I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love this story more everytime I read it. It's getting good plz update soon.

i love this story please update soon

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Nice story but your spelling and grammar is off. I see you use a lot of "threw" instead of "through". Also you said "Senshi go downstairs and watched T.V." instead of "go downstairs and watch T.V."

Perhaps a beta would be good to find? It is a very nice plot line.

the 'e's got cut off from here and care,but i think we got the gist of it.
before putting it on the site,re-read what you put down.
it's alright if it's either short or long.
take your time and take care.

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That so Sad but a really good story line I hope you continue soon

Your story is a great idea, but its not planned out very well, and it is all over the place, making it overall confusing. Your chapters are a bit short also but are ok. With some editing itll be great good luck

Bad Sesshoumaru. Bad, bad, bad! But I love your story.

well so far this is a soap opera and if i was a tear baby I'd be crying right now. Stupid Sesshomaru. I can't wait to see what he does now

poor kagome!!!...basterd..doesnt he know!!1....more chapters please!!!

aww. damn.

It's ok but your don't explain very well and I find myself confused, alot.

Me Likes Update Soon

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

poor kags bad sesh

A+

wow..thats harsh....poor her...more chapters please...

thats so sad!
meep -.-

Nice...I would like to read more chapters...please update soon and OFTEN...please & thank you! :)

oh so now that makes sess a cheating sob doesn't it??

please update soon!

so is he in heat?...and she is his mate know?...and she gets pregnet like this right?....more chaters please!!!...

ow im hating sessh right now poor kags

very interesting.
i can't wait to read for more.

please make a next chappie soon. I want 2 know wat happened next!!

please make a next chappie soon. I want 2 know wat happened next!!

the being chapters made me cry a little....but it's really good can you write more please.

Izayoi, a hanyou that is original to me=]
keep up the good work
Sesshou is such an asshole

wow...how sad..he left her...baka...anyways keep up the writing..

I'm liking the story even more. Keep working your magic.

i love this story plz update

Dear Sabby-san,
I like this story so far, but there are some grammatical errors among the dialogues. It took me awhile to understand who was talking to whomever. Anyway, please continue with this fanfiction. I'd like to see what you have in mind next for the readers, including me of course. ^^
Sincerely,
Adria Li

Keep on writing. Excellent chapter.

wow...stupid dog..didnt even know he had a son with her....but this is a cool story...write more...keep up the good work..

awwwwwww how cute! lol the story is good so far! there are a few minor spelling mistakes but other then that fantastic! I will totally keep reading your story! but please make the chapters MUCH longer

i love this story please update soon

Good story beginning. Please update soon.

love your story and can't wait to read more so I hope you update asap please.