| So, I just finished reading chapters 1-17 and I must say that you, my friend, are intense. You have this amazing power that turns me into an emotional wreck everytime I read your work. It is just phenomenal.
Perfect!!! That could not have been done better.
That chapter was very beautifully and simply written. I liked it a lot. I don't think Sesshy should have let Rin send him away from Kagome at the end of the chapter, though. Sigh.
| I must say again how talented you are. I just come off feeling everything you have tried to convey in your writing. Kagome may have a way before healing but I think Sesshoumaru will need to accept that he too needs to heal and accept that he cannot hold himself responsible for what happened to either of them. Wouldn't it be something if it were InuYasha that helps him through his healing process? Though he may seem crude in many ways, InuYasha(in the series)has a deep loyality to his pack and a love that he may not speak of but we know that's there. JEN
I like this new, more vulnerable Kagome.
excellent read as usual ^^
Sigh, I love this story so much...
I want more now!!! (Three-year-old thowing a tantrum) Pretty, pretty please? Whipped cream, chopped nuts, and a cherry on top?
THIS IS THE BEST!!!
Ladydot (Chapter 11) - Sat 07 Mar 2009
Such an amazing story. Its really brilliant and i can't wait for the next chapter! Kepp up the great work :)
| You had to go to the store right now? Come on, that's just mean and you know it.
Wow, great writing. That was intense!
Wow, what a turnaround after the first few chapters. This chapter was really touching. I like the contrast.
I wonder what it is that Sess senses is troubling Kagome? Nice foreshadowing, of what I do not know! What's Sess wearing? Is he a bit of a masochist? (Don't tell me, I love the suspense!) I like the part about him being her rebellious toy. That was a very nice touch. Telling so much with so few words.
Lena (Chapter 10) - Fri 06 Mar 2009
| OMG I love this story, but that last chapter was so sad. It brought tears to my eyes, and I have read a couple of stories where someone was raped, but this one just broke my heart. But I still love this story, keep up the great work and update soon.
| Oh my...this is a very, hmm, (tears) hard thing to read. Most brutal indeed. I could feel her pain and desire to have Sesshoumaru end her torment as she was obviously a virgin and it was going to happen again until that sicko got his fill. I must let you know though that your warning is at the end of the first rape and needs to be at the top of the page. I know many will not like what they will read even though they are warned. This might be a fic but it was well written and just knowing that neither one of them could do a thing about it was the worst. I hope you do justice to all those involved in this, especially the rapist and the sicko. I admire their strength and control up to this point but NO ONE with a heart could take watching that, let alone stay sane knowing it will happen again soon. JEN
All right, I'm picturing a cross between a more mature Kagome and Cat Woman, and Sess in black cargo pants and Cat boots... oh dear me....
marquisha (Chapter 9) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
| It is amazing on how u update so fast i mean super fast!!! That was unexpected for kagome to do to get her full power. can't wait for more
marquisha (Chapter 8) - Thu 05 Mar 2009
| OMG!!!!!!!! Those bastards are beating up my gurl Kagome and my boofriend Fluffy. I so luv tha chapter. I hope one of them kick tha bad guys azz sooner or later. Please update because i want more more more.
| You, are a wonderful, talented writer. Your fics are extremely intriguing and addictive. You seem to be able to write quite a few at one time without taking away any of the quality of the others. Either you are a rare talent or you have written many fics and are posting at close intervels. I am fasinated with your work either way. I have yet to find a piece of your work that I do not picticularly like. You have portrayed our beloved couple beautifully and believable to their anime characteristics. Some OOC fics are so far out that I just can't read them futher but you keep them just true enough to make the story work with them as the leading pair. Great job. JEN
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