i love you. keep going (with all your stories) your wonderful. i never really get the urge to review stories unless i really  like them and the author writing them. your just great i love your charaterization, i think you do really well. so plz keep updating.your one of the reasons i love fanfic.with that all said i thank you for your amazing reading material. ;)

Oh thats not fare she is mortal Akuma shouldn't be able to possess her too...maybe THAT is what was killing her -.- .  To be honest I believe that your enjoying killing her off...Hehehe your almost as cinical as I feel alot of the time...lol

Nyuka

As I read this, I was drawn in and then it ended and I scrolled the page up and then back down like that would make more words appear.  So I can't wait to see what happens next.

Omg, did Akuma take Kagome's soul? Anyways, I just wanted say great update, and I looked forward towards the next chapter. ^^

Wonderful. I am so sad for our couple though. Will they never have the chance for happiness before it is time for cruel fate to rear it's ugly head? Such a sinister creature that Akuma.

It was a pleasant surprise to see a chapter so quick

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Alpine ^_^

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH! Akuma, that bastard! He needs to pay for what he's doing to her. More please.

Looks like things have gone from bad to worse. I can't see this ending well and yet all I hope is that it does. Thanks to you for the shoutout. The fact that you can keep my interest means that you are doing a splendid job and deserve all the reviews speaking of great things. I hope that Sesshoumaru and Kagome's love does conquer all and it doesn't end in tragedy. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I just wanted to thank you for posting such a lovely story. It takes guts to put something like this in front of strangers, especially when you are uneasy about the reception. Let me tell you however, that you really have nothing to fear. This is a beautiful adaptation of a gorgeous work and it does you great credit that you are able to stay close enough to keep the style but far enough to have your own story and characaters. Again, well done on all counts and thank you so much for sharing this with the world. 

AWESOME JOB~~~!!!!! ^O^

Hopefully you haven't been too shaken to not continue. It seems like you have your feet back under you and are on a role with the chapters. I wonder if they will be able to find out what is happening to Kagome in time so that they can stop it or if Sesshoumaru will be able to be convinced to go through with the transformation. This seems like quite the perilous time, esp with Akuma still on the loose. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Love the story. It's fresh. I have just run across it and finished reading it up in a day. I look forward to an update. I hope you do not give up hope that it is still being read.

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Alpine ^_^

OMG!!! Such a nerve-wrecking cliffie! I'm really enjoying this story and the twists you've put into it to distinguish it from "The Bride of the Water God". I really love your descriptions, and how they make me imagine things so vividly. Congrats on a great story, and I can't wait for the next update! Well...I CAN seeing as I have no choice, lol, but I do hope that you update soon! 

Oh, no! I wonder how Kagome will survive this one!!! It's so sad!! I love it!

Please update soon! I can't wait to know what happens next!

Well I am glad after that it wasn't the Kaguya to whom you've introduced us who hurt Kagome. I am curious how you intend to get them all out of this.

Thanks for writing.

oh wow. You have me on pins and needles!

Poor Kagome, she and Sesshomaru don't need this dumped on them! They should find Akuma and kick his ass.

Yah, don't get depressed about this because your not getting the feedback you want, write this because you want too not because that people are giving you really good feedback, i did it once and i will never do it again. Anywhoo, forget the haters and write this story, way better than Bride of the water God and i want you to keep on continuing.

If she dies I'll be heart broken :/ I'm going to feel so bad for Sesshomaru. TELL ME SHE SURVIVES PLEASEEEEE! And thanks for the wonderful update.

P.S. I was right about Tsukuyomi and Inuyasha wasn't I ...hehe funny they arn't brothers in this fic but I guess it don't really matter.....XD

AAaaaaa she is dying save her already you don't have time to waist!!!!  I wonder if she would remain blind if she where changed right then and there....would be strange no?  What would she have to rule over is she was a goddess any how isn't not like she can be a goddess of nothing....will she even live long enough to find out?  Oh  Thankyou for updating BWY...

Nyuka