The plot thickens, indeed.
Oh my dear I absolutely love the update! I can't believe you almost deleted it! No way, it's not allowed!
Anyways, moving along, I get the feeling that things will be a bit different going forward for yhe two of them. Obviously something bloomed in Kagome during her throes of passion, most likely from sharing a bond with Sesshomaru. It's almost like she had some kind of revelation or something. Same goes for Sesshomaru. That bit at the end almost makes me want to believe that he feels complete now. Although I doubt our hime will not just accept everything that's happened just like that, but maybe there's some room for acceptance of him at least.
Looking forward to the confrontation with Inuyasha and the gang and when the two of them wake up.
Keep updating and gracing us with your stories and no deleting!!!
Wow, poor Kagome. Talk about one heck of a punishment. I was sitting there, reading it, and was like "No, he's not really gonna make her...oh, okay. Yes, yes, he is." lol. Another awesome chapter from you. You really get a sense of the characters confusion and mixed feelings. I like that although Kagome submits, she still has her fighter's spirit left. I look forward to the next installment!
tabitha (Chapter 8) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
I absolutely love this story:) it gets the inner fan girl stiring lol
Nicole (Chapter 8) - Sun 07 Sep 2014
That was a very interesting chapter. Sesshomaru is completely off his rocker! Coerced submission (in the form of exhaustion or otherwise) isn't true submission or acceptance. And she definitely did not apologize! Everything he does is pushing her away.
I'm guessing those strange feelings are either a side-effect of the mark or the interference of the Kami. It's very difficult to imagine how the fate of true peace and prosperity could come about with these two as they are. It'll be interesting to see how you manage it, or if part of the tradgedy will be Kagome succumbing with no real choice having been given.
Holy shit. Holy freaking shit. This is good. Like, SHOCKINGLY GOOD. You spend so long looking through fanfics, and nothing really clicks, and then WHAM. Out of nowhere you stumble across that one good fic that totally just knocks the rest out of the park. Can't wait to read more.
Very sad, keep it coming.
I loved it!!! That wasn't the last chapter was it? I hope not ???? because I love reading your fic. I look every day to see if you updated. I truly appreciate how you write such long chapters and I know how hard it is.
Sad in a way, but beautiful in your writing! Also, it looks like Kagome is in the beginnings of Stockholm syndrome? (at least sexually anyway) I've really enjoyed this story so far and hope to see more soon!
I love the raw emotions you gave them, whether it was pain, anger or lust, you made it intense. And I think you captured Sesshomarus personality perfectly. I hate when the writer just out of the blue turn him into a big softy with an heart of gold. Because he is not like that. He is an wild Alfa. Nothing about him should be tamed. But refined, because after all he is a lord of beast. And I do like an good fight in kagome. Shes spirited and about the only person in the world who has met with sesshomaru on the battle field and stood up to him "as if they were equals" and has lived to tell about it. You can do so much with this story because you actually gave the characters room to grow and learn. Because at the end of the day there from two very different "worlds" and there not going to automaticly have this magical connection and fall in love. I like how you keep it real. Because in real life, you don't just fall in love with someone without knowing a single thing about them. Granted the story isn't perfect, there are a few things that are questionable. Like kagomes lack or training and clothes. But I get where you were going with that, because in order for sesshomaru to be in control kagomes ignorance about her true power is essential. I hate when the writer just gives kagome all this power and weakens Sesshomaru, so they can have them as equals. I'm all about girl power, but in this case, Sesshomaru should ALWAYS be the strongest out of the two. Simply because he is an inu. And if he doesn't have the power to protect his mate, than why is he there? Sesshomarus arrogants is dead on, you took him to an darker place and I like that too, you captured his dominant nature perfectly. And kagomes naivety when it come to Inuyasha is too. Still I wish you would show some kind of growth in Kagome. Because being ignorant and stupidity are two different things. Inuyasha is more like an obsession for kagome. But there has to be some realization there. ANYWAYS I love your story so, please update. look forward to your next chapter.
can't wait to read more! PLEASE update soon. very interested in seeing how kagome will warm up to sesshoumaru.
Keep it coming.
Wow... Intense :(
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