| Good Lord, a master piece, I say! That was beyond great! Congratulations!
You had me going there- I was sure Inuyasha was going to screw it up! Are Rin or Sango going to butt in again?
| awwwwww.....so cute im glad that they are back together
Ashes (Chapter 24) - Mon 16 Mar 2009
Vile clifhanger... but great story.
| Please check your messages and let me know what you think. Great job so far by the way. JEN
I hope that she does come back to talk to him if she runs i think i will cry! Great story and good chapter i can't wait to read the next one.
| not sure, but I think I smell a trap.
A very nice, tight chapter. Are Bank and Sango going to get together? I like them as a couple...
| InuYasha should be thanking whatever god that will listen that Sesshoumaru didn't just kill him and be done with his idiotic foulups. After all the time he's spent living around his brother and he still thinks to "help" Sessh out? He needs to grow up and stop thinking that sex is the answer to every stressful problem. And our dear Rin needs to either help her father or convince him to talk to Kagome, even if that means blackmailing him. She never promised him that she would tell Kagome her father has feelings for her, so it's not unethical or betrayal. Oh and I too am glad that the site problems are clearing up. JEN
With friends like these, who needs enemies? I knew it was a mistake for Sess to let Rin serve as therapist for him and Kagome. The way things are turning out illustrates why it that would be considered unethical, or at least inappropriate, in real life.
Y? (Chapter 20) - Thu 12 Mar 2009
I love your writing. I've read all of your fanfics on Dokuga. But please please please can you give this one a happy ending? Everyday when I get home from work the first thing I do after I check my email is check for an update on your stories. I followed Wrong Number from the beginning and I was so depressed from the ending! It had started so happy and ended with this depressing hopelessness and doom. Since this one started out so violently can you consider giving it a happy ending? =)
sunset in love (Chapter 20) - Thu 12 Mar 2009
| you are simply one talented being, a simple plot could go whole lot extra miles, yet, it's getting better and better... though i really wish for them both to understand their feeling towards each other the soonest possible
Wow, fast update! Another really well-written chapter, just so sad... which is not a complaint, but a compliment. You are so good at expressing emotion!
Oh, that's so sad! Poor Sessh! She can't leave him now...
well that chapter made me cry! *sniff*
poor sesshomaru. If rin don't tell what is happening with sesshomaru then i don't know what will happen to him but it will be nothing good.
hope things will go better in the next chapter!
| Looks like this little venture to a club could help loosen Sesshoumaru up alittle if he can just allow himself a chance to enjoy it. Maybe with a few drinks inside him he can open up to Kagome about his feelings. Liquor has a way of making one uninhibited so maybe... I kind of thought that he would be the one feeling alone and empty after this. Kagome has it in her mind that she is "damaged" and therefore she is no longer looking for "the one" but hasn't she given thought to how he might feel? She's thinking alot about what she THINKS he feels but not talking and asking how he feels. I think they both need to stop assuming at this point what the other feels and get together and open up. Rin should have suggested this at some point because as Sesshoumaru said in the beginning, they were both involved. Hmm, sorry if I'm getting overly involved in this. I know it's just a fic but you have made it seem so real in a sense. Great work. JEN
sweetest angel (Chapter 18) - Wed 11 Mar 2009
| I ache to see sesshomaru like that! I'm afraid of what kagome will do now. If she leave like that then he had a good probability to fall in severe depression. Will someone saw it before Kagome do something stupid? If not kagome, will someone see that it is somewhere her fault? before it's too late?
Please, update soon!!!
| I, too, see no problem with taking solace within each others presence. Whether that be in day or night time. As long as they both are being open and honest with what has happened and are able to speak about what happened and move forward in healing, why not? They do have to accept that they need to stand on their own but there's time enough for that. Who has the right to say how long it takes for someone to accept their trauma and move on? It's not as if they have to be in each others presence every waking moment to cope, that would signal a severe problem, not this.... Take care if you're not feeling well. You do more upating than anyone I've seen in a while. Life needs to happen for you too. JEN
This is so interesting. I am afraid that Sango, and even Rin are going to freak Kagome out and ruin things with Sess. I just get the feeling that they are starting to make her feel like what they are doing is not right.
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