Oh dear, Minoru could have worded that less... suggestively, couldn't he?
Sucks about your computer, though. :<
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Sesshoumaru and Pedobear in the same sentence broke my brain. Zomygosh!
:faceplants: Great job, Menaru. Great job. Now Kagome's thinking what YOU were.
Good luck with your laptop!
Thanks for writing.
PEDOBEAR!
XD
I got soda in my NOSE! That hurt far too much.
I am glad you've managed to retrieve what you needed, and I won't lie, this update makes me incredibly happy. So good to see you again! *glomps*
Good gravy, I've missed this story! And you too, of course, my dear, darling naq! *grin*
Anyway, I'm glad that you managed to get a chapter out today! You're still doing a marvelous job, and I absolutely love Minoru.
Keep up the great work!
~Aubrey
p.s. - Pedobear? *gigglesnort*
*Gasping* Can't...breathe... That was hilarious!
He just made his Lord seem pedo.... sooooo gonna die for that one. :P Glad your back! Can't wait for more!
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Oh this is gonna be good.
And uh...Do I see a, what is that, a catastrophe on the horizon?
I think I do.
I can't begin to tell you how much I laughed in this chapter, and also how happy it made me. Kagome never gets to be normal, and it's good to know she finds the spot and appreciates it.
I can tell you'te a little out of practice with multi-POV. Everything was understandable and clear, though. The only part that seemed awkward to me was: "Mutely, he shook his head. Secretly thankful that Shippou..." That shift from Minoru to Kagome. At first, it seems like it's continuing with Minoru. Not sure how you would fix that.
Your POV is doing JUST FINE. Relax. Deep breathing. And just let it flow. And flow, it does! I can hardly wait to see what happens when/if Minoru deigns to inform 'Yasha that his brother doesn't even KNOW. That should be a good one... along with Kags and her undying compassion for those small & helpless, 'Yasha is about to find himself royally... well... screwed. LMAO!
;D
~~me~~
I love Kagome! This chapter was fantastic! Yes Inuyasha is hot but his grooming habits are less than appropriate...
Kagome sounds like a teenager. How wonderful!
With that realization, how can I not laugh? I LOVE your take on how she fell out of love with Inuyasha! Another fantastic chapter!
I LOVED THIS!!!
Seriously Naq. I woke up grumpy, and now I am not grumpy. In fact, I'm chortling. Thank you sosososososososososooooooooooo much for writing this chapter. I can't pick a favorite part, there's so much I love in it.
Cotton candy....
pfft...
BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
What do I think? Why, I think you're brilliant! But it's only Thursday and there are two more days in this week for you to further stun us with your greater brilliance, sparkling wit and creativity! I await with bated breath.
omg lol, i cant stop laughing at the 'from person to person to weenie to person..' part lol and that fact that this is how her 1st love dies lol. this is just about the BEST chapter i have ever read in my life!! lol :D
That was... actually a little disturbing. I guess the way Kagome went into Really Weird Thoughts about what she probably should not have seen of Inuyasha.
Loved how she broke the silence though. Priceless. The eagle's reaction to that should be epic.
Thanks for not leaving Shippou and Rin out of the run-down. Many authors tend to forget when the little guys are around.
Thanks for writing~!
Oh this was great! I cringed, chuckled, laughed and by the Disney bit just about had tears in my eyes. Great use of the prompt too!
Oh sweet mother of us all...that was hilarious!! I loved it!
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