Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

Page 23 of 36
<< Start < Prev 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 Next > End >>
snowbird (Chapter 36) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

I still don't like all the secrecy with Kagome and Sesshoumaru.  I'm suspicious about what Mikaru said and while Kagome and Inuyasha were unconconscious maybe Sesshoumaru was informed and made his 'last stand' even more than what they had planned on it being.  But why keep Kagome in the dark?  They'll have to inform her eventually since when Inuyasha joins her he will tell her what he believes he witnessed.  I don't feel completely happy with the way things went down but I'm withholding judgment until all the facts are laid out.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 36) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Yay!  (Not yay that everything has taken a turn for the worst, but) I knew you wouldn't leave Shippou out of this *^_^*


Snowfall (Chapter 36) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Oh!  I forgot to tell you that I feel so bad for Inuyasha.  It's so sad.  I hope he's going to be alright.  *sniffle*


sweetest angel (Chapter 36) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

inuyasha broke my heart! the poor guy! *sniff*

I'm curious to know how sesshomaru is doing and why shippo (i suppose it's him) is here for?

will she know that sesshomaru isn't with the department? hope so. She looked as if she was taking the ideas of sesshomaru at the hands of the department rather well, i think but it's probably a mirage and will disappear soon. it might not have been in their plan either but I hope that they will tell them that the other is somewhere else safe, doing the same training, it might just motive them more. sesshomaru might go balistic if his beast realize that she wasn't at his side anymore, for real.

I'm so glad that you include inuyasha! ^^

And glad you update so quickly! Still, I can't wait to read more! please update as soon as you can!!


Snowfall (Chapter 36) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Thank you for giving me hope that you haven't fried Sesshoumaru's lovely ass!  ^_^  Whew!  Wonderful chapter, but I can't wait to see how our taiyoukai is doing.  Thank you for such swift updates!  Awesome job, too.  ^_^


Sess Koibito (Chapter 36) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

I was so excited to see that you updated again today!!!  Way to go, Kagome! I am soooo glad that she got to slap Miroku around for a bit! I feel so bad for Inuyasha! And what does Mikaru know? What happened to Sesshoumaru?!? I'm very interested to see what role Shippou is going to have in this story.


Megan (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

...............*young girl crying*...........

Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


kagomesirene (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

sigh...well...you won't let seshhou die...that would be kinda not so good for the future plot...

i'm sure the pile of ash is just sesshou's clothes that evaporated once he was freed from the device and took his orb form for the first time >.< at least i hope so...very please update soon C:


Tana_san (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Sesshoumaru found and accessed his ball of light he used to disappear into. EXCELLENT!!!! This whole chapter was filled with everything one would want in such an amazing story. You've done a totally phenominal job making the whole situation absolutely believable. Even InuYasha thought his brother was dead. FANTASTIC!!!! I could go on and on about how thrilled I am over this chapter but DANG my Lady, you did it GOOD!!!!

Hopefully, Miroku and the organization he works with can find a way for InuYasha to join them and InuYasha can just move away from the area and everyone would understand his leaving because of the grief he experienced seeing his only family member killed for no good reason. He, too, could be given training to control his power and his temper (there's little anyone can can do about his colorful language)  so he can join his brother and Kagome. I can't see them all being separated but then I'm not telling the story.

Anyway, until the next posting....JEN


Sess Koibito (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Woo Hoo! I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru got some revenge against the Department! He's not really dead, is he? I hope that Kagome slaps Miroku one good time! I like his character in this story, but the way he has handled the 'damage control' of their relationship just stinks. I'd be furious if I was Kagome, even if I understood the intentions. Another great chapter! :)


blndprogmmr (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Wow! What a chaper... but I think I speak for everyone that if you really killed off Sess, no place will be safe from our vengance.  Great Story.


sweetest angel (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

I still think they must include InuYasha in their plan. It is just unfair for him to stay behind, abandoned. And now that he thinks that he is the last of his clan...

He might not be a full, but I hope that, at one time or another, they will include him in their plans. It is just so unfair and I'm not really sure that he can survive or not do something stupid.

Again, you made me cry, that chapter was expensive in kleenex! lol

Nothing happened to Sesshomaru, right?

Miroku seemed fairly calm so he can't be dead...but at the same time, he had left before came back to his senses. Did they planned this to make the department believe that Sess is dead while they took him with them?

 Gah! I can't wait to have the answers! please, update as soon as it is humanly possible for you to! I'm begging you!


Brego Whitecloud (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Knocked this one out of the park!   I almost believe that Seshoumaru is gone. Almost. But then again, I will have to read to find out thr fates. Though, do believe that a pissed Kagome is a much bigger threat than a pissed Sesshoumaru.

 

Geat Job!!!

 

BW


Snowfall (Chapter 35) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

No!  He can't be dead!  What about Inuyasha?  Did they take him too?  I'm on the edge of my seat!  Gah!  Gotta run get ready for work.  Can't wait to see the next chapter.  ^_^


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 34) - Mon 25 Jan 2010

Oooo, so that explains the bitch!  Geeze, does she know how to hold a grudge or what? 

Another fabulous chapter, I absolutely love the playfulness between Sesshoumaru and Kagome; they're so cute together ^_^ 


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 34) - Sun 24 Jan 2010

I AM LOVING YOUR STORY!!!! I just started it last night finished this last chapter, PLEEEAAAASSSEEEEE update soon, I feel like a crack addict, I NEED it! >X3


loveyaa (Chapter 34) - Sat 23 Jan 2010

I hope that Kagome and Sesshoumaru get picked up by the right people. I mean they're gonna have enough of a hard time. One disaster at a time...can't wait to see what damage is done and when Sesshouramu is gonna tell Kagome that she is the one :)


Snowfall (Chapter 34) - Sat 23 Jan 2010

Oooh, that bitch!  I'm on the edge of my seat.  I sure hope Inuyasha isn't at the apartment when whatever blow up there is takes place.  *wrings hands*


Tana_san (Chapter 33) - Sat 23 Jan 2010

And so the mystery slowly unfolds...I, too, would hate to be forced to use my intellect for creating something so disgusting. I can feel for the man and am happy he was able to escape his torment and help correct the errors he was forced to make. Great chapter.  JEN


loveyaa (Chapter 33) - Fri 22 Jan 2010

I am really excited for this new character, the uncle. I love it when characters come in and cause chaos. I am quite looking forward for wat should happen next and how taking Sesshoumaru and Kagome in will work out. Til next time!!


Page 23 of 36
<< Start < Prev 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 Next > End >>

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.