Wow. My powers are at work I again. I leave a review demanding an update and BLAM! It's there. And what a nice addition, too. Short, but you've already promised me more. :-) I'll hold you to that. And Jak's "oh no you didn't" line...priceless. But the favorite part was the very last line. Daiyoukai removed from the menu....ha!
LC Rose (Chapter 11) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
Oh you freakin' tease!!! I've been seeing this on here for a while and just hadn't checked it out yet. Well, did so today and am SO glad I did. I love this!! His beast's personality is awesome, making me laugh. Now I want more....now. :-) Great job.
Possessed (Chapter 11) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
Very nice chapter! Your story is flowing well and your descriptions are just right. I think you did a wonderful take on Jak! He is flamboyant but still masculine, not wimpy! LOL, I can't wait until Jak and Sess both take the stage! Should be highly entertaining!
This is a genius idea. I love it and I can't wait to read more! I hope you continue shortly. I love your setting, and the fact that she was actually calling the wrong number the whole time put a great twist on the whole story! Keep writing!
I can totally see how poor Sess will be drooled upon.... lol. This will get very interesting.
i just started reading this and i love the story line its so good...at first i didnt think i would like it but it caught my interest after reading the frist chapter i thought it was so alluring and cute i loved it and to see sesshomaru's reaction after the first call was so funny and cute...please continue this soon
I actually imagine Kagome to be very angry when she finds out Sesshoumaru volunteered to be auctioned off, as if it was another step in the process to "forgetting Kagome." But that's just me and we shall see how it goes! Awesome job!
When you write about the auction, will you put in some detail about Jakotsu? Will you make him absoutely fabulous? Will Kagome be in Hong Kong on the same date as the charity auction? And you just HAD to mention Kagura. Build the suspense! Work it baby! Yes!Yes!Yes!
pauly (Chapter 9) - Sun 25 Jan 2009
WOW!!!! This is sucha great story, I completely love it. Eres una escritora muy talentosa con una gran imaginación. :)
You're right, Inuyasha, make him work for it! I really, really liked the way you put in Inuyasha's discussion with Kagome about her breakup with Sess, it was so vividly drawn and realistic. The segue between Inuyasha's origami flower and Sess sending flowers was awesome! There are so many places in this story where I feel the pain of having been in similar situations in my own life, and find myself feeling that same punch in the gut or clenching of the heart. The sign of a well-written story. Keep up the excellent work! And thanks for updating so soon, you've got me addicted....
I'm excited to find out what frustrated (and stupid) Sesshomaru comes up with.
Loving this story. That's right, make him work for it!
sunset in love (Chapter 9) - Sun 25 Jan 2009
ahhhh, nice work, make the arrogant pretty boy work harder, god chapter !
Tina (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Jan 2009
love it and cant wait to read more.
Oh shit! I'm so curious to find out what happens! I am so excited when I see you've updated this fic so it made me really happy to see another chapter! I really enjoy your work!
OMG, not that was DRAMA! Like Gone With the Wind level drama! Loved it!
GAH! What an asshole! He'll figure out how wrong he was though.
Wow, jealousy rears its ugly head. He totally flipped out with his jealousy attack. She should have blasted him to the wall for making her feel like a whore. I bet now Hoshiomaru is gonna hit on her and she'll go on a date with him. Sesshy is gonna be even more jealous. This will get ugly before it gets better. LOL
WHAT?! NOOOOOO!
stupid sesshomaru for being too insecure and jealous and even more stupid kagome to not see what is so evident! It's a normal reaction under the situation, why can't she see that?
Eri is the only one knowing the truth right? I'm sure that she can find a way to make kagome understand why he is reacting like that. Even if she had difficulties to understand it, sesshomaru is just insecure. It's comprehensible under the circonstances. All those phone calls where for that guy and sesshomaru is afraid that, if given the opportunity, she will turn her back to him to go with this other guy.
hope that kagome will understand the situation really quick, like in the next chapter? She didn't seem to be able to do it herself or things would have went more soothingly. She had to help sesshomaru, to be here, not to fight him. She hadn't done anything until now that could be enough to reassure him that maybe may be why it went so far. The fact that she now knows that it was sesshomaru on the phone doesn't change the fact that at first, when she was doing it, it was the other guy she thought she was doing it with, and for months!
gah! please update really soon!!! Can't wait to see how things will go from now on!
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