's lifespan. He's been through enough and I think it would only make it worse for him without her.
Come on Sesshy survive!!!! Hehehehe he was stoned, wow!!!!! I wish I was there to see it. Please update soon!!!
fatcatmom (Chapter 11) - Wed 21 Apr 2010
Another great chapter. Had a feeling Doctor B was onto Sess--and his being a descendant of Naraku is very freaky. Very sweet how she spent his last evening watching the sunset. Let's see how Sess handles hospital food! Also looking forward to how he (and she) addresses his PTSD. One small comment when you were writing about the cost of Sess's medical bills draining his account: people are bankrupted by medical bills in the U.S. but not in Japan. From an article in the Washington Post on the Japanese medical system, the self-employed and the unemployed in Japan must pay about $1,600 a year for insurance coverage. I work with a lot of contractors who pay almost this amount for family medical coverage for one month.
@_@ *fidgets nervously* I really hope he makes it through the surgery... it's kind of scary with all the detail you put into it >.<
One the other hand, the Doc being Naraku's descendant? That was crazy scary I hope he doesn't go all homocidal like Naraku did. And that Rin girl, i wonder if she really is RIn's reincarnation? That would be kind of cool!
Also I looked up the translations for what Sesshomaru said in the earlier chapters and you had me feeling all wamr and uffzy inside! That was so cute!
Anywho awesome as always, can't wait to see what happens tomorrow! And I really hope he makes it out alright!
tika_taki (Chapter 11) - Wed 21 Apr 2010
i enjoy reading your story so much that i couldnt hold my tears! poor sesshou.. being immortal is sad since you'll be living the world alone, left by your loved ones, one by one. but please dont kill sesshoumaru either.. kagome would be left broken-hearted :(
Eee, not much of a cliff hanger but I'll be pondering the outcome until tomorrow. & I work late tomorrow so I can't read it as soon as it's posted, lol. Sweet, sweet torture. I'm such a light weight with medical and hosptial stuff, even just reading about it make me feel as if I'm going to pass out!
jgem (Chapter 11) - Wed 21 Apr 2010
I just can't get enough of this story. You have me smiling all goofy like one minute and then worried the next. And right now, I'm anxious to see how the surgery went. I will tune in tomorrow....
I want to begin by apologizing for being absent, I was out of town and barely got back. I really missed this story!
This chapter was one that made me look deep inside, it was extremelly moving in a way that it got me thinking about how much we take life for granted sometimes.
I am terrified about the outcome of the surgery, and I hope everything goes well; I think it would be way sad if something happened to Sessho.
Onigumo's child? Wow, I didn't really expect that one, but it was really well done!
Now I feel as if I am left in a waiting room, waiting to hear how everything went, but saddly I won't find out until tomorrow!
Thank you so much for sharing again! You remain a fantastic writer, and I really, really love this story!
Hugs:
MidCat
Wonderfully and masterfully done. I read this from end to end, and enjoyed every word. I was thinking Naraku as well--but--good thing the good doctor is a Good Doctor. ;) Though I think he suspects that Kagome is the time travelling incarnation. He's intelligent enough to know that she knows far more about him that she lets on.
Sesshoumaru vulerable--it is portrayed very well, and you have him pegged. I know from experience about dignity (and at times, the lack of it) and the medical field.
I look forward to the surgical/post surgical chapter.
BW
Saide (Chapter 11) - Wed 21 Apr 2010
Gyuh! I'm as nervous as Kagome here, Sesshomaru going under the knife and what will happen next I wonder...*spazzes from nervousness* It's making me cry ;___;
*imagines the voice over on TV: Stay Tuned tomorrow for the next episode of Embrace The Silence...*
And thank you for your comment on my recent art, I'm really glad you liked it :3
Awwww!!! Poor Sesshy, loved the theme parks though. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
That was so sad! Poor Sesshomaru, to have lived as long as he has and been faced with all that hardship... I think he needs a hug ^.^ ANd she's lucky he's not easily scared, those amusement park rides can be pretty daunting lol. Another great chapter, can't wait to see what happens tomorrow!
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 10) - Tue 20 Apr 2010
You gave me such amusing mental pictures in this chapter. Sesshoumaru at Disneyland has to be one of the most entertaining things I've read in a while XD
Poor guy has so many painful memories. I think you're doing a magnificent job in balancing out the chapters with good stuff and bad. I can't wait till tomorrow ^_^
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