Reviews for Autumn by Evellin

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Cheryl (Chapter 7) - Sun 31 Aug 2014

thank you for the update, the story is getting better as it goes, keep up the awesome work :) 


vhfluffy (Chapter 7) - Sun 31 Aug 2014

Oh crap! Now she's pissed him off! However, he seems to be enjoying her reactions. I think the element of surprise when she fired her arrows at him was so awesome!At least he realizes that she's got spunk and a good fight still in her, Now he just needs her to redirect her energy elsewhere, like the bedroom :-p

I do think they need to have a real conversation about their relationship though. Don't get me wrong I love the lemony goodness and the passion they evoke, but I think they need to square a few things before Inuyasha n the gang show up. 

Is there any chance our heroine will develop feelings for Sesshomaru anytime soon? Seems like he involuntarily has already succumbed to her charms. Does she feel anything through the bond like he does her emotions?

Great update! I luv it!


satuross (Chapter 7) - Sat 30 Aug 2014

Oh hoho I love punishment


rose (Chapter 7) - Sat 30 Aug 2014

next chapter please


Elizabeth (Chapter 7) - Sat 30 Aug 2014

OMG!!! I loved this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you so much for working so hard on this chapter. LOVE IT!!!

 


Samara (Chapter 6) - Mon 18 Aug 2014

No friggin way... was it him?  did she get him?  Oh shit... cannot wait for your update!


Snailnea (Chapter 6) - Sat 16 Aug 2014

You have absolutely caught my attention with just six chapters. I can not wait for the next chapter. I check often to see if you have updated. Keep them coming! 


The-infamous-one (Chapter 6) - Tue 12 Aug 2014

thst was more than cruel. Please update soon


Tourmaline Blue (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Aug 2014

So for I'm absolutely enraptured by every single chapter of your story. Hopefully in the next Chapter Kagome puts up a good fight.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Aug 2014

Episode 4 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs this Saturday. I hope Kagome got away from Sesshomaru, keep it coming.


rose (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Aug 2014

next chapter please


vhfluffy (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Aug 2014

Great story. You paint a gorgeous picture with words :-)

I am a little confused about when in the storyline this takes place.  Or is this a different timeline? maybe I missed that part. IS Naraku already dead? Also, Sesshomaru has Tokijin and Bakusaiga? I thought Tokijin was destroyed before Sesshomaru manifested Bakusaiga.

Anyways, I think you have done an outstanding job of capturing Kagome and Sesshomaru's personailties. I like that you made him slip up just a little bit when he unintentionally marked Kagome, showing that even the great Inu Lord is not above and beyond his primal nature, or did some divine intervention prompt that?

Please update soon! Impatiently waiting for more Sesshomaru/Kagome interaction. I luv this pair so much because you can just feel their chemistry and you have made that possible even when there is no dialogue between them.


SilverInu93 (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Aug 2014
Please dont do this i need to know if she gets away

satuross (Chapter 6) - Mon 11 Aug 2014

whoahhhhhh cliff hanjer!!

 

if seshoumaru survives this, i bet a good lemon will be in order! wahahaha (or is it rape)


gildedglass (Chapter 5) - Fri 08 Aug 2014

will kag ever really luv sesshy? the way this is going, i dont think so... Can u do a blowjob scene?


Katrina Kee (Chapter 5) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Will the goddess of Autumn or her sister appear before Kagome to lend her some comfort? If Kagome is 24 or 25 years old, then why is she still in her middle school uniform? Or was it just a white blouse and skirt she was wearing? If she has decided to stay in the Feudal Era, why wasn't she wearing more traditional garments? Even if she did not want to wear the red and white of a priestess, couldn't she have worn some other color? Nine years in the past is quite a long time to be living in the Feudal Era without some kind of miko training. Even if she did bounce back and forth trying to find shards and study for school, everyone knows that common sense would have won out for miko training.  Surely she didn't allow Inuyasha to control her so much that she could not get any kind of priestess training at all? How foolish!!! It's obvious that Inuyasha wanted her to stay dependent on him, therefore he did not want her to have any training whatsoever. How selfish of Inuyasha! She was just a sitting duck for anyone to take! I guess that it should be pointed out to Kagome that if another youki had taken her, then her life would quite possibly be even worse than what it could be with Sesshomaru. The Shikon Miko is, after all, quite a prize to have as a mate. I am also betting that Sess is waiting for the witch in order to find some kind of spell or potion to either make Kagome live longer, or to find a way to subdue her power so that she won't cause him (or any servants) any unnecessary harm. I hope that if it is the latter, that he realizes that he will take away any protection that Kagome has from Anyone that might wish harm on her. From jealous females to the other youki Lords. I hope that he finds someone to train her. That would be sooo great! Oh well, I cannot wait for the next chapter! Thank you and I am sorry that I ended up ranting and raving! I really did not mean to do that!


vhfluffy (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Luv it! The raw emotion n passion is amazing! Please update soon :-)


rose (Chapter 5) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

next chapter please


stoictimer (Chapter 5) - Thu 07 Aug 2014

Love!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Wed 06 Aug 2014

Sailor Moon new anime has already aired three episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good chapter, keep it coming


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