Sweet another one! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you. ^-^ They say the third times the charm.
Keep it coming.
You're driving me crazy with all tehse snippets, love! But you are sick, so I won't pressure you for another chappie...much Lol. Get well soon! I must know what happens! Plus, Sess is sooo cute as a puppy!!
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-rubs back of head sheepishly- Okay, so I backtracked. At first when I read your summary I thought it was interesting and that it also might have a fairy tale like spark. "Which it does." Reminds me of Cinderela, The Frog Prince, and another. What you did was place "A life of secrecy" with "Wicked and jealous mother" quite nicely with the rest. Which probably doesn't make much sense to some. Anyway, -winks- you've got the dark and light spark for this story. Another interesting view of the characters and a right amount of imagery. I'll be listenin for the ding as my phone gives me a feedback for when you update. Like many other stories I kind of feel bad for not adding a longer review sometimes. It's all worth it though.
OMG! -leans forward- Is he going to be all right? What's going to happen when she brings him to Kaede's or if her mother finds out? Would she try to kick out Sesshoumaru and if Kagome refuses would both of them be kicked out? Gah! I'm getting ahead of myself again. Wait, what if.... nvm I got to stop or go into a rant. Lol Please write more?!
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I am desperately awaiting the next chapter, you lazy person!! I will not write another chapter in Blue Ribbon until you update this one! You're driving me crazy with this agonizingly slow revealed plot! I need moreeee!!! Now!
Loved the chappie! Update soon pwetty pwease *bats eyelashes at Sam*
Keep it coming.
Luna C. (Chapter 2) - Thu 24 Jan 2013
Omg her mom's a drunk lol!
Great chapter!
This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
Luna C. (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Jan 2013
Oooo this seems interesting, when I read your summary, I was getting that 'Frog Prince' type of vibe but with a twist, but I love fairytales so I can't wait for your next update! :)
However, there were some misplaced words throughout and some grammatical errors.
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