this was so perfect. You timed it just at the right time too. I can't wait to the other part to come out!!
Saholia (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
| Oh my--this is becoming one of my fav. stories in fanfic!!! I am REALLY looking forward to your next ch...do you have this account in ff.net? I'd love to place an alert on it!
joyouki (Chapter 17) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
| THERE IS NOTHING TO FORGIVE BECAUSE THAT WAS SO DELICIOUS! HELL YOU HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN TO THE LEMON, BUT THE PRE LEMON JUICE WAS SCRUMPTIOUS! LOL
I WAS A LITTLE SCARED THAT SHE'D LEAVE HIM AGAIN SINCE HIS BEAST WOULDNT LET HIM MOVE. MAYBE HE COULD HAVE SAID TO HER "I WANT YOU SO BAD, BUT SO DOES MY BEAST" MAYBE SHE'D SAY...LET HIM OUT TO PLAY!! HA HA
ANYWAY THIS STORY IS THE BOMB, I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER AND I REALLY LIKE THE TITLES OF THE CHAPTERS ESPECIALLY THIS ONE!!
| Hey Oroyukae, I made Sango have bipolar disorder in the story I'm writing because of what you wrote, here. I have read two books recently by very successful, creative people who have bipolar disorder, which appears to run strongly in families. They both discussed how bipolar disorder is not just a curse, but a blessing as well. A huge proportion of the really big, important, or highly creative things that are done, are done by people with bipolar disorder. Think about it. Most people aren't very motivated, they just want to punch a time clock and pick up their paycheck. It's the people that don't fit into this mold that actually do the big stuff. Sango, who is so driven, and so depressed about her brother, becomes a very important person in Edo, protecting the village almost single-handed. I used the ideas from those books when I decided how I would portray her. So don't apologize for saying Sess is bipolar. It's really a compliment!
connie (Chapter 16) - Wed 10 Dec 2008
yayyy! everything's happy happy now! :D i loved tht part when they were hugging each other and sesshoumaru couldnt let go of her and asking if she really was here, omg, so touching! sniffs. :P
joyouki (Chapter 16) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
| OH MY FREAKIN GOD! THAT WAS THE MOST ROMANTIC THING EVER! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR GIVING YOUR FANS THIS CHAPTER! IT IS LEADING UP TO THE JUICY!!! I AM SO EXCITED! I AM SO SURPRISED WHEN I CHECK A LITTLE BIT AGO AND YOU HAD UPDATED...GOD I HOPE HER GIFT IS COMING SOON..NO PUN INTENDED!
I LOVE TO READ ABOUT SESSHOMARU GIVING IN TO EMOTIONS WHEN HE FEEL ON HIS KNEES. GOD THAT WAS PRICELESS.
MAYBE SHE'LL GET PUPPED FOR CHRISTMAS...YOU KNOW WAKE UP CHRISTMAS MORNING AND SESSHOMARU FLIPPS OUT CAUSE HE CAN SMELL IT...DAMN I CANT WAIT! THANK YOU
Too lazy to log in (Chapter 15) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
Hi.
I enjoyed your first chapter. It was nice. Your second chapter was okay.
I cannot help but feel, however, that you dragging this story. I had hope for when I read the first few chapters. Now, however, I just don't quite like it. Inuyasha is right. Kagome is a sadist. A stupid bitch Sadist. How very selfish of her to keep herself away from Sesshoumaru, just because she THINKS he may never take her back. Quite frankly, I don't want this type of Kagome to go back to Sesshoumaru. She just seems really shallow and Sesshoumaru seems weak.
I apologize if my review offends you, but this is simply how I feel on the matter. I think I will continue to read, because I am still curious as to how you will take this story.
joyouki (Chapter 15) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
| OH SWEET JESUS! HE IS GOING TO FIND HER AT THE CABIN WHERE THEY FIRST MADE LOVE...NOW YOU ARE TALKIN. THIS IS JUST THE JUICIEST NEWS EVER!!
I FELT FOR SESS, MY GOD HIS KNEES BUCKELING AND HIM CRYING ON THE BALCONY, I BELIEVE THIS IS THE FIRST STORY I HAVE SEEN HIM PORTRAYED LIKE THIS AND I LOVE IT. I HOPE HE IS ABLE TO SAY THE "3 WORDS". I DONT CARE WHO YOU ARE, WOMEN LOVE AND NEED TO HEAR IT!
