Giggle. I recongnized most of the med words in chapter one except for a few. This STNA learn something new everyday! Reading chapter one made me feel like I was at work again (I am employed in a nursing home as well, the short-term "hospital to home" section). It is always jumpin' and there is no set schedule that the residents like to follow like in the long term sections, so it is considered the hardest section.
I like the story so far, true to form and funtion of a nursing facility.
I also hug you for being strong enough to work in one as well! *huggles*
Well this is the first time I heard about reverse sneezing. XD I think I learn a lot of things from reading your fic. Those medical ones are great. Interesting as a matter of facts. XD And gosh, Sessh sure have a disgusting habit here and there,
While I loved this chapter, I found the funniest part to be his cold because I have one with the exact same symptoms while I am writing this...Haha.
Looking foward to tomorrow's update!
Saide (Chapter 19) - Thu 29 Apr 2010
Sesshomaru enjoying an Oreo. Priceless.
But what's more priceless is him having a cold and sneezing! Another one to add to the list. <3333333333
LOL poor, poor Sesshoumaru!! It sure sucks to catch a cold, but to use a mug as a phlegm spittoon?? LOL!! That was hilarious. I love the cute Oreo scene and the rest room scene with Hana too:) Kiss in the rain was a perfect scene. You write everything so well, be it serious, funny, informative or romantic.
Nysrina (Chapter 18) - Thu 29 Apr 2010
This fanfic is my drug. I kid you not.
The music is a medley of 'The Heart Asks The Pleasure First' and 'The Promise', I think. :D I dug out my old CD and am listening to it as I type. I cannot imagine a track more appropriate.
You're an amazing storyteller. I love this chapter for so many things, but I am particularly captured by how you wove the story of Inupapa and Izayoi into the tale, echoes of the episode where Kagome held Sesshoumaru's heart during the surgery. Literally, figuratively, his heart is hers.
I am one satisfied fangirl.
This is my favorite chapter till date! The lemon was beautiful, passionate, romantic and it came at the perfect time. I absolutely loved it; it was gorgeous!! Well done :) The tale of the thorn bird sure was tragic; it was a perfect description of the relationship Sesshoumaru and Kagome are caught in. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! (though I have an exam tomorrow LOL)
Loved this chapter!! This is my favorite out of all of them so far, not just because of the smut, but because... O don't know but I think you might already know how I feel since you wrote it. Great chapter, please update soon!!!
0.0 *blinks stupidly* wow... that was hawt... and you were right, the song went perfectly with it. And I totally loved the story about his father and Izayoi, as soon as he told her I thought that's who it was about, but I also realized that he was pretty much telling Kagome that she had his heart, at least in his own way.
I know he cares about her and isn't the type of guy to say silly things like 'I love you' but I kind of hope he will, at least once... and that's if he does. I know he's got a lot of stuff to work out before anything super concrete can come about, and at the same time it's sad because Kagome won't live as long as he will... what will he do then?
Love it as always and I can't wait for tomorrow!
dayna (Chapter 18) - Wed 28 Apr 2010
Oh my, this chapter was just so beautiful. I loved the fact that Sessy cooked for them and made it very traditional. I also laughed when the part came up about him driving. The image I get of Sessy trying to drive is just too hilarious. Now, this lemon. Very nice. I have a feeling that some through their joining they were able to heal even if it was just a little bit. I cant wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapter, it should prove to be very interesting.
What a beautiful chapter! I love it :]
Please keep up the great work!
Kaza (Chapter 18) - Wed 28 Apr 2010
That was amazing!
*satisfied grin* I think I may need to read that again. :3
Liked it, loved it want more of it...
One little thing... smelled like veal? shouldn't that be vension?
Saide (Chapter 18) - Wed 28 Apr 2010
*wipes sweat away from forehead*
primal and sensual...damn. :3 I love it.
And if you noticed, I made a new artz today >D
:sigh: Another chapter worth waiting for.
Love Sesshomaru learning to drive.
Sesshomaru's dinner was so cool. I loved it!
It was a beautiful lemon. Very well done.
:SIGH again: Now I have to wait till tomorrow for the next chapter.
Saide (Chapter 17) - Tue 27 Apr 2010
Fury exploded behind her chest and lanced down her arm. She slapped him harder than anything she ever hit in her life. The sound of skin on skin was deafening and the impact twisted his head completely to the side. Had he been at full strength, such a blow would not have moved him at all. Her palm stung. She watched the red handprint blossom on his flawless skin.
Sesshomaru has never been slapped...ever! :O Moar arts in the to-do list! <3
I really love what you have going on here!
It is unlike anything i've read to date!
I loved the Star Trek Jargon! "Are you out of your Vulcan Mind?"
I love the Historical references, especially in Sesshoumaru's Journal! He caused Issac Newton to come up with his theory on Gravity! Simply Brilliant!
There are a lot of scenes i can pick out, but I just want to say that over all, this is Mind Boggling!
You have a good knowledge of Medical procedures and that knowledge made this more realistic!
Good luck
I cannot wait for the next installment!
fatcatmom (Chapter 17) - Tue 27 Apr 2010
Very emotional chapter. Rings very true with families who have faced mental heath issues for their loved ones. The snapping fingers thing is new to me- what a great therapy so our demon can banish his demons! Still wonder if Kanrau fancies our Kags, but he is right about the male bond thing and Sess testing her.... Looking forward to the next chapter of the long and rocky path.
Well you sure named that chapter well, self doubt can really suck and sometimes it can do more harm than the actual problem. But at least Kagome has Kanrau to help her get through it. And I can understand why Sesshomaru would test Kagome, to many years of being alone and not being able to trust anyone would make anyone wary, and him even mrore so since he was never very trusting to begin with.
Another great one!
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