Woah! This was a thrilling chapter! I loved it! All of the action had my heart thumping. Great chapter--I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm glad you're a swift updater. ^_~ Great chemistry between them.
The fact that Inu Yasha is part of this little band kind of threw me for a loop, having not seen that coming, however, it works in other characters well.
This was an excellent chapter. The writing style was very direct and forceful, which worked very well for such an action-packed, suspenseful part of the story. Exciting and vivid!
| poor kagome but whoever took her is in for a world of pain from all of the guys i cant believe they killed yuri though i liked her, she kept sesshomaru and kagomes secret....but please continue soon im on the edge of my seat jus waiting
Anggie (Chapter 22) - Mon 16 Feb 2009
| Just when I thought I knew what was gonna happen...BAM... you turned my world upside down. I don't think I can handle the anticipation. Update soon PWEEZZE!!!
Umm, oh, my.... Hurry write more.
Poor Sess, he has so much to be jealous about! You know Inuyasha just couldn't forget Kagome so easily!
I was impressed by the way you combined the office intrigue in this chapter with the near drowning. It made for a really satisfying read!
| you should have them try that position..where sesshie is sitting in the chair but kags is on his lap and she bends backwards and touches the floor that would be interesting...great chapter it was so juicy and evil..you cant just throw away a girls favorite CD that just isnt right
wawa (Chapter 21) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
| I love this story so much! That was a close call for poor Kenny. I feel that their secret relationship is about to become not so secret sometime soon. See you next time!
Anggie (Chapter 21) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
| Yay for partially resolved insecurities! I love how real both personalities are. I can"t wait for more!
| Me likey. ^_^
Lumiere (Chapter 21) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
ouuuuu..........i realy liked the ending....
i'm bad at this review thing...so ...
love the story,
Lumy
Possessed (Chapter 21) - Wed 11 Feb 2009
LOL!!! Nice lemon in this chapter! Your writing is very good, the descriptions informative and interesting, but not overbearing. You have a real feel for dialogue too. Having them move in together should provide entertainment... I can't wait to see what you do with it.
I also like how you treat Inuyasha's character. He is an honorable, if a little rough-around-the-edges, character and I'm glad you are treating him respectfully. I do get tired of the bashing that so often shows up where he is concerned.
Nobody (Chapter 21) - Wed 11 Feb 2009
| i have overlooked this story for far too long so its my fault i only get four hours of sleep. that was amazing so much so i might return to leave a more coherant review when i am not exhausted.
pauly (Chapter 20) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
| Awwwwww!!! Poor sessh, you like make him suffer, don´t you. Anyway I think it´s nice that for once he is the insecure one of the relationship. I love this story. Keep going!!! :)
| oh my god sesshomaru is retarded he should have stayed in the bedroom to hear her say those words that followed after inuyasha's name and the words that came before his...sheesh i worry bout his sexy-ass sometimes and what hes thinking lolz....but please continue soon
sessygurl (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
| Wow! Poor Sesshy. He just needs to mate her and get over it.
l33t (Chapter 20) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
Wow, this has turned a bit angsty, yes? I absolutely love it! I'm glad you decided to turn this into a full story than just a smut fic. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome wakes up. Great chapter!
wawa (Chapter 20) - Mon 09 Feb 2009
| I really enjoyed the last couple of chapters. I liked how you wrote Sesshoumaru's thoughts and feelings when he almost lost Kagome. Congrats on the nomination! See you next time.
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