This is an amazing story! The plot is so original and well crafted. It's beautifuly thought out and written.
Yowza!
After a lonnnngg week of science studies, this was a treat and reward! I absolutely LOVED every moment of this lemon.
It was sensuous and sooo romantic! Just superb and filled with such passionate eroticism.
I DID NOT want the scene to end. (Neither did Kagome and Sesshoumaru, I'm sure! LOL)
14 is the new magic number.
The kimono was a treat! I could visualize it. I could also see the dinner scene vividly as well.
Yes, I would prefer that the focus be Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I don't care about a third lover; except that these two
be the main focus. The way you write them together is so special, so vibrant with intensity and intimacy that I get drunk off the
headiness of their interplay. It's delightful. A third part would be an accessory for them, but not the main attribute.
Thank you for the highlight of the week.
Have a good weekend!
Pandora (Chapter 19) - Fri 02 Sep 2011
This story is amazing! Keep updating. :D
I'm actually an avid SessKag fan, and so i'm a bit worried about the threesome, however i've been preparing myself since your first warning. lol. Either way i think your story is sooo worth reading. :)
Forfirith (Chapter 19) - Fri 02 Sep 2011
*pants*pants* I'm off to take a shower~
You go girl! That was freaking hot >D
Threesome~threesome~
And now you'll feel the reviewrs pressure to update in a day or so ~kukuku
Can I just say that I have never read a lemon such as this one and called it beautiful! Honestly, this was not your typical lemon and I loved it!! I had to stop reading from time to time to catch MY breath lol. Beautifully written! You definitely captured the erotic sensation that both Kagome and Sesshomaru were feeling; GREAT JOB! Also, well worth the wait :D
I cannot wait for the third party introduction and I'm guessing from here on in, things are only going to get much more interesting and naughtier >D
Keep up the great work! :)
I see what you did with the scar dar, herp derp |D! /yayforobservantreader. Oh and awesome chapter, as always!
janjan (Chapter 19) - Fri 02 Sep 2011
Awesome love scene!!! was very sweet how you made it so he slowly introduced her into it! I would personally prefer just kagome and sesshomaru but will probably read it regardless! let us know what you decide!
cant wait for next chapter! and thanks for the quick update!
Reader in Disguise (Chapter 19) - Fri 02 Sep 2011
Lemons are supposed to be citrus & honey, pain and pleasure, and a hard softness that will make you feel as if you were soaring high in clouds while falling into the deepest chamber of this earth.
You have managed to craft a wonderful scene for their first encounter, and it was everything I could have hoped for. You managed to bring everything together in the most elegant, yet vivid way for all of us to feel at times as if we were there!
BRAVO!
Beatifully written dear. It was an elegant lemon. Loved the imagery you painted with your words. Great Job!
D (Chapter 19) - Thu 01 Sep 2011
D (Chapter 19) - Thu 01 Sep 2011
Oh wow. Where's a cigarette....oh yeah. I don't smoke. Phew. Beautifully simple yet a very erotic dance.
No...I would prefer the story as is, no sequel with a love interest. Although, I was hoping that Kagome would be concubine-turned-mate?
Giannix (Chapter 19) - Thu 01 Sep 2011
I absolutely loved ittttttttttt :D :D sesshoumaru always as the passionate lover he is :D!!!
Breezies (Chapter 18) - Wed 31 Aug 2011
I have to say that it is kind of difficult to review with college up and going again, but I just couldn't help but to check if you had updated this and I just about squealed my roomate's ea off when I saw that it was.
I also have to say that I love the pace of the story and the style that you use. I LOVE this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter and the one after that. You're very descriptive, but not overly so that it turns the reader away from what you're describing. It's like there's a movie going through my head with each word and it's amazing.
You also keep the characters true to themselves which is amazing considering the differences from the actual story line and the actions and words of characters, they just seem true to what they would say and do in these types of situations. It's a breath of fresh air, I assure you that!
Thank you for this chapter! I'm eagerly awaiting the next!
SesshouBabe (Chapter 18) - Tue 30 Aug 2011
Absolutely addicted to this story, read it twice just to take up time between reviews, PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING!!!
Loveyaa (Chapter 18) - Mon 29 Aug 2011
The last few chapters have been magnificent. The emotion that you have put into the characters that do interact with each other is quite enchanting. I still giggle just a little when Kagome falls asleep right away after having spent herself. the intimacy that is already there between Sesshoumaru and Kagome is slowly growing and I can't wait. Nothing like Sesshoumaru for your first kiss and then him promising you that you will not only experience pleasure but that you won't be a disappointment in the giving of it. I am super duper excited to find out what happens next and more to see how the slow passion works out between them. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Animesakuralion (Chapter 18) - Sat 27 Aug 2011
I started reading your story on fanfiction but I noticed you had another version and wanted to investigate it. Please upate soon! I love the way you are developing this story and your writing skills are at a very high level in my opinion. I hope to see a new chapter from you soon because I am on the edge of my seat to see where your plot bunnies are going to go!
Treece (Chapter 18) - Fri 26 Aug 2011
It was a great chapter. My favorite scene was the kiss, of course. I loved the build up of the kiss; it was pure sensuality. The lemon will be explosive, no doubt. Thanks for the update!
Its definitely because school has started. Believe me schol has been killer. :P But i still read when I can!'As effin always you did a perfect job! Sessho's so sweet to Kaome! And I absolutely adore Kotono!
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