It pains my heart to read this and see such a cruel and truly demonic Sesshomaru.... Maybe it would be better if this was an totally AU fiction so I wouldn't hate Sesshomaru so much and try to accept his psychotic behaviour. Will he give her the shikon ? Unlikely... She is nothing more than a possession to him. I am so sad but so addicted to this. You are very talented and i love your wording. Bravo. Really a unique fic. I am just expressing my frustration with the plot, it does not meam I don't love it, please know this!
Thx for updating,
Will eagerea wait for the resolution
Nilee1 (Chapter 26) - Sun 04 Feb 2018
What does he really want from her--love? Why does he save the thief? and kill his own people? Is Sesshoumaru just "f"ing crazy or is there reasoning behind his actions?
Oh no! I felt this might happen :( Poor Yashamaru.
Such an interesting twist! Makes me wonder, is the jewel thief somehow connected to the Shikon?
I think another man's life would be end because of kagome and or that any man who would dared to touch Sesshoumaru's woman. Why i suddenly felt happy when yashamaru came for her ?
nicole (Chapter 25) - Sun 28 Jan 2018
No he kill inuyasha again
I am now having doubts about the identity of Yashamaru. Is he really the reincarnation of Inuyasha or Shippou? I can’t wait for more!!! I am pretty sure that Sesshomaru would be pissed as hell when he comes home only to find that Kagome has been captured. Omg he would so totally kill Yashamaru! After all Sesshomaru is possesive, eapecially of Kagome. Obviously since he tied her to his life forever.
LASO since Yashamaru is a smuggler, does that mean he would be the one to find and bring the Shikon no Tama to Kagome??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
He's inuyasha that lives again in the name of ' Yashamaru '.
And Kagome's power have returned i think?
Now this is interesting...
INUYASHA IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Does he remember her?
i am both elated and annoyed at this new detail, I just really wanted Kagome and Sesshomaru together that I don’t want Inuyasha to get in between them. I know everything is truly messed up but I also believe that Sesshomaru loves Kagome in his own twisted up way.
I hate that servant girl who talks down to Kagome. WHO IS SHE? I hate her already. She seems trouble.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON SOON SOONEST PLEASEEEE
OMG!!! I did not know that you updated it! The dokiha e-mail ipdate went to my junk mail, I was so annoyed that I didn’t get to read this chapter as soon as you posted it.
Anyway, great update again and I like how you are showing their life and new dynamic. I feel a little sad because I really love thhem together, but everything is superficial. I know exactly why she loves to buy and collect jewels—because deep inside her, she is waiting to come across the Shikon no Tama! I both want her to get it and not because I don’t want Kagome and Sesshomaru apart :( is that so selfish of me to want after all the bad things that transpored between them? :(((((
I have a quesrion though since Kagome practically lost her memories, what would happen if she found the Shikon no Tama? Would she start remembering everything?
Is Mei Sesshomaru’s mistress? Or something like that? I feel like she has a bigger role to play in this story. But even then I don’t think Sesshomaru would let Kagome go. But if the theif is Inuyasha‘s reincarnation, you just introduced him in such an awesome way!
History repeats? Inuyasha's Incarnation maybe? Interesting!
Natalia (Chapter 23) - Sat 13 Jan 2018
That's inuyasha isn't it?
You really have a talent to keep the readers on edge! Words woven in secrets!
More questions than answers! But a big thank you for updating! It was a good chapter!
nicole (Chapter 23) - Sat 13 Jan 2018
Inuyasha finally appears does she remember him maybe Inuyasha remembers her but won't tell her
nicole (Chapter 23) - Sat 13 Jan 2018
Inuyasha finally appears does she remember him
OMG he erased her memories!!! I was not expectng that. You are definitely the mother of fanfiction plot twist. But among all the defiling and death, I think this is the most cruel thing that Sesshomaru has done to her yet. He literally took away everything from Kagome. There is no Kagome anymore. She could not even hate him, not able to think for herself, and not able to keep the memories of everyone that she loves dearly.
Just when I was thinking that it cannot become any darker, it does. AND I WANT MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.
It makes me sad though how Sesshomaru seemed to lack honor by doing this when he always disdained telling lies, but his entire relationship with Kagome is now built on top of lies. I wonder how long it has been since he took her. Would they cross the 500-year timeline where Kagome was born? Ahh I literally cannot tell where this is going, I hope you update soon, like VERY SOON. The waiting is killing me.
I love how you put all those dark yet beautiful words together to describe everything in this story...but now I'm confused idk where the path of the story is heading and also i am confused with what kind of relationship they have?but I'm sure there is much in this story...so i will wait for another update thank you!
Natalia (Chapter 21) - Sun 07 Jan 2018
Can we wait and hope for a resolution? It's certainly not what I expected! Bravo fir amazing me again. No children... This made me so sad... He also transformed her and I keep wondering what his wish was. Wouldn't he want pups now when she is not human to cure her heart? Still hoping for a somewhat good ending for her.... Hoping Sesshomaru has reasons to be so twisted. Obsessed more like and deranged. Hopefully he will change but I don't think you would want to go that road like you stated in the first chapter. But I at least hope for a resolution and to find out why Sesshomaru did what he did.
Thx for updating.
LaDonna (Chapter 21) - Sun 07 Jan 2018
Where is the direction of this story? I don't get anymore. I don't see the resolution anymore but I'm still going to read it cuz I hope you have a better better understand everything than I do
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