*sob*sob*sob*SOB*SOB*SOB*SOOOOB*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please please please dont die KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ooooohhhhh no it's a cliffhanger!!!!!
sob sob sob
Lumiere (Chapter 28) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
*sob*sob*sob*SOB*SOB*SOB*SOOOOB*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please please please dont die KAGOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ooooohhhhh no it's a cliffhanger!!!!!
sob sob sob
*SPLAT* My head... e'splode. Brain death... imminent. Heart rate... slowing. YOU'RE KILLING ME HERE!!! "..." "..." ~~Wiccan~~
Sessygurl (Chapter 28) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
| Wow! I think I have chewed up all my nails. This story is awesome! By the way was that hit named Obo or Obe
Sessygurl (Chapter 28) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
| Wow! I think I have chewed up all my nails. This story is awesome! By the way was that hit named Obo or Obe
| Omg thats so intense!! I hope it works!! Poor Sess was pretty outta it when he first got to her.
I love how you update so frequently!! That way Im not sitting on edge for days or weeks wondering what going to happen!! Id go insane. Keep up the awsome work(and quick updates)!! hehehe
Dear Gods, you have a knack for leaving me breathless! You are a master at cliffhangers. Update soon... I gotta know if it works, or is this going to be one of those stories that has a tragic ending. I am so hooked on this sotry that I checked back for updates about every ten minutes today.
I really like the pace of the fic... Is there a name for the drug that was injected into Kagome? When she wakes up, will she remember what has happened? What will Sess and the others do when she wakes up? Will they be even more protective of her? I look forward to future updates so keep up the great work. :P
| You stopped that chapter here? C'mon, that's just not right!!! Can you please update, like now.
bell (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
| AAAHHH I want to strangle you! I can't believe you left it there!!! This is soooo great, hurry up and update.. Great Job!! *smiles*
| Oh No!! What did they give her? Is she gonna be ok? Please update again soon! I wanna know what happens, your writing is so amazing!!
| OMG! Leaving in that point was just viciously well manouvered, I loved it!
oh no...poor kagome...seems that sesshoumaru maybe has to speed up the mating-ceremony to save kagomes life...hope he can clear the misunderstanding regarding his reaction to kagome loosing their pup...hope to read more SOOOOOOOOOOON :D
Anggie (Chapter 27) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
| Its about time they got there! Anyway Yay for ridiculously quick updates!
Perfect! This is what you do best... Awesome work.
Lumiere (Chapter 27) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
oh man!!!!! that has got to bee the cliff hanger of the year!!!!
please please please update soon!!!!
cause i'm about to start sobing like a baby!!!!!! pour Kagome....please don't kill her!!!
Oooookkkaaayyy. You need to start putting warning tags on your stories: "Not for those with high blood pressure or cardiovascular conditions," please? I love a good cliffhanger as much as the next person, but my head is about to e'splode, if you know what I mean! *gasp* *choke* *cough* *wheeze* I hope I'm still here to read the next chapter!!!! :-0 ~~Wiccan~~
AHHH! How can you leave it THERE?! COME ON! GIVE US MORE!
AARRGGG! The suspense is KILLING me!!! Old person here... don't need heart failure, y'know? *wink* Seriously, though, you are building this to a fever-pitch - there have already been a few of those in this story - and I'm sure your readers are LOVING it. Personally, I think it's a terrific hook to maintain interest, even if it does make me grab my head and groan at the end of every chapter. I've been engrossed in this story from the beginning and, after having read some of your others, can see where your writing is progressing beautifully. Not that your other stories weren't good... I think you have tremendous talent. One minor, VERY MINOR, thing to watch, however, is the spacing on your punctuation. Other than that, I think your work is well thought-out, plot lines and characterization are very nicely done, and the story flows well without any jarring interludes. Thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into writing all your wonderful stories. I've enjoyed all of them thoroughly and look forward to more! :-) ~~Wiccan~~
Awesome! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Like the more vulnerable Kagome.
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