another wonderful chapter! I appreciate the suspence, but also that you arn't having it lag on. You've set a good pace for the story. I also find it a nice suprise that the FIRST isn't some horrible woman with whom Kagome will rival (at least not yet... dunno where this story is headed yet, but you've given their "relationship" to one another more substance by making Kotono likable and in Kagome's corner, if you will) As for the threesome thing. Not a fan as I'm pretty much a straight K/S shipper, and don't like the idea of him sharing his affections with another... obviously as per the nature of the story he shares his body with others, but I'm talking about the emotional kind of affections. I think if a threesome were done early on, as a sort of guided "lesson" i.e. kotono teaching her how to be a concubine for Sesshomaru, WITH sesshomaru as the subject - well thats fine. (it could be a really sexy MA scene - if thats where you are going with this - for her to be learning how to do the most basic of acts with a guide showing her, encouraging her, and using sesshomaru as the subect rather than the proverbial "put the condom on a banana" kind of lesson.) Or as a sort of start to her induction into being the 12th. But as the story progresses and emotions develope - unless its meant to build up the angst - I wouldn't want to see a threesome. Now thats just my 2 cents and if you decided to do everything that I voted against, it wouldn't stop me from reading your story. Its your story and you can do whatever you like with it, and I'll still keep reading. I was just offering my vote! :)
pbhptttt... you're gonna add one... you know you are!!!
And we're all gona eagerly await your next installment... patiently... calm... serenely... silent...
*scoffs*
Who am I kidding... we're all gonna pounce on that next chapter like a starving dog with a meat bone in sight.
Tori (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 Feb 2011
Ok a very big fan of yours but I love this story and I'd love to see a threesome but also more of your ideas and more writing. Please continue as this is refreshing and and told with wit and charm.
thank you
Wow, interesting second chapter for sure! Kotono seems like a nice dragoness... almost too nice towards a human who wants to be the twelfth. I bet her hidden mean streak will show up soon. About the threesome, I assume you mean between Kagome, Sesshoumaru, and Kotono? lol. I'm interested to see what you can do with that, actually. And as usual, this chapter was so well written. I really love reading it. It's so unique in plotline too. I don't think I've seen a concubine story quite like this one before and it's only the second chapter. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next installment. =)
Star (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
I'm loving this story so far! And my answer to your question is totally! I like Kotono already!
oksana (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
Very interesting beginning, will watch and wait for more. And yes for threesome with Kotone, looks like she is very interesting in little miko herself:)
I like where this story is going, and can't wait to see what happens. I would like it to be just Sess/Kag. I'm a hopeless romantic as well, and want him only to want her! Keep it up, and please update soon!
This is absolutely fantastic. I adore Kotono. Totally can't wait for the next chapter! And I vote yes on the threesome.
Panda (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
OMG!!!! IM HOOKED!!!! cant wait for next chapter!!!! :)
12th (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
interesting...
I don't mind threesome but it gotta be FMM. If not, I rather have Kags and Sess together only.
I definately do not want to see Sess sharing a special moment with Kag with one of his concubines... esp your OC.
thx
janjan (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
cant wait for next chapter!! AWsomeness so far
aiko (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
nice... and the idea for a threesome souds good... but deep in my heart im a total romantic, so i would prefer kagome to be sesshys one and only.... *eyes twinkl*
dayna (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
I really like this story so far. Very interesting indeed. I'm very glad that Kotone is actually nice, since I didnt think she would be, look at that surprising me at the very beginnin of the story. Hmmm as far as a threesome, im not usually into that sort of thing since i'm so used to Sessy and Kagome being on a one to one level but hey I guess I'll just leave it up to u.
Excited about the next update :)
minty710 (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
Heck YES! A threesome!!!! Male or Female, I'm always up for a threesome with Kagome!! :P Thanks for the update!!
Wonderful story! Absolutely remarkable! :D
I haven't fallen in love with a story in so long - thank you for creating such a thrilling story! Can hardle wait for the next chapter and Sesshomaru's decision.
Keep up the good work! ^_^
I am loving this!!!! I read most of your stories so it's not surprise that this one is a great as it is!!! Kagome has no idea what she's gotten herself into has she? LOL. To answer your question, I for one would not be opposed to a threesome in the story. It will definitely be different so I say have at it! Excellent writing as usual and I not so patiently wait for more!!!
candi (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
beautifully written story! I can't wait for the next installment and look forward to it. Poor KAgome though can't get a man but I hope Sesshomaru won't refuse her. Can't wait to see more ^_^
jojo661538 (Chapter 1) - Sat 12 Feb 2011
so far its a good story keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^
amy (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011
EXCELLENT START, MORE PLEASE!
Darcy (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011
Great start!I can't wait to read more!
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