Really love the story so far.  I think you've got the characters portrayed perfectly, even their emotional responses to everything that has happened.  Nice pace to the story, too.  It doesn't feel like it's moving too quickly or dragging at all.  I truly enjoy the way you've described everything, too.  Actions can give insight into the character with the words used to describe them, and the scenery and clothing and other irrelevant details aren't overdone.  The only thing I'd like to mention, and it's minor, is possible overuse of Sesshoumaru referring to himself in the third person.  It especially gets out of hand in the third chapter.  The constant use of it just makes dialogue that should be really poignant a bit unwieldy and ridiculous.  A few typos here and there too, but that happens to everyone.

I'm really enjoying this story.  I was kind of worrying about why I'm so fascinated by stories where the characters we love go through so much suffering, and it occurred to me that this is one facet of what got me hooked on watching the anime in the first place.  I really identified with Kagome and all the hell the men in her life put her through.  From the beginning I didn't think it was right to pair her with Inuyasha:  if I were Kagome, the first time he compared me with Kikyo I would have been with Kouga.  Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is just so dang disfunctional- so in the end of the manga, Inuyasha and Kagome get married.  I don't think that is going to be a marriage made in heaven for long- I just know Kag and Sess belong together in the end!   So at any rate, I'm enjoying the heck out of Sess and Kag suffering, and feeling sorry for Sess, because he really loves Kagome, but maybe he's being punished for the girls he really DID pull that stunt on.  I have a couple of male friends who are old enough to know better who pick up women, use them, dump them, and then speak about them with disrespect.  Their rationale is that if the woman let them pick her up, she deserves to be treated like a tramp.  It's enough to make a woman never go out with a man.  So I don't mind you making Sess suffer for a while, even though he's the greatest, he needs to learn a lesson in compassion!     

Please have Sesshoumaru kill each and every single one of Kagome's "dates" yeah? As well as that guy who told Inuyasha that Sesshoumaru was just playing a game?

As well, though I very much enjoy your story, I don't see how he doesn't just throw her into an empty room and spell it out for her? Sure she is a miko, but he's a pretty fucking strong demon! Oh make them fight! That would be entertaining!

Wow didn't know Kags had it in her!!  Poor Sessho!! Loosing his valued control like that. Must be so hard on Fluffy!!  This is getting really good. I can't wait to the next update.

Hiya. I quite enjoy your story. It really saddens me the torment that these two are going through. Sesshoumaru's cousin is kinda cute in of course an annoying way.

I do quite enjoy the past scenes that you add in there. It makes the story easier to bear, at least for me.

I think I will have a heart-attack if you don't do something soon! lol

It's a good story. But now the pressure is killing me! I think it's time that someone talk to her before she does something stupid because from how the things look, it will certainly kill Sesshomaru soon!

If InuYasha can't do something, or his mother, maybe his cousin, Suki can do something...?

I really can't wait now the moment she will know. I don't ask for them to immediatly jump on each other when the truth is told but THAT pressure is just too much to bare! Please!

update as soon as you can, please!!

Wow. I think i may cry.  This was so sad. Poor Sessho.  The man is just down.  And Inuyasha is always sticking his nose where it doesn't belong.  He should have confronted Sessho, but noooo!! He had to drag Kagome into the discussion!!  Damn, double damn!! I hope he can repair the damage done. I can't wait til you update.

Very well articulated. I want more please.

Okay, you took care of the dialogue issue, now you need to work on your punctuation. There should be no space before or after the quotation mark, the same goes for the hyphen marks as well. For example :  "Sit down Susan." There should be no space before the comma but there is one after it. For example: The red, orange, and blue ball. The only reason I bring these up is because to continually see them distracts me from the story and makes me not want to keep reading.

omg! What? I want to read more but it ended :(. That was great. I loved it! Keep up the good job and i will keep reading.