The level of description in this chapter was sublime, to be quite honest. The rush of adrenaline, wounds stinging, respiration failing...I could almost feel it as if I was there, as if I was Kagome actually. Truly magnificent! I think you outdid yourself in this chapter!
Poor Kagome, how long has it been since she has smiled a genuine smile? I do wonder, and mourn for that smile that never touches her lips any longer...
Kohaku has grown up to be a manly man...Woo! Never thought I'd say that, but it suits him, the scent of leather and polished metal on his skin, the taste of danger in his eyes, the touch of huskiness in his voice! I do hope his role doesn't end here because it's exciting to see a new element thrown into the mix!
Ha, of course he caught the scent, and of course he recognized it...his last sentence inundated the air with dread... *shivers*
I can't wait for the next update!! Thank you so much for this one! I know you have been busy, so I'll wait patiently. ^^
Andrea (Chapter 11) - Mon 03 Mar 2014
Just found this story and i loooove it!
Oh no! Kohaku Run! Ahhhh now im worried for him. Love the story happy for the update! Thank You!
i seriously how sess isn't going to hurt kohaku. too bad hefound out so soon. i thought they would have secret rendezvous before being found out.
Luna C. (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014
Omg now Sesshomaru is gonna kill Kohaku, and I have a feeling Kohaku is gonna fight him back for Kagome.
Next, keep it coming.
April (Chapter 11) - Sat 01 Mar 2014
Ooooh noooo is he going to kill him or let kagome think she has a frie d and when they get so close he takes him away from her.....
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