lol finally!!! Oh my... Now I really want to know that guy, but you are going to introduce him... :D I'm so curious!!
lol why does Rin think, that it was her fault?? Did she do something wrong? Well, at least, Kagome is not alone there... :D
Very cute chapter!! Luv it!! PLS, update soon! ;D
cheers
Nyuka (Chapter 55) - Thu 26 May 2011
WHAT!!!!! come on...i needs more I can feel a burning inside that is not being quenched....oh how it hurts....must have more...hehe ty for updating
Nyuka
AmoraLynn (Chapter 55) - Wed 25 May 2011
So I've read Bride of the Water God, is Akuma your version of Hyunwon? :) Great story so far!
Elle (Chapter 55) - Wed 25 May 2011
I loved the latest chapter--here, Sesshoumaru seems so sweet...
Hm... I hope that things will go well.
Update soon!
Too sweet, though he's protecting her i wish he'd explain! But if there's a fight oh well, he always looks awesome tearing up someone's behind. Poor Rin, i really think he's death now if he'd be the end of Kagome. I'm glad your explaining next time because the suspence was ruining my nails.
Nyuka (Chapter 54) - Mon 23 May 2011
To the moon away...XD...I love the little love thing with his brother and Rin..the small smile is all it takes....XD...so whats witht this new guy that want to kill Kagome and whats his problem...maybe be he is death and refuses to lose his grip on a mortal...bwhahaha...wait no didn't they hook death up with life...XD....anyway thanks for the up date....Nyuka
Itoe (Chapter 54) - Sun 22 May 2011
Thank you, dear. :D But you're the amazing one! :D
A beautiful chapter, again. :D And a visit to the moon? So romantic... :D So cute of Kagome, that she did not want to leave him...
But I am still curious about this Akuma guy... :D
cheers
Elle (Chapter 54) - Sun 22 May 2011
Indeed, it's amazing that you've updated so much in such a short period of time...
I only just read your two latest chapters, but, like always, I loved them... :3
Update soon!
Elle (Chapter 53) - Sun 22 May 2011
Akuma?!?!
:O
That was unexpected... I don't want for Sesshoumaru and Kagome to be separated again!!
And-and... what happened with Rin and Kagutsuchi's relationship?
Wow...I never expected a new chapter this quick! You are awesome!
You had me on the edge of my seat trying to imagine what's going to happen! Who exactly is Akuma? Why does Sesshoumaru fear so much for Kagome? Love the mystery...Can't wait to see what's going to happen next.....*wink*
Sunset Senshii (Chapter 54) - Sun 22 May 2011
How awesome of an author are you for posting twice in ONE day woot woot amazing. Anyways, this almost made me tear up. Poor Kagome :( I hope they find a solution to this problem and I hope they find it fast. I would hate to see Sesshomaru and her seperated again but it is what happens and we can't do a thing about it. Love the story and still await another chapter. I wonder if the up coming epidemic will bring the two feuding brothers together as one..... woah won't that be a thrill right there?
Still confused, what is he? Death with a grudge? Can't believe there are going to be palaces on the moon in here like in Bride of the Water God. Still curious as to how this Akuma is a danger to Kagome. Please update soon so that it's revealed why.
Sunset Senshii (Chapter 53) - Sat 21 May 2011
Wahhh Kagome's going to be taken away again?! Whyyyy! Anyways another awesome chapter that has me wanting more. I can literally feel the emotions coming off in waves from them. And Rin, even though a godess and bot Sesshomaru's 'daughter', still possesses that child like trait and I love it. You keep everyone in place and that's great. I love your storyu and will continue to wait for the next installment of this amazing fanfic.
Itoe (Chapter 53) - Sat 21 May 2011
Akuma? Who's that? ughh... very interesting!! :D
Ohhh how cute!! Sesshomaru is working on Kagomes hairs...:D I loved especially that part... :D
cheers
Who's Akuma or am i being an idiot and getting my OC characters mixed up in my head from reaading too many fanfictions at once. Anyway the comfortable moment between two loving people was ruined, why must this keep happening? I hope you update soon please.
Aw too cute, even though he's bad ass he likes her, just playing hard to get. I advise her to flirt with someone else in his presence hahaha.
Sunset Senshii (Chapter 52) - Sat 21 May 2011
Read all those chapters in one day! All amazing, all nothing less of wondorous and nothing below genius. I love your story! Can NOT wait for an update. Your an amazing author!
Sunset Senshii (Chapter 46) - Sat 21 May 2011
I was itching to write a review for all the other chapters but held back so I could give you a very long one but this....this...this chapter it was my breaking point. Your story is amazing, your characters beautiful, and because of how interesting this story is I will be buying the books/mangas wherever I can find them. Creative, well thought out, and an all out amazing story. I love it! And plus the people who make the fanart helps me envision what they look like a bit more. Amazing. No other words to define it as.
Ashes (Chapter 52) - Sat 21 May 2011
Fantastic! I absolutely love this story, it spawns so much emotion.
Elle (Chapter 51) - Sat 21 May 2011
You mentioned me in an author's note at the top of this chapter and I haven't even read it until now! :O
I'm glad to see more of story and how it's developing; Rin is so adorable...
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