THANKS FOR THE QUICK UPDATE, I HOPE YOU HAVE SOMETHING POSTED FOR ME WHEN I GET HOME FROM WORK TOMORROW! LOL...JK NOT REALLY PLEASE UPDATE!!!
joyouki (Chapter 14) - Mon 08 Dec 2008
| AWH SHIT! LOL! KAGS MY DEAR GIRL YOU SHOULD HAVE GIVEN HIM THE TIME TO SEE IF HE'D WOULD HAVE EXCEPTED YOUR APOLOGY...YOU HAVE WASTED 3 MONTHS. THEN IT TAKES A 15 YEAR OLD GIRL...WHICH I LOVED THIS PART OF THE STORY...SHE SEND YOU HIS COMPOSITION AND YOU GET MAD AT INU FOR KEEPING IT A SECRET.
YOU ALREADY KNEW SESSHOMARU LOVED YOU BY HIS EYES...MY GOD WOMAN! GIGGLE!!
I KNOW I KNOW IT A STORY I JUST NEED TO VENT!!!
I HOPE THE POOR GUY IS PUT OUT OF HIS MISERY SOON!
joyouki (Chapter 13) - Mon 08 Dec 2008
| WHAT! SHE REMEMBERS EVERYTHING AND SHE CANT BELIEVE HE'D FORGIVE HER! WELL RUNNING AWAY TO YOUR UNCLES AND NOT GIVING HIM THE CHANCE TO SAY I LOVE YOU OR I WAS WRONG AND I FORGIVE YOU! HOW CAN SHE BE SO STUPID. SHE REMEBERS HIM CRYING FOR HER FOR GOD SAKES! SCREAM!!! I HOPE HE RUNS LIKE HELL IN THE TRAFFIC AND GETS TO HER AND PROFESSES EVERYTHING TO HER!
connie (Chapter 15) - Mon 08 Dec 2008
ahhh, when are sesshoumaru and kagome gonna meet again! hurry! lols :P
Thank goodness. I think he's finally going to get her back. I hope you write as much as you can after they get back together, not just end the story right there. I want to enjoy them being happy together.
Bell (Chapter 14) - Mon 08 Dec 2008
| OOOOOOOOO finally shes getting it through her stubbern brain! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!
This is great, you really are good at making them suffer. I don't want the story to end, but I'm starting to feel really sad for both of them, especially Sess. I think he's finally been punished enough for what he did to those other girls. Will he really have to wait six whole months for Kagome to return?
joyouki (Chapter 12) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| OH MY GOD PLEASE UPDATE SOON, YOUR STORY IS LIKE A DRUG AND I GOTTA HAVE IT AND I GOTTA KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!LOL
PLEASE DON'T SEND KAGS TO WORK WITH HER UNCLE. HOPEFULLY HER DREAM WILL UNLOCK WHAT SESS SAID TO HER AND SHE CAN SEE HIM CRY FOR HER AGAIN. GOD THIS TEARS ME UP!!
I DID LAUGH WHEN INU TRIED TO GET OFF THE PHONE BECAUSE OF HIS SOAP OPERA AND SESSHOMARU CHIMED IN ABOUT THE POOL BOY! CLASSIC!
joyouki (Chapter 11) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| COME KAGS JESUS..GIVE THE DOG A BONE...I MEAN BREAK. HE ALMOST KILLED FOR YOU! PLEASE GIVE US SOME HAPPY ROMANTIC FLUFFY LEMON CHAPTERS TO COME!! I AM BEGGING YOU!!
joyouki (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| OH MY GOD I WISHED THAT THIS WAS A MOVIE. I LOVED TO SEE SESSHOMARU BURST THROUGH THE GLASS AND TAKING CARE OF THAT SCUM...AND TO SEE HIM DROP TO HIS KNEES AND CRY FOR HER....THIS WAS SO JUICY!
joyouki (Chapter 9) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| OH SHIT HURRY UP SESS....OH KAGS DO YOU REALLY HAVE TO DO THAT! I LOVE THE STORY!!!!LOVE IT LOVE IT
joyouki (Chapter 8) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| A THAT WAS WANTONISH AND LEMONIE! KAGOME IF YOU THINK BACK YOU KEPT GOING AFTER HIM TO BED YOU. HE TRIED TO STOP SEVERAL TIMES. THINK THINK THINK,,,YOU WERE NOT PART OF THIS GAME. KUDOS ON THE WET DREAM. I LAUGHED SO HARD! THE GREAT DOG DEMON HAS TO TEND TO HIS OWN SHEETS! LOL
joyouki (Chapter 7) - Sun 07 Dec 2008
| MISCONCEPTION AGAIN! DAMN IT! COULDN'T HE SENSE HER THAT SHE KNEW HE WAS THERE. HE SHOULD HAVE WENT AFTER HER IN THE BATHROOM AT LEAST SHE COULDNT GET OUT AND WOULD HAVE TO HEAR HIM OUT.
THAT WAS FREAKIN JUICY, WHEN THEY WERE ON THE GRASS AND WHAT SHE DID TO HIM! GOTTA GO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! LOL
Page 2 of 5
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | 