I love the way you make these two suffer so pleasurably. It's just right for Sesshomaru and Kagome. So steamy, Hmmmm....
Oh, my god. You are a naughty, naughty girrrllll....
That was so lusciously naughty! I loved it!
MontiK (Chapter 3) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
This is really well written and uber suspenseful1 I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Nin (Chapter 3) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
Intriguing story..
Possessed (Chapter 3) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
I find this story to be interesting and intriguing! It has a fresh approach to their relationship and you have given a bolder streak to her personality, which works very well. I can't wait to see where this goes! A perplexed Daiyokai is always fun to watch!
Really interesting story but did sess consider that number might not be her phone :P Wonder if he'll find her as the owner of that number or someone else. Can't wait for the next chapter
| I think that it is a really good story. I can't wait till the next chap. I do have a question. Is she talking to the right person? Well uptill next time c-ya
deebeth89 (Chapter 2) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
Well I like it, but it does have some spacing problems as well as some spelling errors. There shouldn't be any spaces between words & punctuation like "I" or I, there should be spaces between sentences though, in several cases you have a sentence or 2 run together. Hope this helps.
sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Tue 20 Jan 2009
| uh oh, sessh in trouble.... oh, how i loved it... more please, it's getting better, so who is this 'dark hair vixen'? is it kag? how will they met? oh, please have it in full chapter stories, preatty please....
| ohhh myyy... that was awesome. definitely a wonderful start and I can't wait to read more. update soon. :3
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