Wow. It's very refreshing to see a story where there's a new plot, a new way of tossing Kagome and Sesshomaru together. I'm really enjoying this, and I think that nursing goes along with Kagome's nature very well, despite the fact that Sesshomaru is, obviously, a little out of it at the moment.
The only thing that I can see being difficult is all the medical jargon ... I think that people can read it without getting too worked up about all the words (I actually tend to just skip over them, and your chapters are so long that by the time I get to the end, I don't remember which word is used where, so I don't look at that either) but it is a little hard to read something that you don't know anything about. One of the things I would suggest (although I know that you're too far ahead to really do this) is to write out the slang terms the first time and abbreviate them the second time, so that we have some sort of inkling as to the meaning of the abbreviations.
But, other than that, this is a very refreshing and well-read fic! Good job, and keep up the great work! Much Love,
~Aubrey
Lena (Chapter 2) - Mon 12 Apr 2010
Well so far so good. This is different I've never come across a story like this one. I can't wait until you post the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon.
This is such an amazing story. I can't wait for more!
WHY is there always someone like Akemi? Her's is the attitude I hate more than any, and every place I've had to work has someone just like her. They make mistakes or don't show up for work, so other people always have to cover for them or clean up their mistakes. Then they have no remorse at all. When you tell them what they have caused by their behavior, they either say "whatever" or "drop it". Grrrrr! And of course, she has time to be on the phone with her boyfriend, while everyone else is scrambling to cover things. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
My husband was in a nursing home after having a hip replacement, and the little world of the nursing home really came as a surprise to me. I managed to take care of him myself, though I worked, through 3 shoulder replacements and one knee, but I couldn't handle the hip, and the physical therapy would have been totally unmanageable. The nursing home wasn't one of the super nice new facilities, like my father was in when he was recuperating from out-of-whack medications. It was old, and not very well maintained, but I was amazed at how humane and even humorous the people who worked there stayed, in spite of the relatively thankless job they were doing. I met a lot of super nice people there!
You are always such an amazing writer. You have a great imagination. I would NEVER have imagined Sessomaru in a nursing home on my own. You stimulate my brain with your creative ideas. But you go much further than that. Your characters are always well-developed, and always bear your creative spin, while maintaining the core of their personalities. I loved the part about InuYasha having a tape worm! What a great detail! And the quality of your writing could not be better.
You rock! Thank you for this and all your stories. You have given me hours of pleasure with your work!
I feel like I'm reading Grey's Anatomy. Haha. With all the technical doctor terms. However I really like the story =D
O.o What's gonna happen when he wakes up??
stars (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Apr 2010
yes please please updata
Very interesting start. I am insanely curious as to how Sesshoumaru got into the state he is in. I look forward to reading this one, it's very different from anything else I've ever read!!!!
I am so excited for this story! I am hoping to start working in a home that sounds very similar to this one, and I learned so much from just this chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
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