~~Awww! I'm officially in love with this fic! ^___^ I hope you update again soon!
Good for Kagome!
Honestly, I can't beleive no one tried to help Chika, but it must be the norm. How awful to be used so degradingly and especially in front of everyone. How did Kura mange to become the "leader" ? Is it power, or her position of birth (i.e. lady of a domain)? Now that Kagome has sort of taken over the rank from Kura, I wonder how Kura will react?
I also wonder, can a couple from different ranks mate? Like one from Mu and one from Tsu mate? or is it forbidden too?
Loved how you made Sesshomaru worry for Kagome even though macho male he is denies he was worried, and yet he was angry that she might be taken advantage of and angry that she saw through him! He wants to remain hidden like a turtle and yet still wants to get close to her and learn more about Kagome and how she affects him.
Lovin this story!
kagome should have purified the demon
at least now the demons respected to kagome
Beautiful chapter. I loved it.
i really liked the chapter i would that kagome .strong and much powerful
There was a calmness that settled over me after reading this chapter. It was weird but enjoyable. I love the slow progression of their relationship and how you are staying true to Sesshoumaru's character. That takes skills. Thank you. ^_^ Looking forward to you next update.
Nicole (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
Aaawwww theyre getting closer. Cant wait to see what happens when he realizes he is starting to fall in love :) I look forward to the next chapter :)
A rather beautiful chapter it was.
| That was perfection. Killing perfection.
Caera (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
Very fluffy chapter.Well done!
Yasmine (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
All I can say is.... Moreeeeeee!!!! Im in love with this story
Hm, I just realized (after I reviewed on ff.net), that Sesshomaru hesitated in letting in Kagome into his office. I could see this as metaphorical since he doesn't want his heart woken up and Kagome is waking up his heart and entering into his heart. I wonder if he even understands why he let her in his study when its obvious (by the behavior of the maid) that he doesn't let many into his study unless its for business (like an alliance or the such).
Also, if the prince is assigned to patrol after the 200 year mark, what happens if there are no pups/prince to do so and there is only one Lord but no prince? Like let's say for example, Sesshomaru is 800 years old. At 200 he would have started the patroling, and Inu wasn't born until Sesshomaru was 600 (so Inu Taisho dies when Sesshomaru is 60). So technically, Sesshomaru is the Lord and Inu was a pup. So in the 200 years until Inu was able to take up patroling, how did Sesshomaru patrol and be the "host" for gatherings and the such?
Also, I can see right now that Kagome is going to be making some major enemies. While she tries to change some the corruption and befriend some of the youkai and the ranks, I'm sure there are other youkai (not just demonesses) that enjoy flaunting their rank above others and will not "lower" themselves and yet to see Kagome do it just because it's her way, would make them insanely jealous. Wonder if this will provide a way for Sesshomaru to "rescue" Kagome or if she will turn the entire culture on its ear!
Cannot wait for more!
Haven (Chapter 7) - Wed 18 Jun 2014
Great chapter, more please!
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!
GIMME!!
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